Please leave feedback here for my one-shot 'Hatred is Born'. It's my own personal take on the moment Lucius Malfoy and Arthur Weasley officially met. I hope you enjoyed it!
Elllie xxx
lisasnape
Aug 30 2009, 05:28 AM
Ellie, that was absolutely, positively terrific! You have an incredible imagination and a very pleasing writing style. You're very talented. I loved the confrontation between Arthur and Lucius; it was exactly the way I would have imagined them behaving when they were students. And you used one of my favorite words: sycophantic! Love that word! Then the way you had Slughorn referring to Arthur by every name but his own was hilarious! Spot on!
Lisa
snape_rox_my_socks
Aug 30 2009, 05:53 PM
there's not much else i can add, lisasnape's said it all! I love everything about that fic, and it's great the way that Slughorn believes Malfoy and not Arthur because Malfoy's a member of the Slug club.
Lottie xxx
Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Aug 31 2009, 06:53 PM
lisasnape - Thank you so much for your feedback! It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside!It's great to know that I got it right. Thank you, thank you and thank you again. And sycophantic is an awesome word .
snape_rox_my_socks - Thank you ! You know how much I love getting feedback, and I'm just glad you liked it!
Ellie xxx
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