Feedback for my second fan-fic. It can be found here Please write what you thought. (I don't care if it's saying it's no good, just speak your mind.)

Aaron, that story was really really, good-makes Demented look terrible! The events leading up to Sandra's death (?) was amazing, I loved it soo much and cannot wait for Chapter Two Happy writings

Am I hearing Demented and terrible in the same sentence? Demented was brilliant, especially for a first fan-fic!

Thanks Aaron. And I see I'm the only feedbacker. Well, doesn't mean I'm the only one. Your story has a lot of views, and as it should, your story is really excellent! I love how the description is written. You'll be happy to know story-writing is a section in English in secondary school.
Keep writing Aaron, you are a fantastic writer

~Joey