Brilliant mate! So well done. What a fabulously believable insight into Dudley Dursley. Absolutely superb.I was so with Dudders all the way when he decided to go sneaking into Harry's room to look for something he could either use against him, or other enimies, or indeed, just show off with! heehee, so freakin believable!
I really loved every single object he came across and all of his thought processes as he tried work things out, or deliberate over using them. Just marvelously funny.
When he tossed the "sleeping" dragon on the bed to look at later, I thought something would come of it and how wonderfully subtle to merely have it open just one eye to get that sort of a reaction from him!!
We can saftly assume why the sneakascope was whistling loudy with Duddikins sneaking around the bed room. ooh, and dudders thoughts on maybe trying to poison Hedwig.
What a chicken he is becaue he thought it might be able to fight back... to true to form!!The moster book of monsters ~lol~ I was sure he'd get bit if he kept going and yeeeep! whoo hoo! *snigger* He's the perfect character to rejoice in his pain and humilation!!
I was cringing with gleeful anticipation when he stuffed that last candy into his mouth, and I thought you covered it so well by shutting us out until his parents got home to see the aftermath. I was ~rotfl~ so hard I had tears coming down my face. tee hee
What can I say, another epic!! Brilliant as always!!
more more more ... please 
