Hi, everyone! This is the feedback topic for the one-shot Happy Black Birthday!
I'm waiting for your opinions or suggestions on the story. If I have mistakes, please do correct me and explain why in the same time ^^ [I'm still studying English]
With these said, feel free to post here~ I'm all ears! [in this case, eyes ]

Thanks and happy reading *hugs*

Hope there isn't a problem if this topic is for the feedback of all my one-shots ^^. Therefore, here's my other one-shot ~ A Grimmauld House Moment
This time it's about Ron and Hermione and I've tried to keep their personalities as much as possible. I hope [and think xP] I've succeeded it, but for this I need your opinions

So, feel free to express yourself~ <3
Thanks

Aw wow that was great! I really love how you characterised Sirius - compassionate yet fun-loving and a dare-devil
And don't worry about the language! You did great! The language you used really helped the reader identify with the characters intimately. Also, you have a wonderful vocabulary for someone whose first language is not english^^

And now I really want to read more of your fan-fics^^

Big hugs

Yay Me is so happy to see you here <333
I'm glad that you like it, I was really nervous about this one-shot, I tend to get very pessimistic sometimes And after I read your reply, I can't stop grinning (out of my mind )
And I'm glad that I managed to convey the feelings the characters were trying, although in my excitement to write this, I was just being them. I would've developed more but I thought that less is more ^^. Guess it was right to do so

As for the language, I'm more scared of the grammar thing. I tend to be a wreck when it comes to this and also my English teachers told me that I do have problems there; though it's more like the simple things I mistake xD But I've managed to enter a college with an English based-profile, so I hope I'll improve

Thanks a lot for you reply It made me really happy!!
I'll try to write more and hope you'll like them as well

Lots of huuggies


PS: I'm waiting anxiously for your new chapter at Dog Star

Here's another one-shot from me~ My little fury love

Hope you liked it ^^.