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Luna Lovegood
aww, come on people. please vote, please please please^google. If you vote I'll give you a cookie! well, not really a cookie, but i will thank you profusely, and who knows you may even score a net hug. biggrin.gif
obsessedchic
Luna: I don't know why people aren't responding to your ff but i thought it was absolutely brilliant. You had some really good ideas. I don't think i've ever heard the McGonagall/Snape relationship but i like how she kind of softened him up a bit. I would love to read any other ff that you write. And again, good job. biggrin.gif
Luna Lovegood
yay! someone posted. *hands platter of chocolate chip cookies to obsessed chic* i was wondering if anyone had read it, so yay! biggrin.gif and thanks so much. currently i'm working on an original piece that is semi-dead at the moment, but i got a g/h novel that's started...might work on it a bit if i get the inspiration. thanks^google!
suprbookwrm
awesome! i kinda want Harry and Luna to get together, but you make Harry and Ginny work. props for creating the whole necklace thing! very believable!
Mimbletonia
I loved it! Brilliant! I love Harry and Ginny together, and you wrote this very well.
MimolaChuck
bloody brilliant!
so romantic. did you come up with those poems? they were great.
it was sooo great!
really, harry was so sweet. and wow. it was just WOW!
Dracoluver
It was BRILLIANT! So cute! Loved it! I'm adding it to my fave's list! tongue.gif
How come there nearly aren't any replies?! It's really one of the best fics!
fs_fs
This is bloody brilliant and romantic. I've always liked H/G fics. This is the best!
Luna Lovegood
thanks guys so much biggrin.gif I love getting feedback a lot!! Special net cookies for all of you.

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so romantic. did you come up with those poems? they were great.


yep, I did. I like writing poems, so figured I could combine the two, so I had fun with that. My other poems can be found at pathetic.org; however, those are definitely not the happy type (at least the majority).

I've got a real craving to write another story, but with 19 units and a job, it doesn't leave me with much writing time. Maybe this winter break *grins*

And yes, Harry/Ginny ship is the best ever. Almost everyone can identify with unrequited love b/c it is so universal. Of course now I still like the dynamic, but also like when it doesn't work out - seems more real that way. But hey, perhaps the dreamer in me will see the light someday. biggrin.gif

<3 cami
SuperStar
It was totally awesome...i was checking the fanfics on veritaserum during chemistry in school today but i was about a chapter away from finishing when she called us back into the room...i had minimize the box and have the other one open that had all the stuff for my research open when she came around inspecting what we were doing...cuase some of the guys were playing games and stuff...so i didn't wanna get in trouble...lol! It was totally amazing! more cute little stories like this would be great! I love H/G ships...i am not a big fan of H/H ships but this was truely superb!!!! KUDOS TO YOU! GREAT JOB!!! tongue.gif biggrin.gif laugh.gif
I Love Dan Radcliffe
Awwww. That was so good! There has to be more. I beg for you to continue with this story. It's great! I'm a big Harry/Ginny shipper so hurry up with that sequal! *lol* Please!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name,but it's true
GryffindorBabexhott
I love it!! It was so sweet. The poems were amazing. You showed Harrys sensitive side, it was too cute. If you wrote those poems by yourself, Then I think you have some amazing writing skils. The McGonagal/Snape relationship was werid, but agan great. The Secret Santa idea was amazing. This story made my day. The Harry and Ginny relationship was excellent. If you write more let me know! E- mail me.
krisiebug88
Oh my gosh how cute your story is please write more fan fics. That story was excelent some one should of just puched Dean. Keep writing I enjoyed it.
KRISTIN
DD's-man-through-and-through
That was amazing! woot.gif Wow! I'm so surprised not many peaple have replied back to you. It was so original!The secret santa, santa.gif I would never have thought of that! I loved it! Have you written any more stories? What I think is cool is that you wrote this before the 6th book came out, i didn't even see the H/G relationship coming until I read it. And now I am their biggest shipper! But, wow, briliant!
DD's-man-through-and-through
jerry.gif
These smilies are tooooo cute!
rupertsgirl
That was the sweetest thing i have ever read!!!!! i loved it!!!! who knew harry had such a way with words!!! biggrin.gif but now i hate Dean!!! how could he do that!! that was just evil!! but the ending is soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! wub.gif

rupertsgirl
The Master of Death
It was bloody brilliant....as u said in the poll...man i have read few ship fan fics as good as this....Congrats...i loved the ending...and blast that idiot Dean
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