Not just good... this is a great story. After a generous allowance for house elves being immaculately dressed, it blends wonderfully with canon and has lovely details and funny riddles.
Thank you!

PS. I scrolled down and noticed you edited it... lol. Your writing is good and your thinking in the right way to avoid violating canon and squeezing in between Jo Rowling's blanks. Keep up the good work!

--Annie

That was...another brilliant one bajab! I loved how you kept saying, "It was just that kind of place." I feer I may put too many laughing smiley faces in here! What a wonderful idea, how did you ever think of that? But what can I say, that I haven't already said to you? You are brilliant with these one shot fics. All about Fred and George. But they are more than just funny fics. They are well thought out pieces of writing that capture the very spirit of Fred and George. Because Fred and George really are daredevils. Sometimes their little jokes are quote boarderlined dangerous. A TriWizard gag? Perfect. Bad news for anyone trying to steal anything from them! Aww bajab, you inspire me to try and be a bit funnier with my writing too. Who needs emotional rllar coasters? Especially when you have fics like these!

I could go on and on...

~lmao~ gosh Bajab, I can't stop smirking. This one was even better than your other one shot fics. I love the way you make me laugh, and like Snapelover said; there isn't anything left to say because all of your fics are brilliant. The riddles were so funny, to be honest: I never heard them before and wouldn't have known the answer
I really had to laugh when I read the epilogue, when Fred said he forgot to put the box away that night

Great bajab!

Keep up the brilliant work,
Hugs, Marieke

Thanks for the feedback guys. It seems one shots and comedy don't get many comments (or reads even), so I really appreciate yours.

Thank you especially Bumblebee for PMing me the gramma and punctuation errors. I have fixed them all now (I hope). Doesn't matter how many times I read these things, I always seem to read what it is meant to say rather than what it does say.

Wish I had a Triwizard Tournament Toffee right now, to release me from the boredom of work

*giggles*
The epilogue was brilliant! I'm afraid ive run out of compliments for your fics! Yet another original and funny oneshot. hmm.. what did Rob do to get in Zonko's debt? i love the way you always save the funniest (or at least i think so) and explanatory bits to the ends.
*raises arm* to the next story!!
Lu

Thanks Lu.

I actually thought many people must not have caught the Zonko line because I was expecting a howl of protest at my making him out to be a bit shadowy

In the first draught it was a goblin, not a house elf, but I figured the house elf angle might be a bit funnier, even if it was stretching canon a bit. I recently added the line "and was probably his master's idea of a joke."

i dont know why, but i always imagined Zonko as like Peeves, and i could imagine him being shadowy: otherwise people would always be stealing his tricks and overtaking his market.

wow that was great! i loved the begining until her got to the maze thing because it sounded like you had copied the book but when i read the Epilogue i realised why you had done that. It was really funny and I re read it and it sounds alot better now i know why he imagined the maze. can't wait to read more of you short fics

I might have to tweak the start of the maze it make it a bit funnier and more distinct from GOF. Perhaps the maze needs to made out of something other than hedges. Any suggestions?

There aren't many fics featuring goblins are there? Hmmm food for thought...

That was really funny. You wirte awsome stories!! I liked the part at the end (of course) where all the pieces far into place. It was ingenius!!! I like how all your stories that I've read so far have something to do with Fred and George. Well any story wouldn't be funny without them!! Keep up the excellent job!! Please keep on writing, your excellent at it!!