oops, sry everyone. i wrote "the knew girl" when i ment to write "the new girl" sry about that, lol

good story so far ! write sum more soon

pretty good continue.

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thanks i'll get u more soon!

hey anyone who might be reading this. sry for the bad grammer and mis-spelled words, lol

kool story.write sum more soon

This is a great story ,keep up the good work i can't wait to read more.

oops, i wrote "Chapter Three "Broomstick, Beaters, and Birthdays" coming soon."
when i meant "Chapter Five "Broomstick, Beaters, and Birthdays" coming soon."
lol, where is my head today!

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Someone please review my page!!!!! Is my story ok? Anyone have any ideas? Just to give you a hint, two people out of: Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, and Callie, will be getting together around Christmas!

Please read and review!!

Great story !!Cant wait to read more!!

i wish more people would reply, i'm starting to feel like my writing isn't good:( okay, well there's some stuff i forgot to mention in previous chapters. I forgot to mention Ron, Hermione, and the other people being prefects. I forgot to mention that Ron is Quidditch captain and Harry got his broom back and is on the team. now Harry and Ron have to create a whole new team. Cus if I have my facts right, the three gryfindor chasers had their last year in the 5th book, right? and the beaters left last year to. so, they need a whole new team.

please lemme know what you think of my story and if u have any ideas for plot of anything, pm me or whatever.

bye

hmmmm, not wanting to sound like Simon Cowell to much but.....
That wasent one of your best chapters.
Keep writing though, I'm looking foward to the next chapter.!!
Megs

yeah, i've kinda hit a wall. i'm running out of ideas so if anyone could give me an idea for whatever, that would be great. i have ideas for stuff later in the year but i can't put though's up yet.

I NEED A PLOT!! I'm totally dead.........I NEED AN IDEA FOR A PLOT! my brother suggested that a virus break loose in the school and everyone who caught it turn evil. i dunno..........

sorry i cant think of any plot.......just write what ever goes on in your head

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it's really good! continue with this awsome staryline!

Thanks, I'll try to get the next part up soon. I'm still having alittle trouble on what to write. So like always, Ideas are welcome from anyone.

only a few mistakes.like their and there and they're it slows down the reader.other than that it was great.

that was great i really enjoyed that cant wait for the next chapter hmmm ducan intresting character

I am really enjoying your story here. You are a very good writer. Though it seems that there is no real point to the story. You had something going back with Professor Willams and Callie, I'd like to hear more about that, how do they know each other? What is the connection?

And I like the Duncan charcter as well, though I do hope he doesn't turn into another Colin Creevey.

All in all though, I like your story.

Don't worry. There is a plot to the story. There is a connection with Callie and Williams but I won't say what it is. It's a surprise

Lately I've been having really bad writers block. So my story isn't really doing anything. Duncan won't become another Colin Creevey. One's enough

Anyway, I gotta get back to thinking about what to write.

-Alison

Hihi good story so far!sorry i haven't posted alot i always forget to do it

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please write more its realy good!

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Okay, I need at least two more replies before I'll add the next chapter. Also, It might help If I started working on the next chapter......so.....
reply:)

-Alison

Okay now its my turn to reply.hehe.i have my own theories about professor W.but im not going to type them here for fear that i may ruin your ff.It is going great! Keep up the good work and post soon.I love it.

Please write more soon.Your story is getting more intresting.Can't wait until you write more.

Hey, wow. That just took me about an hour and a half to read all of it. Lol. But it was REALLY good!

"A Nimbus Two Thousand." Ron said, making googly eyes at it.

<--Hee hee hee, I liked that line. Googly eyes, I can picture it. =) I love the story, I want to hear more about Williams and Duncan too. ^.^ It's great so far! Keep going. Wow my eyes hurt from reading so much. Lol.

OMG that was really good! It actually sounded like it could've been JK Rowling writing it because of your writing style! I really loved it and plus the whole mystery about Williams was uncovered, omg that was my favorite chapter! It was soooo good. Okay okay -calms down- MORE!!!

I cant belive it.Wow that was amazing!Post more soon.I cant wait for the next part!

wow this si a really good fanfic i would love to c more of it please. iys really great

Wow!That was great!Please post more soon.I cant wait to hear the rest of it.

Wow that was a great chapter is seriously sounded like it could've been JK Rowling writing because your style matches hers perfectly! OMG I am so surprised! Duncan. -Gasp- Lol. I want more! That was so awesome!

OMMMMGGGGGGG you monkey! How could you stop there? MORE! MORE! I want to hear what happens next! Make her talk to Ron..come on! COME ON! Too slow...I NEED MORE! -calms down- I mean....please write more. Thank you.

OOh that was really good! I can't wait to hear the endding! =) =) (Oh and one thing: I think you said the word "moreover" more than enough times.) Hee hee hee. Okay well I hope ya post the last part soon! I want to find out what happens!!!

WOW!That was amazing ..but why..why did you have to stop writing why! cant wait to hear the rest.

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Oh my gosh you have to finish it NOW!! come on GOO hurry cant wait to read the rest


**aya**

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You're brilliant at this, I can assure you! Please, oh pretty please, finish it...

this is really great, one of the best fan fictions i have probally ever read so you do have to finish this up as soon as possible

oh my gosh. i read all of it today and it is so great!! great writing. great twists. i love it. hope you write more. hehe..

-Sheryl

Excellent story! I had been waiting for awhile for the next part and the wait was worth it. I loved it!

that was such an awesome story! i cant believe its the end though. it was all worth the wait. you did a great job on this one

OOoh, that was really good! Nice endding, though it was kind of sudden but still seemed great! I loved it! Definately one of the best Fan Fictions I've ever read...or maybe it IS the best!

Oh, I can't believe it's over! But it was seriously quite amazingly unbelieveably great! I hope you write a new story soon...

~WillowySybelle~

not bad...nice story..
like it...spent my whole afternoon looking at it..
looking forward for your next story...

hey rons1trulove!
awesome piece of work
keep it up
hats off to you

love
aishwarya

hmm i dont normally comment on fanfics if it isnt that good even though i read all but this one is awesome good work and keep it up...