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The Happy Dementor
I love feedback so oh please oh please oh...

you know what? you've heard it all before. I really do love feedback its why I write. Yeah I am sad laugh about it when I am not this close '-' to death by sleep deprivation. If you do leave any I will give you a hundred points which you can exchange when you die for a heaven pass if you haven't lead the perfect life. biggrin.gif You need a thousand points so comment lots. XD

Thanks tongue.gif ,
gotta sleep now dry.gif ,
Em
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The Flaw in the Plan (Different POV)
lisasnape
Em, that was fantastic! I had never even considered that part of the story from another point of view. You did an incredible job describing the pain and despair that Ginny was feeling. I felt a rush of pride as Neville shouted "Dumbledore's Army" and I got goosebumps when Harry reveled himself at the end! It was almost like reading DH all over again. Thank you so much for writing that. It was truly brilliant! thumbsup.gif

Lisa
Joey Ravenclaw
Emma, that was simply amazing! It was so descriptive and well thought out. Seeing that in Ginny's point of view was really good as well. You're an excellent writer and I hope you write more stories smile.gif

Do I get 100 points now? tongue.gif
The Happy Dementor
Yay! Thank you you two! Of course you get 100 points here ya go! *gives Joe 100 points for his free pass to heaven*
MoonFighter
I loved it :| And I cried shy.gif
It was wonderful; seeing this scene from Ginny's point of view was wonderful and heartbreaking. It felt so real like I was there and saw everything...felt everything. God, you're really good and I'm glad I've read your one-shot wub.gif I still got goosebumps laugh.gif

Congrats~ hug.gif
The Happy Dementor
Aww thanks hun. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Goosebumps give me goosebums. laugh.gif I know that makes no sense but it is so true.

Luv ya,
em
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DoubleD
Hm, I didn't cry, but I am actually shivering (not only because it's cold in my room). That story was absolutely wonderful! I can't spot anything that could be improved. I think you actually made JKR look bad. I'll just spent the rest of the day like this: ohmy.gif
The Happy Dementor
omg, no way am i nearlyu as good as JKR but it is such a complitment you made me all dizzy. Thanks a load. XD. I didn't expect tears so feel free to use up your extra kleenexs on something like mopping up spiplt milk. tongue.gif mmmm, milky.

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