Ok, this is the feedback thread for The Beginning-where my made up characters in Harry's year start their first year of Hogwarts. The fanfiction can be found here

That was a good tie-in, Joey. It could have been added to the end of Demented when you were finished as a sort of Prelogue thing. But it was good. The only thing was where were the other characters? Like Caomhie and Rachel's characters? Ah Well. Good story.

this fanfic is at a really good start! i was sorta shocked that you didn't add anything harry potter-wise in the sorting, ari would have known his legend, but hey it's still a really good story. i can't wait for the next chapter!
happy writing(: