This is sooo good. I don't know what to say. I have all sorts of little half-formed theories jumping around in my head now. Snape's necklace... and Shacklebolt is with the Death Eaters... and the old man with the blue eyes. I can't even think about it all, I'm so excited ! I think maybe I'll comment again when I've had time to contemplate.

xoxo'
Meg

ps - I hope your daughter feels better! Good luck - my thoughts are with you.

At first I had to laugh when I read about the new orange cloaks, but that laugh disappeared as fast as it appeared

"Against all odds"-> this was Snape I like! and you've made him be with Lily A great chapter, I liked it very much and I like the creation of Finja's personality.... such a great, warm, woman. I'm just wondering if it isn't misleading

Hello, Flutterflie!

First priorities first, my prayers will be with you and your babe as she undergoes her surgery. I was pleased to hear you can stay overnight with her, it will provide the comfort she will need for a speedy recovery. As you said, in three hours time from waking, she can be playing about and driving the nurses, bonkers.....*smile* Children are so resilient. She will do great, better than mom will be with frayed nerves, I am sure. *hugs*

I only just read the second half to Save the Last Dance and the Love Scene and already spoiled to Man of Steel! I feel like today is my birthday!

Oooh....

It's a strange twist of character to feel such desparation and dread in Snape. I do like it. It allows for the readers to know he is actually human after all. He is fearful of the water-scry image of her dying and he knows this time if it is real, she will not come back. How truly very sad....His anguish is so surreal. Makes one feel more for Snape than for Harry and his upcoming final showdown. It's a lovely parallel to the story based soley through Harry.....it allows for us to get a more personel view of other characters, but especially of Snape and your lovely Flutterflie.

Hmm....the Orange and Gold robes.....how funny....to think of Snape in color....

Okay, I told you I'd give you a nice long post when I was all caught up, but I warn you, its midnight and my mind's not working quite as well as it should. Sigh...I'm afraid you're just going to have to spell out the Snape/Flutterflie relationship because I just don't get it. I know you were trying to make us all believe they were brother and sister, but thats just not what I'm reading between the lines. Maybe she and Snape just have to pretend to be brother and sister, that would explain the sarcasm in her voice when she says "dear brother" in Hogsmeade. But why would they need to do that?


Flutterflie is promised to someone....to whom? And is that who she was with that night? And is that person the father of the baby? Or was it Snape? Or Sirius? Because I can't imagine Bill and Fleur's child with black hair.

And I take it Snape is an Animagus, but why? For how long? Are Beelzy and Nagini somehow connected, or will they be?

What is Harry not ready for? His big showdown with Volders? Occlumency?

Kingsley Shackelbolt--a death eater! Say it ain't so!

Was that Dumbledore? If so, he must have one heck of a plan up his sleeve, to justify killing the Weasleys.

Why is Snape betraying everyone? Does that mean he's not on our side after all? What is he doing that would make him hate himself so much that he can't refuse to do?

I don't get it. My brain hurts.....

Still lots of funny stuff, though I can't remember it all now. You write Snape's sense of humor really well though. I'm looking forwrd to figuring all this out, and I hope your daughter has a speedy recovery! God Bless You both!
--Elizabeth

First off i hope your daughter feels better, I'm sure everything will work out.

Ok im confused *nothing new really*. So Snape is bad, and so is Kingsley? or are they good and im missing the whole point? As for the new robes, *ha ha ha* where cani order a pair. Draco is such a brat... *lol* and kingsley is a double agaent... interesting.

SO he is betraying Finja, and is she pregnant? with sirius's baby? and they are going to kill Sirius? oh my, im so lost.

I liked the comic relief, im sitting here in my college library laughing, people are staring at me funny. This was a good chapter, i was so into it. hmmm... i can't wait to see what happens, but i will patiently wait.... other things take priority.

Hey Flutters!

[I am sorry to hear about your daughter. I am sure that everything will go well. You have my best wishes at heart. ]

Now about the chapter. I haven't been around for a while so forgive me if I post something someone else has already posted. It was great. Really. First of all i want to congratulate you on the new robes.: Bravo! I love it. I think that it really brings out the color. LoL! Orange and Gold. Simple yet so Great! YAY! Very cool of you. I've always wanted a new robe color.

Anyway overall, the chapter was great. Alot of fastpacing things. It really got my mind working up theories of what was going to happen next. And of course I was proved wrong when I finally got to what you wrote really. Great chapter and I have no doubt in my mind that the next one will be even greater!!! Please post soon!!

-Pheonix

Wow, just finished reading the new chapter! Wonderful! The orange and gold reminded me of the Chuddley Cannons, what an ironic twist! Yes, actually, I did read the chapter preceeding this one, and it was extremely tasteful and romantic. This new chapter has, of course, raised tons of new questions, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
Also, my prayers are with you and your daughter. I'm sure this is a very difficult time for you, but always remember that all of us here give you our best wishes!
Cheers

well i certainly haven't read this story for a while!
sorry to hear that your daughters in hospital by. I give her my hope and wishes!
this story is just getting more and more interesting. i can't believe they have orange robes! i hate that colour!
I'm eger to hear more about Lily and Snape, I'm looking forward to hearing the whole story.
the baby is still on my mind though!
write soon!

Well these were good chapters, a little confusing in spots but I think I have managed to piece some of it together.

In save the last dance I liked the scene with Harry and Snape. I can just see the final show down with Voldemort. "Potter your mind is like an open book!", "But Voldemort, I did not say ready, set, go. You cheated!!" Harry needs to realize Occulmency is a 24/7 defense. No one is going to give him warning to empty his mind. The Yule Ball type scene was nice. I know Severus and Finja are brother/sister but I am starting to wonder also about their relationship. It seems much more intense than siblings but maybe that is just an American hang up with me. With Sev & Lily splitting up over Finja's jealousy, I am really wondering about the relationship.

I think I am going to reserve judgement on part three until I see who the two are. It was very well written I just do not know what to make of it. My best guess is that it was Finja and Sirius but that somehow that does not quite fit with Finja's reactions to him earlier.

The Man of Steel chapter was good. Draco has taken his place as the butler for the Death Eaters. I do not like Kingsley being bad. That just does not fit with his personality. I hope he is there to spy on Voldemort for the order. Poor Mrs. Weasley. If she looses Arthur and Bill at the same time she will have a mental breakdown. I hope Kingsley warns them and their deaths are prevented.

It took me a while to figure out what was going on in the end with the old man but I think I have it. I do not believe there was anyone else in the room with Snape. I think Severus has been so tortured over the years his mind has split into multiple personalities. What we were seeing was Snape's personalities wrestling for control of his mind. So how is this? Am I close or have I gone off the deep end with my analysis?

I hope things went well with your daughter. Update us when you can but do not rush. She is much more important.

Greg

Okay, okay, I am back. *wave*
And thanks for your replies! Made my day. *twinkle*
The little one is doing good. The doctor figured he could send us home when he saw us Rock'n'Rolling through the room this morning. *lol*
Some girls will, some girls won't, some girls need a lot of loving and some girls don't... Hehe. So that's that. I have about four pages sketched - the rest of "men of steel". Not done yet. I aim for tomorrow night, JoP is running over it with me now. *lol*

Hope to finally rid some of your questions, hehe. You will be able to figure out who spent the night with Fin. Yay. Just add one and one, and if you get three, you might be going the right direction.

@gaburdette: Hey, I already PMed you. *lol* You are just so way off I was shocked. Hehe. Usually you are as close as you can get. Hm. What's up? *lol*
Confusing spots? Which ones?
Hehe, the Voldemort/Harry scene you mentioned... *laugh* I was actually thinking about writing such a scene. *lol* Now I can't...
About Kingsley... we'll have to see... *twinkle*
And Snape going mental? I don't think so. I like your second theorie (the one you PMed me) much better. Hehe.

@sphinx: I feel bad you hate orange. But, you have to admit, I could have done worse. I mean, I am actually forcing my man into painting his table top armee pink camouflage. So talk about orange... *lol* So you want to hear about Snape and Lily? Hm... will be a while until we get there, I guess... but hold the line. And the baby... oh, I am glad somebody remembers the baby. I fear it won't be mentioned again, but still it is important. Sounds weird? Well, you will figure out in the end...

@Ginevra Potter: Ah, glad you liked my bed scene... more to come... *lol* Featuring the same people, I guess. Hehe. Tons of new questions? Well, I certainly hope so! And - I promise - lots of questions will be answered in the next part.

@phoenix2fire: Hehe, I think I should start handing out those robes, now that you guys founded an "Orange Death Eater Fan Club". *lol*
Well, I know you will be surprise what happens once they put them on... *foreshadow*

@keepstar1331: Hm, yes, you definitely are lost. *lol* Nobody wants to kill Sirius. Neither is Finja pregnant with Sirius' Baby. You will find out why. Soon. Tomorrow.

@FawkeysLady: Hey, I don't have to spell out anything - you are so close. Not gonna say anything more, though. Hehe. Yes, your questions are great. They will lead you the way to the answers.
Good you didn't buy it was Fleur's child. *lol*
I never thought about Fleur being blonde and Bill red.. yes, it is not Fleur's baby. But it was an example only. Good you bring the engagement up again - the question will be answered in the next installment. And Dumbledore sending Snape to kill someone? Nah, I don't think so...

@JoP: Hehe, I just love it when you say you are stumped. *lol* You always have so much more information than anybody else, but still you are stumped. Hehe. I love teasing you...
But I agree with you: Dumbles would not do such thing. And Kingsley a Death Eater? Hm, sounds weird, doesn't it? And he enjoyed his work for the Prime Minister immensely. So now he turns around and stick with the DE? Hm... you might want to watch out for him. Hehe.

@bubotubber_pus: Yes, you are right. Everybody thinks Flutterflie is some kind of supergirl. But she s not. She has a major flaw. If Snape tells her he will go through hell tonight, she will take his hand and follow him - and I don't know if that'll do her any good...

@Krieltje: Yes, you made a pretty good guess. The Weasleys are Snape's next target. I won't keep it a secret. Why? Well, you will see...

@Meggie: Yeah, let me hear about you necklace-theory! I will be glad to hear it! I already told you it was very important.

Okay, I promise I will catch up on any of your fics tomorrow, probably when the child is napping. And I will put the next installment up within the next 24 hours. You will be amazed - least I hope so...

Thank you so much for your support!!!

Flutterflie

Okay, here goes part two. I am not satisfied yet - but it'll have to do. I didn't want to do it. I didn't want to give it away just now. But, well, my twists have added up, and if I only start unraveling things in the last chapters it'll be tough to understand. So here goes.. have it. *lol* Maybe you can fear with Finja in the next chapters. Ah... Guess you know who Beelzy is now? *lol*
Okay, hope you enjoy it...

Flutters



Men of Steel (part two)


“Good morning,” Flutterflie sang as she entered the kitchen. She seemed to be floating above the ground, only her black cloak touched the floor.
Harry had never seen her like this before. He watched her as she moved around the table and piled her plate with fruit. Flutterflie still looked thin, but not like two days ago when she first entered Grimmauld Place 12. The paleness in her face was gone, and rosy cheeks matched the sparkle in her eyes. She twinkled at him as she settled in a chair next to Tonks and poured some orange juice.
“I see you started eating again,” Mrs. Weasley’s voice sounded from the back of the kitchen, where she was eagerly frying eggs.
“I have been eating all the time,” Flutterflie answered, a wide smile on her face, and started peeling a banana.
“Funny, to me it occurred as though you were only playing with your food over the last days,” came the prompt reply. Mrs. Weasley was gazing at her with interest.
“Never mind.” Flutterflie blushed.
Harry’s eyes were still fixed upon her when he felt Hermione’s elbow in his ribs.
“Fin… I mean, Professor Flutterflie?” he asked obediently.
She looked up to him and raised an eyebrow. Harry didn’t quite know how to start. He knew it would sound weird, and the adults might become suspicious when he made his request. Still it needed to be done. They had been messing about for too long.
“We were wondering… I mean… we haven’t been practising any spells over the holidays,” he said precariously, “and we wanted to ask if you could – possibly – sharpen up our shield charms.”
“Hear, hear! They voluntarily want to learn, Finja! You must be one heck of a teacher!” Tonks giggled and leaned back in her chair. Harry swallowed hard and tensely awaited Flutterflie’s reply.
She put her banana down and eyed him critically. It was a while before she started speaking.
“You know, there’s a fully trained auror,” she pointed at Tonks, “sitting right next to me and there is your former Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher, who does have superb skills in shielding charms as far as I have seen. So why do you ask me? I am not a witch…”
Harry was stunned. Of all things, he had not expected this. Flutterflie had always helped him whenever he asked her. Why was she backing off?
“Well,” he stuttered, ”you are our Defence teacher.” He gazed at Ron and Hermione for help, but they seemed to be bemused, too.
“Have you ever seen me doing wizard magic?” Flutterflie asked pouring some more juice. “Besides the accio wand thing, which was show really,” she added with a twinkle.
“But you teach us…” Ron objected.
“Well, that is true,” she slowly answered. “But to teach you I don’t necessarily need to perform it myself. I confess I have to look the spells up prior to your lessons.”
Harry could tell Hermione’s mind was racing. No wonder, she admired Flutterflie for how well she taught – and now she had learned she wasn’t even capable of casting those defensive spells herself!
This was really hard to believe, he thought. Finja had been a great teacher all along. Even Neville managed really advanced spells in the second attempt when Flutterflie was with him. And now she admitted she could not perform them herself?
“How can you correct us then?” Hermione finally asked the one thing that had bothered Harry also.
“If you want me to practise shielding with you,” Flutterflie avoided her question, “it means I will have to curse you in order to test the strength of your shields. And I will not do it!”
Lupin had been listening closely all along and it seemed he wanted to join the conversation. Yet he couldn’t bring himself to say anything, and finally Tonks spoke up.
“We can do it. If you want to practise shielding charms, Remus and I will teach you.”
“That won’t do, Nymph,” Lupin said in a low voice. “We won’t be able to cast the jinxes they want to reflect. I have seen their shielding. They are good, Harry in particular. I think they are talking about the Unforgivables…”
Mrs. Weasley turned from the stove, gasping.
“You can’t do it!” she called out desperately. “They are children! You can’t throw Unforgivables at them!”
“Slow down, Molly,” Finja sighed. “They have asked for it and they are right. I know Harry and Ginny have both been under an Unforgivable before – Remus, will you hide the firewhiskey? There are difficult times ahead. You heard Arthur. Fifty-five murders. You do not want your children to be next, right?”
“No,” Mrs. Weasley whispered, sitting down. Her hands were trembling and she grabbed the table for support. “But you can’t cast Unforgivables on them!”
“And we won’t,” Tonks stated firmly, leaving no doubt she really meant it.
“I use my magic for defence only,” Flutterflie said slowly. “But when I was a child…”
Sirius entered the kitchen and trumpeted a loud “Good morning!“ but Hermione hushed him with her hand.
“I think I know just the spell,” Flutterflie said distractedly. “Tell you what. Tonks and Remus will start off and I will cast my stunners in the end – it really drains me of energy.”
“Speaking of energy,” Sirius grinned – he obviously wasn’t in the mood to keep silent today. “You wore me out last night, Flutters! I am sore all over!”
Flutterflie pulled up an eyebrow.
“I realized you were out of practise,” she said nonchalantly and got up.
Sirius only shrugged and took a plate from a cabinet.
“Maybe you should have Snape teach you,” Harry teased his godfather.
“Excuse me?” Sirius looked thunderstruck and stopped cramming for silverware.
“Well, he didn’t step on Flutterflie’s feet…”
“Haha.”
Flutterflie walked over to him and pet his shoulder.
“Harry is right. Remedial dancing wouldn’t hurt you.”
The kitchen echoed with laughter.
“And I had thought you enjoyed it!” Sirius growled and poured himself a glass of orange juice.
“I did!” Flutterflie grinned back and took the glass from him, emptying it in one gulp.
“You’re welcome,” he shook his head and refilled it.
“Finja,” Mrs. Weasley, who had calmed down over a cup of tea and eyed them with interest, now asked, “Just how many cloaks do you own, dear?”
Flutterflie shrugged.
“About three, I think.”
“Well, I was just wondering. Because this one is far too big. And it seemed all right yesterday. I could hem it for you,” Mrs. Weasley offered and carefully seized the edge of Flutterflie’s black cloak. “Fine fabric,” she approved. “I wouldn’t be able to keep that though.” She pointed at a tiny crest with two silver serpents. “What is it?”
Flutterflie looked slightly puzzled and Sirius snatched the corner of the cloak inspecting it. As soon as he had seen the crest, he let go of it, as though it burnt his hand and straightened up.
“Just what kind of game are you playing?” he demanded heatedly.
Harry was surprised about the expression his godfather now had on his face. It seemed to be a mixture of anger and pain, and he didn’t know what to make out of it.
Flutterflie seemed to be addled, too. She cast Sirius an inquiring look, but he grabbed her arm and swung her around to face him.
“Who are your parents, Finja?” he panted. “Your real parents! I need their names!”
She kept gazing at him, shook her head slightly and then slowly answered.
“My real parents – not that I had ever denied it – were Tobias Snape and Ida Flutterflie. And I would really appreciate it if you would let go of me!”
“Ida Flutterflie?” Sirius asked unbelievingly and slowly removed his hand. “But that means…”
“Exactly.” She gave him a stern look. “I have been trying to tell you all along…”
Harry and everybody else in the kitchen was watching the two of them with interest. What was going on? What were they talking about?
“How could I be so blind?” Sirius shook his head and ran his fingers through his hair, then gazed into Flutterflie’s eyes. “I am a dead man walking, aren’t I?”
“Not at all,” she smiled. “But you should talk to him.”
Harry found she looked rather relieved, as though a heavy burden had just been taken off her shoulders. Still, he had no idea what they were talking about.
“So he has been here last night?” Sirius demanded, his hands trembling.
Flutterflie nodded and looked down. Harry had the impression she somehow felt guilty and really wanted to know what had been going on last night.
“Naturally he would be able to walk in and out of the house as he pleases.” Sirius gave a short laugh. “Father made sure of it…”
“What the hell are you talking about?” Harry finally interrupted. He had heard enough. If they needed to talk about whatever in the kitchen, they might as well tell the whole tale!
“Family,” both of them replied in the same breath.
“Finja, forgive me. I have been an idiot,” Sirius said after a while. “I should have known better. I should have… listened to you.”
“Yes, you should have,” she pulled him into an embrace. Sirius slowly backed off, but rested his hands upon her shoulders.
“Give me some time to think about it, will you?” He looked into her eyes, and Flutterflie slowly nodded. Without another word he left the kitchen.
Harry gazed at Flutterflie. She was just standing there, lost in thoughts. Everybody else remained silent and pretended to concentrate on breakfast. Harry got up and followed Sirius. He found his godfather in his room, sitting on his bed again, staring at the ceiling.
“Sirius,” Harry asked. “What is all this about? I mean… did I get that right? Flutterflie and you are related?”
“Yes… and no. It’s difficult,” Sirius sighed. “In fact,” he looked into Harry’s eyes, “she is to be my sister.”
“What do you mean?” If anything, this confused Harry even more. How could Sirius and Flutterflie possibly be siblings?
“I have been so blind! Goodness, Snape told me by the fire, didn’t he? And of course he would know! I thought he was just trying to hold me back for… for different reasons.” Sirius got up and started to pace the room.
“Sirius!” Harry demanded.
“Listen, Harry. Nobody knows. I didn’t even tell your father.” His fingers ran through his hair and he took a deep breath before he continued.
“The cloak. The one Flutters was wearing. It… oh, this is so difficult!” Sirius hit the desk with his hand.
“I knew they were close, but not that close. I feel so bad now.” He shook his head.
“There is only one person in the world who could possibly wear my father’s old cloak. And this very person is my brother.”
“Regulus?” Harry was totally lost.
“No. Regulus is dead. However, I have an older brother, too. My dear father used to remind me of him whenever I toed the line, thank you very much.”
“There’s no older brother on your family tree.”
“Yeah, well, naturally family trees don’t show children born from deceit, do they?”
Harry shook his head. So this was what Snape had been going on about when he mocked Sirius, stating his father had been eager to spread his pure-blood genes. And Flutterflie was engaged to Sirius’ brother – the understanding Snape had mentioned. He obviously hadn’t been happy about Sirius and Flutterflie spending the night. But it had seemed he was not happy about the engagement, either. He had admitted Flutterflie liked Sirius, but he had gone on in a sad voice that Flutterflie wouldn’t go back on her promise. Even if released to do so. What was going on here? Flutterflie had been more than happy in the morning. It didn’t occur to Harry she would even consider going back on her promise – given the fact the man who had been here tonight really was her fiancé. Why would her brother want her to back off? She was happy… But then again, Snape’s grudge was probably not only towards Sirius only, but against his whole family. He had never bothered to distinguish between James and Harry so far…
“So what are you going to do now?” Harry asked.
“Well, there’s not much left for me to do, right? I guess I will have to forget – not that there was much to forget about. The whole thing was rushed anyways and… well. If I had known her as well as I thought I did, I would have realized she was only trying to be my friend afterwards. She kept her distance. We were just… getting along great. And that’s okay. It was all in my imagination, wasn’t it?” Sirius sat down again and leaned against the wall, his eyes closed.
Harry remembered the day at Hogsmeade, the way Flutterflie had clung to Sirius’ arm, the way she had rested her head on his shoulders. He, too, had thought there was more than just friendship. Then he remembered her telling she had only found out about the consequences of the night with Sirius in occlumency. So that meant she hadn’t known Sirius was into her, and probably never wanted to lead him on. She had been in love with his brother all along.

I'm glad everythings fine with your daughter, and ofcourse with you too

It was a little shock to find out about the fact that Sirius is sort of related to Finja (she's his sister in law), the story definitly got a twist in it. I think I already knew who she was in love with, so that's probably the one she's engaged with. It was strange to find out that Finja doesn't know any "normal" wizarding spells, because she does teach at Hogwarts. But the explanation was clear.
So the cloak isn't the thing he left behind, they accidently took each others cloak. What could it be then? Never mind, I allready know let the others guess for theirselfs.
This is a chapter that explains a lot, but it also gives us new things to think about But the most important things are clear to me now.

Hmm..I'm going to re-read this when my daughter goes to bed, but let me see if I've got this right. There is another Black in our midsts...but one not many knew about. Obviously, Phinneus Nigellus called Sirius "the last of the Blacks" in OotP, and he's not on the family tree. So he was illegitamate. Is the mother important, or inconsequential? And why would Finja be promised to him? Were they in love or betrothed or both? (obviously, she had a erm...good time with him...) but why wouldn't they be married, and why all the secrecy? Why haven't we met this brother? Will we? Is he as handsome as his half brother? Hmmm....questions, questions. Good to see Finja happy again, though. Hope everything works out. Maybe Sirius will get a nephew/niece in the future! That would explain the look alike!

Hmm... first things first. I had forgotten about my necklace theory until you mentioned it. But I have a feeling that Flutterflie has somehow bound herself to Snape so that she will always know if he needs her, even if he doesn't want her to come. I'm going to have to think more about this now. As for the current chapter... very revealing! I understand a lot more now, and I'm excited to learn more about Sirius's brother. There are so many twists in your story, they keep me on the edge of my seat!

Guys, I am in tears...

Okay, I am not gonna say anything else now. *giggle* I am eagerly waiting for gaburdette and JoP's opinion. *lol* Maybe somebody else can also bring him/herself to comment - I'd be thrilled. *lookovertotheguyswhoconstantlyreadbutnotreply*

I thought it was clear... but you just keep on guessing. Oh, this is so like school. Hehe. Pick out some quotes and make something out of it... I honestly hope I don't scare you off now.
Everytime I try to reveal things, it seems people are even more puzzled...

So what can I say to answer your questions? Hm...
Oh, the Flutterflie/Snape-one I can answer. Yes, they are bonded. You will see soon which way it works. And it is all about protection, yes.
FawkesyLady... the last of the Black's... yes, I know. But having half-siblings myself and knowing half-siblings are not really considered family, I figured it still works. You are always second best... *sigh*
I figure the reason they are not married... hm... probably is the key to the whole story. So I can't answer now. Only that... well... *cough* the one person who messed it all up is our dear favourite former potions teacher... *cough* Guess I am not giving away anything just now... *giggle*

Hehe, honestly, ever since the movie I have trouble picturing Sirius handsome... *lol*

Hehe, and Krieltje: I am still in tears I had to spell it out for you last night. Hehe. But hush... *twinkle*
It's clear now, isn't it? I told you all along, right?
And yes, I confirm it for the others, the cloak was left behind acidentally. So maybe you want to watch out for Finja's cloak now?

Okay, in the next installment I guess I will start focusing on Harry again. Hehe, seemed a little weird within the last chapters, to stick with his point of view, but tell about somebody else instead.
Guess we'll get back on the horcrux subject. Hm... left that one behind, didn't I? *lol*

Let the good times roll!

Flutterflie

Alright, I'm caught up again now! Its clear now that Flutter and Sirius' brother were an item, and Snape had something to do with their breaking up, but it still doesn't explain why Snape is the way he is with Finja I think, for half brother and sister, its a bit weird. Oh, I just realized, if Sirius and Finja are related, does that mean she is also related to Sirius' illigitameate brother? I'm a little lost as to which side of the family all this takes place on.

Well, as you know, I have guessed one theory right, though it wont be playing out anytime soon, but I am curious as to what Snape is up to. And who is this old blue eyed man. I suspect its Dumbledore, though that would mean that Shacklebolt and Draco were probably on the side of good after all? Unless they weren't there when Dumbledore spoke to Snape? If it was Dumbledore

I'm going to stop now and hope that someone can shed a bit more light on what's happening, because I know you love to torture us by pretending you're going to clear everything up, and then you throw another spanner in the works! I'm probably way off with this last effort, but at least I tried

Very nice story!
I hope you would be a good writer

Prongs
Ridane

Flutters, I've just read the page for adults What can I say? I'm dosing the pleasure and I'll stop here to return later I don't know who was caressing who but it was smashing *drools* *sighs*

I love the way you write about an adult Snape. I have to make him a bit softer than an adult in my fanfiction, because I think the true bitterness and irony came after some incident...

Hello, Flutters!

Awe, this is driving me batty........It all fits and makes absolute sense to me. I have figured it all out. The mysterious old man, Sirius' brother, the robes even are brilliant and I understand the underlying meaning to them...(tell you on MSN)....

But I cannot hint no more with out being blatantly obvious...argh...hehe And I do not want to be a spoil sport. LOL! I have a bit of an advantage that I IM with you so much and I ask a lot of the right questions as equally as all the wrong! lol! I will quietly sit here and enjoy the read and allow everyone to come to their conclusions and finally understand. Not easy to do. hehe... But I am ever so patient.

You doing great with this entire plot. The more twists the better. You had me stumped a few times, but this last chapter was like nearing the end of the puzzle and all the pieces are fitting perfectly. I cannot wait to see if what I believe to come next will....hmm

I don't know what questions to ask, because I truly believe I understand it all. The story fits and I suspect what is to come. I think one question I still had was what was to come about the horcruxes (which your comment reminded me!) and I haven't a clue as to the task at hand to retrieve them or what they (the horcruxes) will be. Hmmm....what fantastical beasts are we going to be introduced to? Who will face grave perils to help retrieve and destroy them? Will anyone die? sigh.......

You throw a lot of elements of surprise out there and it makes the story so thrilling. Keep writing! You are doing great! I am waiting anxiously for you to stump me again! You're good at it! And then I find my way back on course with your brilliant writing of chapters that follow!

Take care!
JoP

Well things are certainly starting to make more sense. I think both Sirius and his older brother must look like their father. The child Harry saw in Flutters mind must have been hers and Sirius's older brothers. That explains why the child has Sirius's eyes.

I keep going back to the mystery old man in part 1 of the this chapter. I had just about decided it was Dumbledore but you have now introduced another mysterious person. I guess the older man from part 1 could have been Sirius's older brother but I am still leaning towards Dumbledore. He had some big plan that involved Severus and Finja so Dumbledore showing up to guide Severus would still fit.

Is Sirius's older brother both mage and wizard? Sirius seems to fear him. I would think if he was just a wizard (taken after their father) they would have been equal enough match that Sirius would not have made the comment that he was a "Dead man walking". Sirius is not one to back down and I would think he would have to know his older brother was extremely powerful to make Sirius fear him.

Now my theory is that Dumbledore arranged Finja to be betrothed to Sirius's older brother to bring him into the fight against Voldemort. Much like old kings use to do with their children to secure alliances. Dumbledore's plan also called for Finja to be sacrificed in order to stop Voldemort. This was what Finja and Severus was fighting about so many years ago. Severus was not willing to sacrifice Finja, he loved her too much.

Now we have Severus being pushed to go through with the plan by the mysterious old man. Severus is still reluctant to go along with the plan that will cost Finja her life. That is why the old man made Severus put the band back on.

Well I have obvious holes in my theory. I hope you are having fun laughing at how far off I am. I will have to await your next chapters to see how far off I am. I think I have a few things figured out but Severus and Finja's back story is still a mystery to me.

Good chapters. I am looking forward to seeing more of the adventures of Draco the Butler, washing and folding robes the Death Eater way.

Greg

Okay... *lol* I had to promise Krieltje to have somebody send my sketches to JoP if I die within the next weeks - so she could finish the fic for me. *lol*
I really appreciate it. Hehe.
So now there is part three of Men of Steel and ther will be part four - somehow my chapters get novel-size. Uh...

Have fun!


Men of Steel (part three)


They had gathered around the saloon and even Mr. Weasley had come to watch. Tonks moved furniture out of the way with a single wave of her wand, and Lupin asked Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny to line up.
“Only simple spells for warm-up. No major curses,” he said calmly. “You won’t be able to control them once they bounce off. Nymph, you might want to take those vases down the chimney – it would be a pity if they shattered.”
Tonks blushed and mumbled something that sounded like “Don’t call me Nymph in front of them…” She carefully seized two blue vases. “Where do I put them?”
“Outside, maybe?” Mr. Weasley suggested and watched her grabbing some more.
Tonks nodded and left the room. It looked rather dangerous as she balanced four vases in her arms and Harry had a bad feeling they would never make it back safely to the chimney.
“Alright,” Lupin started. “Why don’t you start jinxing each other? That way you could practise some offensive spells as well.” He walked over to the back of the room. “Harry, come here. You can start. Ron, you may jinx him first.”
Harry followed Lupin and took a deep breath before he turned to face Ron. He shielded the stunner immediately and Tonks, who had just come back, gave an approving nod; Hermione wasn’t successful with her jelly-leg-jinx either and Harry felt his spirits rise. He could do it! With the bat bogey hex Ginny cast it was more difficult, but he still prevailed and the hex rebounded on an ugly goblin statue, which burst.
“Strike!” Sirius cheered.
“Good job!” Flutterflie called out. “Seems our extra lessons finally paid off! Try to concentrate harder. Feel her! You might be able to rebound the hex in the direction you want to.”
Harry was puzzled. He had never considered one could be able to choose the direction spells recoiled. Concentrate, he thought and eyed the second statue on the windowsill. Obviously, Sirius was not attached to it.
“I thought I was teaching?” Lupin asked, raising an eyebrow. Flutterflie blushed and leaned back in her armchair.
Harry repressed a giggle. First, Finja didn’t want to teach them, and now she interfered. He shook his head, smiling. So you want me to feel Ginny, he thought. Good. He looked into Ginny’s eyes and his mind reached out for her.
“Extra lessons?” he heard Mr. Weasley ask, but the voice seemed to come from far away.
“Never mind,” Flutterflie replied and her words were almost not audible.
Harry tried to shut everything else out. Feel Ginny, he thought. Feel the second she will attack. Ginny raised her wand.
“So you have been teaching Harry in your spare time?” came another whisper.
Black out, Harry demanded. Ginny, when will you strike? He was all concentrated and the voices from the couch finally faded out. There was a soft touch on his shoulder, but he didn’t bother. Ginny…
Harry deflected the next spell. It hit the second statue.
“Perfect!” Tonks called out.
Harry looked around to find himself alone. Everybody else was at the other end of the room. Who had touched his shoulder? He gazed at Flutterflie, who had a wide smile on her face.
“I know how you do it,” he told her slowly. “I know the reason you can correct us.”
“Shut me out, then,” Flutterflie twinkled. “Constant vigilance!”
Harry felt bad now. The pieces fit. Snape and Flutterflie had been talking about his skill in occlumency. He was not ready yet. Snape had been reading his mind without him realizing it. Harry needed to practise. Everybody else must be shut out of his mind! His heart beat faster again. He had thought he was so good at occlumency and became careless with Ginny. Voldemort would know she was his girlfriend. He would see how much he cared for her – and then strike!
Harry had never noticed Flutterflie was penetrating his mind during classes. He had been alert at her office and by now he could shut her out completely – if he knew she was reaching out for him.
February, Snape had said. February. So this would be the month of Voldemort’s attack. Harry needed to be ready! No more messing about, no more wasting time! Constant vigilance!
For the next hour Harry concentrated hard to shut Flutterflie out. She played along and tried to penetrate his mind while he was casting jinxes and deflecting spells. Lupin and Tonks never realized, and they both were pleased with the shields their students produced. The accrediting looks Flutterflie cast every now and then even spurred Harry on, and in the end he was even able to deflect jinxes Lupin threw at him.
When he was done with Ginny, Flutterflie got up and cast stunners herself.
Harry felt helpless. None of them got even close to shield any of her magic, it was frustrating. Mr. Weasley finally demanded to be stunned himself. They watched him curiously as he took Harry’s place.
Flutterflie nodded at him and held out her hand lazily. Just like before, a yellow jet of light escaped from her palm with a hiss and aimed at Mr. Weasley’s chest – but was deflected perfectly and hit a tiny vase Tonks had forgotten to take off the chimney.
Flutterflie slowly turned away. Harry saw her curling her lips (in a rather Snape-ish way, he had to admit), and she suddenly swung around, both palms pointing at Mr. Weasley. There was a blue flash and he was blasted into the air. His back hit the wall and he slid down, lying motionless on the floor. Harry’s heart almost stopped as he saw Mr. Weasley unconscious.
“That was not fair!” Ron called out. “You turned! He was not ready for another jinx!”
Flutterflie gave a short laugh and put her hands on Ron’s shoulder.
“Do you think Voldemort will be fair? Do you think he will wait until you are all set?”
“No,” whispered Ron and swallowed hard.
“We are at war! There will be no mercy!” Flutterflie let go of his shoulders and eyed Mr. Weasley who tried to get up, shaking his head.
“I take it this was what you call a jinx?” he asked, rubbing his forehead.
Flutterflie looked puzzled and meant to say something, but Mr. Weasley silenced her and went on instead.
“Goodness, this is quite powerful! I feel like… uh… what can I do against this dizziness?”
“Earl Grey with lemon,” Flutterflie replied quietly and left the saloon.
“Do you reckon the Death Eaters curses will be as powerful as Finja’s?” Harry sternly demanded.
Tonks shrugged.
“Some will, some won’t. Depends on who you are facing…” she sighed. “They don’t fight to take hostages – they want to kill. And that makes them strong. So if you ever get involved in a fight with the Death Eaters again, you might want to watch out for Bellatrix and… well…”
“Snape,” Sirius finished in a dark voice. Tonks and Remus shook their heads disapprovingly.
“I prefer the enemy I know to the one I don’t know,” Mr. Weasley stated clearly. “Besides, Severus still is on our side! You shouldn’t have agreed to let him stay with us if you have any doubts about it!”
Sirius gave a short laugh.
“Eliminate this silly grudge and – for heaven’s sake – stop being jealous!” Mr. Weasley called out, obviously frustrated from Sirius’ attitude.
“What would I be jealous of?” Sirius blustered. “Jealous I don’t have a fancy hooded cloak and a cute skull tattoo on my arm?”
Arthur slowly shook his head and gave him a compassionate look.
“Sirius, I am not stupid! I have ears, I have eyes. I know exactly what is going on here. All I ask of you is to try and get along with Severus. I see you made an effort. And so did he. But it is not enough. Stop talking bad about him! He is doing what he must do. You might be surprised.”
“No, Arthur,” Sirius spat. “You will be surprised!”
Harry looked from his godfather to Mr. Weasley in disbelieve. How could they possibly start fighting about Snape now? He was gone…
“I want to see you covering each others back in a fight – as you should do,” Mr. Weasley replied quietly and left without another word. Without thinking, Harry followed him down the stairs and into the deserted kitchen.
Mr. Weasley stood there, panting, and grabbed a chair for support. He gazed into the flames for a while and then turned around to pour himself a glass of firewhiskey.
“Are you okay, Mr. Weasley?” Harry asked. He was extremely worried. Usually, Mr. Weasley was a relaxed man, but the way he had behaved ever since Snape had entered Grimmauld Place…
“Arthur,” came the reply. “Call me Arthur.”
Harry was a little shocked at first, but then he nodded.
“Fine. Arthur.”
Mr. Weasley turned around.
“Sit with me, Harry. Have a glass of firewhiskey – you are old enough.”
Harry swallowed hard, but did as he was told and sat down in an armchair by the fire. He felt quite unsure and wondered what would come next.
Arthur poured Harry a glass and pushed it over to him.
“To the ones we love,” he said gloomy.
“To the ones we love,” Harry echoed, and his hand was shaking as he moved the glass towards his lips. He took a big gulp, and his mouth felt like it was burning the second the whiskey touched it. Harry could feel the liquid all the way down his gullet and repressed a cough. Tears filled his eyes.
“I did that the first time I had firewhiskey, too,” Mr. Weasley sighed. “You want to take small sips. It’s whiskey, not schnapps. I should have told you,” he leaned back in his chair. “It was the same with Bill and Charlie, Percy, Fred and George… ah – I should know by now.”
Harry felt quite uncomfortable. Ron should be sitting here, not he. He was not Mr. Weasley’s… well, Arthur’s, he corrected himself, son. They were sitting in silence and Arthur queried his glass for a long time, before he finally spoke up.
“Harry,” he said, “I must ask you to do something for me.”
Harry turned his head towards Mr. Weasley, and his heart beat fast. He didn’t know what was coming next, and he tensely awaited the request. But Arthur took his time and sipped his whiskey once again. When he put the glass down on the table, he gave a sigh and looked up to Harry again.
“Promise me you will watch out for Ginny!” he said firmly.
Of all things, this was not what Harry had expected. Of course he would watch out for Ginny. What was this about?
Arthur was concentrated on his whiskey glass again. He turned it in his fingers.
“I know nobody can protect her as well as you can. She will be fine while you are around,” he faced Harry once more, and there was a tear in his eye. “Watch her for me, Harry! She is my little girl…” Arthur shook his head slightly. “I couldn’t stand if anything happened to her,” he whispered. “Watch her!” He grabbed Harry’s shoulder. “You must not endanger yourself! Promise me! Watch her !”

to be continued...

Very enjoyable chapter. I did not have to think too hard on this one. Harry being able to direct the reflected jinxes is very interesting. That should come in handy down the road. It is good to see that Harry is starting to get better and recognize when Finja is entering his mind.

The whole Arthur and Harry talk was very sad. I have the feeling Arthur does not trust Severus as much as he wants everyone to believe and he is not looking to be alive very much longer. I saw your post on Razz's fiction. You are not allowed to kill two Weasley's at once. Especially if one is newly married and awaiting their first child. I will have to report you to the Ministry of Magic if you proceed down this course!

Fantastic. I loved the bit where Harry was concentrating on blocking the spells- it perfectly explained how the whole thing was done, it was perfectly described. The bit with Arthur and Harry was priceless- I liked the added touch of drinking the firewhiskey, it was well done. Can't wait for the next chapter- excellent work.

alright i have tears in my eyes from the whole "she's my little girl" part. I wish my father was that way, though i suppose i have other compensations i.e. my new platinum credit card *lol*

Well i really was lost huh? so Sirius has an older brother. Who his father had in an adulterous relationship. And Snapes father had Flutterfly in the same kind of relationship. And Sirius's brother and Flutterfly are/were in love. So she is kind of like Sirius's sister in law....hmmm...interesting. And sirius loves her... even better. And his older brother is alive and participated in the "adult scene"?

Oh the wicked web you weave FLutters. I love it!

~Mae

Really wonderful installment flutter. I felt how important it was for Harry to be tested on his shielding, and also his realization that his mind was still being intruded on!

The scene between Arthur and Harry about Ginny was so touching. Again, I really felt Mr. Weasleys pain at the thoughts his only baby girl could be placed in a lot of danger soon. Harry must have felt it too, and I'm certain he will do everything in his power to protect her.

Good work mate, and I cant wait for the next installment...

Okay... time for catching up on some comments... *lol*
I wanted to write, but some girls from a different forum I haven't visited in two month kept bugging me to come back. Hehe. They obviously missed me... Who would have thought?
So now I have to be extra careful to sign with the right name. *lol* And I didn't get to sit down and write the next part yet. So sorry...
Well, tomorrow, definitely.

Okay, here goes:

razzberry2: Hehe, I am glad you came back. I was afraid my reply to your PM "Don't tell me XYZ" wasn't quite what you wanted to hear. *lol* So I am glad you will stick to the story, even if XYZ. Hehe. By the way, you are the only one who guessed correctly - without any help. So: round of applause!
Ah, the Weasley-scene, yes. *snivel* I guess Arthur knows what will happen... Ah - trusting man, he is. Let's hope somebody will be there and.. erm... save... him...

keepstar1331: YES! YES! I did it! *dance* I actually told JoP I wanted at least ONE person to comment they had tears in their eyes! Wow. I do feel so much better now.
I had to read your post three times until I understood what you meant to say. *giggle* Use small words, I am a little slow today. *lol*
And... was it Sirius' brother who anticipated in the adult scene? Hm... I guess so. He accidentally grabbed her black cloak when he dressed in the darkness, I figure... so it must have been him. Unless of course it wasn't his cloak and somebody else had exchanged it before... Hm... but that would simply be too much - even for me. Hm...
Wicked web? Hehe... I feel like a spider - and obviously some of you already got stuck in my web... for I only know three people figured XYZ out, yet.

Ginevra Potter Glad to see youre back. And you enjoyed the read. Thanks, mate. Hope I can meet your expectations with the next chapter again.

gaburdette: *lol* Well, I guess you will have to report me, then... hm... I can't kill two Weasleys at once. Oh, sigh, I didn't know about THAT rule... Maybe someone can come save them? You could send someone from the Ministry... The attack will be January ninth, 9:15am, Knockturn Alley... So they'd better hurry...

JoP: Yes, we already did have a long chat, didn't we? *lol* How is "Gassy" doing today? *rotfl* Thanks for helping me out once again!

bubotubber_pus: Yay, you're getting there, mate! *lol* Almost caught up! And I am glad you liked my adult scene, there's more to come, actually... *lol* But next time you'll know who it is.

ridane_prongs42: Thanks for commenting! I'd be thrilled if you told me the things you liked and disliked. Glad you posted!

Okay, hope I didn't miss anybody just now...
Take care,

Flutters

Oh, Flutters, this was such a touching chapter. I loved that Harry learned to direct his curse deflections and began to recognize when his mind was being intruded. He's starting to get so much better at everything. And the scene with Mr Weasley. Ah, tear. But now I'm more than a little concerned about what's coming... I'll keep reading, of course, but, well... It's sad when people get killed off? That sounds stupid. But it's true!

Touching moment with the firewhiskey...poor Arthur--he's so wonderful! I'm very nervous about the Weasleys, they're a beautiful family and I'd hate to lose any one of them. But as Molly said in OotP, it would be a miracle if they all come through this alive. Still have questions in the air, I'm looking forward to the answers.

Heya Flutters
I'm in a hurry but I really wanted to reply so here it is.
This chapter was really touching, the dialogue between Harry and Mr. Weasley is so sad. I love the last sentence

Oh, Flutters, you've made a shower scene with Snape in your fanfiction! Is it getting sexier or are there only my dirty thoughts? I'm surprised about Kingsley but maybe it will be a kind of twist in the plot. And I liked very much the scene with "I hate you, Severus Snape"

Besides Snape in orange clothes is ridiculous!

*lol*

Guys, let me get this straight real quick: Severus is NOT gonna wear orange robes. Okay? *lol*

I guess he'd rather choose to be killed than wear orange and gold. And if his master wants to stick to his most faithful servant he'd better live with it... *lol* Ah, you'll see what happens...

Flutters

Oh, so I finally know who were Flutterflie's parents! No wonder Snape was sneering about Sirius's father's genes spreading around... I'm just wondering why she's so thin...

Edit: Flutters, I'm up-to-date with your fanfiction now! Yeah, I've read it, an entire one You definitely have the talent in writing and I wish you all the best First of all, I adore scenes with Snape/Sirius/angry Harry and you created an extremely interesting and believable new character. Congratulations!

Guys, I was gonna put up the next installment tonight.

However, I am getting carried away with the conversation now, and I have the feeling Harry does want to do a little more than I have planned for him. Oh, sigh, he is a good boy...

I will need to cut the conversation short, I know. But he's in a rage right now, so I have no idea how long it will take to calm him down... Hm...
I will try...

Sorry...

Flutterflie

Just passing by to check if you uploaded the next chapter...
I feel guilty at the moment I kept you from continuing your fanfic this afternoon. So for everyone who's angry and disappointed, blame me

Btw. Still that one word on my blanco paper... so it's a Tie, you haven't finished your fic and I obvious haven't finished my report

This is an amazing story you must keep writing this. I can't believe how well you have these characters developed, this is J.K.ish magic. I love the way you are portraying Snape, it makes him very Byronic hero style. I love the story and this won't be the last post about it from me.

Uh, my fanclub has a new member. *twinkle*
Thanks, Ameena, for joining at this point, I am always glad you guys make an effort to keep on reading this - SaB is sooo long by now. Thanks for your reply!

Here goes the next chapter...



Men of Steel (last part)


Harry lay in bed, thinking about the day. So many things had happened. Sirius had told him about his mysterious brother, then there was the shielding lesson, Arthur’s strange request about Ginny… He couldn’t possibly go to sleep! There still were so many problems he needed to ponder on! His skills in occlumency, Snape, the horcruxes…
Harry got up. There was no way to stay in bed now! Mysteries needed to be solved! Quarter to twelve. Flutterflie had promised to answer him – and she hadn’t yet. Would she talk to him right now? Well, there was only one way to find out...
Harry picked up his jeans in the dark and pulled it on again. The shirt he had worn today hung over the chair, just his socks seemed to have disappeared.
“I can do without them,” he thought and couldn’t help a grin when he pictured Dobby hearing it. Barefooted, he walked over to the door and felt for the knob. When he turned it, he realized there were voices on the hallway. He opened his door just a little, so he could listen.
“There is a way… I suppose Nevermore would find him,” he heard Flutterflie’s gentle voice.
“Who is Nevermore? Severus’ owl?” Mr. Weasley replied curiously.
“Sort of… he is the smartest bird I have ever seen,” she said softly, and Harry wondered if Flutterflie had ever met Hedwig. “I can summon him for you, if it is important. He is at Hogwarts still.”
“No, thanks,” Arthur refused the offer. “I was just wondering whether I could talk to him in private. I don’t want the owl to be intercepted. It would be too dangerous - for both of us.”
“I am afraid I cannot help you, Arthur. He asked me not to try and see him. I figure that goes for everybody else, too,” Flutterflie said in a sad voice. Harry wondered where Snape had gone. Probably back to his master, pampering the Death Eaters, he thought, and he felt revulsion rise inside.
“Well, thank you anyway. And good night!”
“Good night, Arthur!”
Harry heard Mr. Weasley’s steps down the hallway and up the stairs. Flutterflie had retrieved to her room, but the door stood ajar and the hall lay in subdued light. Slowly, he took a few steps into the hallway, but hesitated going any further.
“Don’t you want to come in?” he heard her silky voice. Goodness, she has realized me once again, Harry thought desperately. If I don’t get a grip on occlumency, I might as well go hang myself!
Sighing, he walked over to the door and entered the Blue Room. Back in muggle clothes, Flutterflie sat cross-legged on her bed, books spread everywhere. A few candles cast a dim light above the room.
“What are you doing?” Harry asked curiously and seized a book. “Revelation of the Ill” was its title, and it sported a wizard crying in pain, holding his hand to his forehead. Black liquid ran over his hands, dripped down to the floor, and after a while the wizard fell to his knees, sobbing. Harry put the book down; glad the picture didn’t make any noise. He looked at the other titles.
“Disclosure of hidden Magic” and “Unveiling the Dark” lay on the bed, and Flutterflie copied something down from a book written in strange letters Harry could not read.
“Research,” she answered after a few minutes and put her pen down. “I know the way I would be doing it.” Flutterflie looked up to face Harry (who was rather confused) and tuck a strand of hair behind her ear.
“However, I will never get in the position to perform it, so I need to find out if wizards can use my magic,” she went on. “Or at least if there is some similar spell in your magic. It’s tough, we only have one try.”
Harry had no idea what Flutterflie was talking about and he wondered if he should know. Finally, he decided to admit he didn’t understand her and asked, “On what?”
Now it was Flutterflie’s turn to give him an addled look.
“The fifth horcrux,” she said firmly. “We will exchange Nagini for Beelzebub.”
“Oh…” Harry said, feeling stupid. He had meant to talk to Flutterflie about the horcruxes tonight, but he had never imagined she was already working on it. After all, it was his task.
“So you already have a plan?” he asked shortly. Why did the adults leave him out? He was of age by now!
“Yes. It’ll only be a matter of time,” she replied and cast him a compassionate look. Yes, he knew! Nobody wanted to put extra weight upon his shoulders, they just didn’t seem to realize that it would be much easier for him, if they just talked to him. Well, Finja wanted to involve him now – which was better than it being kept a secret.
“But who would dare to swap them?” he demanded, hoping she’d give him detailed information.
Flutterflie raised her eyebrow.
“I suppose it won’t be Santa Clause…”
As realisation sank in, Harry could have hit his head. Of course, Snape would be doing it! Ron had already guessed it in June. But what use would it be, exchanging the snakes?
“Why can’t he just kill Nagini?” he asked, sitting down on the corner of the bed.
Flutterflie had just poured some orange juice and now looked at him in surprise.
“Well, as far as we know, dear old Volders has not realized four of his horcruxes have been destroyed by now. And we want to avoid that. So we will need to make sure he doesn’t find out until we are done with the sixth…”
Harry’s heart started beating fast. This could not be true!
“So you already know about the sixth horcrux?” he gasped.
“Well, yes. I found out in October…” Flutterflie answered patiently. “But we cannot destroy it yet.”
Finja had found the last horcrux. She knew where it was, she probably knew how to destroy it. Harry couldn’t make up his mind whether to laugh or cry. She had done all his work! But now she had mentioned she wouldn’t destroy it all by herself…
“We?” he asked fiercely. He would be seriously annoyed if she told him she would need Snape’s help now. It is my job!
“Yes,” came the blunt reply. “I will need your help.”
“My help?” Harry erupted. “It is my task to find the horcruxes, not yours! Dumbledore told me…”
“Harry, please calm down. I don’t want to fight with you!” Finja sighed and leaned back on her cushions. “Dumbledore told you, yes. But he would not have wanted you to do it all alone. The only reason he did not tell anybody else is there were so few Dumbledore really trusted in the end.” She shook her head slightly. “Well, Dumbledore did… Dumbledore did tell Severus.”
“Great news,” Harry spat. So Dumbledore had, in fact, told Snape himself. Knowing that of all people, Snape would be his most favourite to share the mission with. “When will we do it?” he went on, trying to repress his anger.
“Do what?” Flutterflie asked. She obviously wasn’t happy about his attitude, and Harry tried to calm himself down. After all, it was not Finja’s fault.
“Destroy the horcrux!” he said curtly.
“Well, the sixth one is different, Harry.” Flutterflie scratched her head. “We can’t simply go and destroy it. We will have to… release it somehow.”
“Release it?” Harry cast her an incredulous look. What in the world did she mean by that? “When you say somehow, it means that you don’t know how to do it yet, right?” he went on
“I know how to do it,” Flutterflie nodded slowly. “Just… I don’t know if I have enough power.”
“What does that mean, Finja? It sounds like you are frightened! You call Voldemort dear old Volders while everybody else calls him You-know-who. I should think you are well above him. So what is it you are afraid of?” Harry just now realized he had – once more – called Flutterflie her first name. However, she did not seem to mind. Least she hadn’t flinched like she usually did when he said Snape.
“I just don’t want you to be killed, Harry. That’s all,” she said in a low voice.
Harry gave Flutterflie a puzzled look. She had made it pretty clear, and she had mentioned it once before – in her talk with Snape. How could she possibly think he would die in the attempt to destroy the sixth horcrux?
“I don’t understand…” he sighed.
“Yes. I know,” she said consolingly. “But I don’t think I should tell you just now. We can wait until you’re good and ready.” She kept watching him as she sipped her orange juice and went on, “Why did you want to talk to me in first place?”
“Well, I just thought we could talk about that night before Christmas, when I overheard you and Sna… Severus,” he answered.
“So what do you want to know?” Finja smiled, and Harry was glad to see her smile again. She had been serious from the second he had entered her room, and it just didn’t feel right.
“You already answered most of it, I think,” he said quickly. “And as for my mom and Severus… I guess I will just have to live with it, right? I mean, he didn’t use any potion on her, did he?”
Flutterflie gave a short laugh. “Heck, no!”
Harry looked down to his feet, as a question arose inside.
“You knew my mother, didn’t you?”
Flutterflie slowly nodded.
“Tell me about her.”
She sighed and thought for a moment, but she still had a smile on her face as she started talking.
“She was a very special, warm and gentle person. Lily was fair. And she always tried to see good in everybody. When you lied about those Slytherins who attacked you – she would have done the same. She was caring and… I don’t know,” she shrugged. “Everybody liked her.”
“When you tell me about her… you know, she sounds a lot like… like you.” Harry took a deep breath. Now he had finally admitted it. He had once sworn not to believe Finja, whatever she would say. And here he was, telling her she was exactly like everybody described his mother.
“But she was stronger than I was,” Flutterflie objected in a low voice. “She just went on with her life, while I… look at me, Harry. I am a mere shadow of myself. It’s a shame.”
“It’s not those nightmares that did this to you, right?”
“No,” Flutterflie shook her head. “I have always known I was not destined to grow old. And if I have to leave this world behind to save the ones I love, I will not die in vain.”
“And you tell me you are not strong, Finja?” Harry shook his head in disbelieve. “You know you will die soon, protecting somebody else, you put so much effort into training me up, spend your spare time researching spells to destroy the horcrux, and now you tell me you aren’t strong? What in the world can possibly torture you like that?”
“It’s none of your business, Harry.” Flutterflie got up and walked to the window. She always does that when she doesn’t want to go on talking, Harry thought.
“Okay. I see,” he said firmly. “But you know what, Finja? I want to help you! You are constantly helping me out, you’re teaching me in the evenings, even on Christmas. You are doing things I should do. It’s my destiny to defeat Voldemort! You heard the prophecy. It’s my mission. I am more than glad to find I am not alone. Hermione and Ron have been with me all the time. Dumbledore has helped me whenever he could. I see that you want to fight by my side, and – surprise, surprise – even Snape seems to be on our side, now that you have returned. You have constantly reminded me to take some time off. You wanted me to spend time with Ginny, you asked me to go on playing Quiddich for distraction. And I did.” He panted heavily as he got up and walked towards Flutterflie.
“Now here is the news: it goes for you, too! Just take a look at the mirror! Where did the pretty young woman that visited me at Privet Drive in June go? You are pale, you are thin… When I saw you this morning, I thought for a split second you would get better. But I watched you over the day. And I don’t think so… What is it? Finja! If you really want to take some weight off my shoulders, you tell me what is going on! Because I will be worried until I know how I can help you!”
“But you can’t, Harry,” she said, and tears were in her eyes. “There is only one man in this world who can…” she looked down and played with a ring on her left hand Harry had never noticed before, “and for now, he has left me.”
"What is his name?" pointing at the diamond ring.
Flutterflie looked into his eyes, and for a split second, Harry thought he saw the reflection of a burning house.
"Thorin..." she smiled mildly.
“Finja,” he put his arm on her shoulder in a comforting way, “If you need someone to talk – I am in my room.”
“Good Night!” she ended their conversation, turning to the window again, a hazy look upon her face. It had started to rain outside.
“Night…” Harry mumbled as he walked out of the door. He got back to his room in the dark and undressed.
Phineas Nigellus was fast asleep and snoring peacefully in his portrait. Harry remembered the advice he had once given him. Do as Dumbledore did. Yes, he knew now. He realized when Finja had talked about the horcruxes. And after all he had learned within the last days he was finally willing to do so.
“Trust Severus Snape,” he whispered and climbed into his bed.

Wow, outstanding! I really loved Harry in this chapter- everthing he said was really extremely mature. He's really grown up, hasn't he? I really loved the bit where Finja talked about Lily. You did an awesome job- as usual!

I like the name Nevermore, I’d love to know more about the bird. Does the name resemblance something specific or did you just chose it because you like it? I had a dog once which I named “Anders” that’s the Dutch translation of “Different” he was special to me the first time I saw him.

Hehe, and again you are using the magic word: Christmas I always get that special sparkle inside of me when I start singing Christmas songs.

About Snape, You’ve got me theorising with him as main subject. I always, always, always thought that he was Beezly. But he can’t be him.. Flutters said again that Snape left her, so I assume he joined the DE once again, and will not help to change Beezly with Nagini. But I really don’t know who Beezle could be than, so it has to be Snape. And Snape’s going to change Beezle for Nagini?
Even if that works, Nagini is “dear old Volders” pet, I assume that LV will notice that the snakes are switched. Nagini has been his pet for such a long time.
It’s obvious Harry doesn’t trust snape 100% so he and Sirius are the only ones who think that he’s up to something (Yeah, he’s up to killing two of the Weasleys). Making plans to finish of the Weasleys does count as evil doesn’t it .
Had a rough day, believe me my brains can’t take no more theorising.

I’ts nice to see that Harry thinks Flutters is a bit like a mother to him, that’s sweet to read. It also nice to read that Flutters speaks good things about Lilly, Lilly has always been one of my favourites. I’m glad that Harry finally uses Flutters First name, he still calls Remus, Lupin or professor doesn’t he? That would mean Finja is more like a mother to him (see! I also start to use her first name ) and she’s even more important than Lupin (which I think was the best father figure to Harry). The dialogue between her and Harry was sweet

What I also wanted to mention is that I like the way how Finja reacts to everything, she’s such a wise woman, In my eyes she’s a bit like the female Lupin (not her personality, but she’s just as wise and all-knowing as him) Which is a very good thing.

I don’t know why, but I’ve got the feeling that Finja isn’t going to survive your story. It’s just because of everything I read, all her feelings, all the wise things she said about her future and not being together with Severus. Of course it could also be that he dies, but I guess she’s going to die.

Hi, Flutters!

Just wanted to comment on your superb writing again. The way in which you meticulously lay out your plot is great. Everything is slowly unfolding to reveal the upcoming revelations.

Finja knowing her destiny and admitting she always knew she would never grow old. How very sad. And stating that if she is to die saving someone, it would not be in vain. A true hero and person full of inner strengths.

Awe, Harry. He is coming to terms with the inevitable. He is learning he must still trust Snape. No matter who's side he is on. Very clever. Snape will be Harry's triumph over Voldemort no matter in what way he is to help Harry overcome.

And Beelzy. The upcoming swap is making me tense. I agree with Krieltje that Voldy will realize Beelzy is not Nagini. Hmm...How will you pull off such a great deceit? And as Finja has said it is very important that Voldy not realize any of the horcruxes are destroyed until the sixth is.

And speaking of the sixth horcrux....Harry? Are you leaning towards the Harry is the last of the horcuxes theory? His scar? Or just him himself? I mean he and Voldy are linked in a sense. He feels his anger and joy through that scar. Hm...

Curious.....

OK, then. Take care of yourself and be sure to write the next chapter by the time I get back from school! hehe....you have till Wednesday! I am only joking. No rush. Patience is a virtue! I am still learning! lol!

TTFN,
JoP

I went to class, and it was boring, so I was all bummed out, and then I came back here and - new chapter! *LOL* I definitely caught the reference to Dobby's socks... they're quite popular these days, aren't they? Ah, like Krieltje, I don't think that Flutters is going to make it through this story. She's almost too wise and too good. Hmm, kind of makes me think of Dumbledore .

Awe, I actually forgot the main line in the last chapter! Can you believe it? Argh...

I just added it, so Krieltje, Meggie, JoP and GinevraPotter... you might want to re-read it?

So sorry... *sigh*

Flutterflie

Wonderful as ever flutters. I'm glad Finja is helping Harry, he's gonna need it. Aww... hes so cute with her... Like he has a little crush. Though im sure its more because she embodies everything he thinks his mother was.

And now he has to trust Severus, difficult times lie ahead...wha ha ha *lol*.

So Beezlebub is coming back... good i liked him. Im thinking about getting a giant snake who does my bidding. I love how Finja is so... human. So normal in a way. Just the little things you write.... like how she scrathed her head. It helps better visulaize her character.

Can't wait until the next chapter!

~Mae

Right, well that makes things quite different. Good thing you caught that . Hehehe, so about the book that Snape's mother wrote... Maybe it's rather important afterall.

Haha, yes, it's a very good thing you remembered to put that line in! That makes things veryyy interesting! So Thorin, eh? I hope we'll learn the full story on him, eventually? But thanks for adding that in, it definitely added a lot to the chapter!

I'm glad to be the newest member of your fan club, Flutterflie. Wonderful new chapter you are amazing. You must post more soon. I was gripping at the scene almost as I was writing half forgetting that the story was on a computer and not on paper.

`Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil! -
Whether tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted -
On this home by horror haunted - tell me truly, I implore -
Is there - is there balm in Gilead? - tell me - tell me, I implore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

I think this should answer your question, Krieltje. Kudos to Edgar Allan Poe.

Am I going to kill Harry? Hm... I know, but I won't tell you, hehe. But I need to admit you're not the only person who has the feeling Finja won't survive the story... The last word of the last chapter is "barn" - so you can see where this is heading... *sigh*

GinevraPotter: thanks for the praise! I thought that after all the time Harry has been looking for a father figure, he migt be more lucky with a mother figure?

JoP: Yay, finally a chapter you didn't get to read before, and therefore a "surprise" for you. Hehe.
Beelzy will be a tough part, I know. Maybe you should know that Beelzy in fact is a very powerful wizard and that he, too, has a lot of mindpower - he migt be able to trick Voldemort. Hm... Guess we'll have to see?
Harry the horcrux...? Can I tell you? Without giving away too much...? Well, let's put it that way: they won't be able to release the horcrux like Finja planned it. And it'll be just before the final showdown, which will not be a simple fight between Harry and Voldemort - I am thinking big here, and I know I haven't read anything to match my plans yet. So I hope you guys will appreciate the chapter...

Meggie: *lol* Yeah, the socks... Harry and Socks in razzs story, Dobby and socks in yours... *lol* And I always said the book and the dream were important...

keepstar: Yes, trusting Severus will indeed be hard after all what will happen soon. *sigh* So we will see if Harry is right in trusting Snape - and how he reacts, once he sees Snape and Flutterflie fighting... *foreshadow*

Ameena: Thanks, mate! Yeah, it's tough reading on a PC, I know. So it's a great praise for me if you admit you forgot it wasn't on paper. Ah... my heart swells with pride again.
I loved your poem as well and hope loads of people will check it out... *nudge*

Thanks for your replies, guys!

Take care,

Flutterflie

More, Flutters, MORE!
I liked your last chapter very much. Finally we know something more about snakes- I mean, we know your plans for Belzeebub. And I really think Flutterflie is similar to Lily (it isn't Lily in reincarnation, huh? ) Harry is so funny with his Occlumency!

So more... and more Snape for the Snapelovers