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Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Please leave feedback here for my one-shot 'Hatred is Born'. It's my own personal take on the moment Lucius Malfoy and Arthur Weasley officially met. I hope you enjoyed it!

Elllie
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lisasnape
Ellie, that was absolutely, positively terrific! You have an incredible imagination and a very pleasing writing style. You're very talented. I loved the confrontation between Arthur and Lucius; it was exactly the way I would have imagined them behaving when they were students. And you used one of my favorite words: sycophantic! Love that word! biggrin.gif Then the way you had Slughorn referring to Arthur by every name but his own was hilarious! laugh.gif Spot on!

Lisa
snape_rox_my_socks
there's not much else i can add, lisasnape's said it all! I love everything about that fic, and it's great the way that Slughorn believes Malfoy and not Arthur because Malfoy's a member of the Slug club.

Lottie
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Alastorlet_and_Proud!
lisasnape - Thank you so much for your feedback! It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside!It's great to know that I got it right. Thank you, thank you and thank you again. And sycophantic is an awesome word biggrin.gif .

snape_rox_my_socks - Thank you biggrin.gif biggrin.gif ! You know how much I love getting feedback, and I'm just glad you liked it!

Ellie
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