Hello all! This is the feebdack thread for the Siriusly Devoted Padfoot Guild collaberated fanfic Sirius: A Halloween Adventure. Feel free to contribute to the story but please remember to include the link to the fanfic in your signature! Happy reading and happy writing!

Yippee, I'm the first to leave feedback! I love collaborative fanfics and chapter one is the perfect start. I love, love, love the quasi romance you've set up between Lily and Sirius. It's so...forbidden! But it's a great twist and I can't wait to see what the next writer will do with it! So exciting!

Lisa

Yes!!! the guild is back on!! unfourtantly i have no talent what so ever in the category of writing so i will not be able to have the honor of helping to write the story but i will always be here to support all of our amazing writers and will put a link on the story and i will always be here to read your stories and comment. Love you all. good luck in writing!!


Isla

OMG! O.O Sirius kissed Lily!! I feel...wow...happy? Though I'm all for James x Lily, Sirius x Lily wouldn't mind me ^^.
It was so cute to read it <333 It felt quivering... You know, I kinda suspected that Sirius thought more of Lily than he showed, but in respect for his friend, he suppressed his own desires. I'm really glad you decided to do this kind of story <333 I wonder what'll come next, as I saw it's a collaborative fanfic (I might even join, just to get some time on my hand ^^)

Congrats for the idea

Charlie! I'm so sorry I didn't read this sooner... This is a great start and I'll be posting a chapter today! Hopefully others will take part as well. Come on folks, join in whether you're a writer or not! It's fun... I promise...

Hugs,
~Dayna

Great new chapter, Dayna! That Sirius Black is handsome and he knows it! Poor Severus and his greasy hair though. I really liked the pang of guilt that Sirius felt at the mention of Lily's name. Spot on!

I sincerely hope some other members add a chapter. This is shaping up to be quite a love triangle!

Lisa

Yes, Lisa, yes he is.

I'm glad you posted a feedback. I wanted to post feedback on your chapter, but I felt a little awkward having to posts in a row.

Anyway, I LOVED your bit. After I read Charlie's I wanted to write a chapter, but I had no idea where to take it. Your bit help pull me over the hump so I could write.

I especially loved your part about Sirius at breakfast. That poor girl didn't know what to think about the surly Sirius Black.

*Stands on desk with arms spread open* Come on people! Give us your best shot!

*steps down and takes a seat*


Hugs,
~Dayna