hi this is my first fan fic(im not sure if its too good). i just wanted to see what you all think about it. its kindda short, but i had fun writing it. i think it may have a few spelling mistakes. if you like it i can write more.
it containd spoilers for hbp
the power of love
As Harry hit the ground he heard Snape laugh at him. “get up Potter, you worthless muggle lover.” Snape sneered, “Come to avenge Dumbledore’s death have we how sweet, curcio,”
After the spell was lifted Harry felt a hand grab his arm and slowly pull him up.
“Harry are you ok,” said Hermione in a worried voice.
“I’m fine,” Harry replied.
He looked up into her eyes and saw for the first time in his life that Hermione didn’t no what to do.
Again Snape moved forward to attack, this time laughing. He pointed his wand at Hermione and said quite clearly, Avada Kevada. At the exact same time Hermione said quite clearly, “stuperfy,”
The two jets of light hit each other and connected to form a single thread of golden light.
“Harry,” screamed Hermione, “what’s happening.”
Harry stepped forward, took hold of Hermione’s hand and said softly, “Don’t break the connection.”
Harry had a plan, he was not sure if it would work, although in mere seconds a small bead of white light appeared in the exact centre of the golden thread connecting the two lines.
“Hermione, focus all your energy on sending that bead of light towards Snape’s wand,” said Harry softly, so that Snape could not hear.
Harry was sure that snape had no idea what to do, Dumbeldore had told him that this was a very rear thing to happed.
Hermione obeyed him immediately and the bead of light slowly started to move towards Snape’s wand. Harry saw Snape’s face contort with fear something that Harry had never seen before.
The bead of light was now centimetres from Snape’s wand, then quite suddenly it hit. Harry heard whispering like noises come from Snapes wand. Shadows of spells started to issue from the tip of the wand. Theses shadows slowly fell out of the wand and disappeared.
The next object however to immerge from the wand was not a shadow of a spell; it was the shadow of a human. A human form with a long silver beard gracefully fell headfirst from the tip of the wand and straightened up. He looked around. With a mildly interested look on his face and slowly gilded towards Hermione and Harry. He spoke in a quite voice so that only Harry and Hermione could hear him. “Harry,” he said, “don’t worry. Snape cannot hurt you, I made sure of that.” He turned to Hermione and spoke quite softly, “and he will have some difficultly in harming you too, your wands are made of the same core, they will not work properly together.”
The shadow of Dumbledore looked up at Snape and saw him fighting to break the connection.
“He don’t have much time, Harry please find the remaining horrocuxes, Voldemort needs to be destroyed, once and for all. Please remember snape can’t harm you, you will understand soon enough.”
Dumbledore looked at Harry very closely. Harry noticed that his eyes looked rather glassy. “ be careful, I care for you, stay safe.” He made a strange movement, “goodbye” and with that Snape broke the connection Dumbledore’s shadow lingered momentarily and then vanished.
Snape looked up he looked rather shaken by the whole event. He looked closely at harry and said, “goodbye Potter.”
He pointed his wand at Harry and said Avada Kevada. Hermione screamed as harry was hit with the spell. Harry was lifted off his feet and flew back a few meters and hit the unconscious for of ron on the floor, he felt a searing pain run through his arm and everything went black.
When Harry woke up Hermione was kneeling beside him looking quite worried.
“Harry,” she said, “are you ok,”
“Yes, I think so.”
As Harry hopped up he saw the lifeless figure on the ground. He moved slowly over to the figure and saw Snape dead without a mark on him. It was only then he realised in Dumbledore had died to save him. He turned around to Hermione who said quite softly, “I understand Harry.”