This is for my story Half Alive, this is my first fanfic so please don't be too harsh, but otherwise let me have it! Please be constructive too.

Thanks, Pauly

I though that was really well written. It was really dark and it kind of gave me chills. It almost made me think they hlost the battle even though i know that they dont. I dont really have any critiques. It was really cool and i liked it alot

Thank so much. This is my very first Harry Potter Fan Fiction, and I was worried people were going to be mad it was a little vague.

Hi Pauly,

I really liked your one-shot. It was so expressive and emotional. I'm not sure who's point of view it's from and I don't even care. It could have been Ron, Hermione, Neville, Luna or any other student, teacher, member of the order, etc., but you let the reader choose who they thought might be narrating the story. That was really brilliant!

Lisa

Thank you so much. I was trying to go for the feel of having it be very vague, because there were thousands of soldier