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cloe101
Its great keep up the great work I can't wait to read what happens next post soon.Please? sad.gif I can't wait!Really I can't *taps foot* Hurry. Just kidding.
Anglophile92
it's good. All you really need is to fix your grammar and puncuation. Also, you need to make them a bit more longer. I feel like you're rushing it. But anyways continue with it! biggrin.gif
r&h212
Please please write some more. It's soo good and I love fanfics that are about Ron and Hermione. I love the part when Ron yells that he loves Hermione too, kind of cliche but I love it anyways. Go Harry for that brilliant idea. Please post and soon.
Daniels_Girl
WOW! HOLY MOTHER! That was great!!! It was a little rushed, but Fantabulous!! haha I loved this part:

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like a cannon, hermione raced down the steps and into ron's arms.



hahah like a cannon! What a great discripture!! hahaha I laughed so hard! GO HARRY! WOOO!! I loved how he kissed her! That was amazing. There were a few grammar problems, so may I suggest a Beta? But otherwise, I want more! I Loved it! Please conitnue!!



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Krystal~*
I Love Dan Radcliffe
Hey,

This is great. I'm a great Harry/Ginny shipper so I love it. Please let them get back together! It has to happen! I'm begging you to get them back together! Keep it up, this is brilliant.

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true
RHrTrueLove
OOOH!
Your story is great!
I love the plot! Oh and i'm a R/hr and a H/G shipper! I made my own fanfic like this too! (Check my siggy!)
Post more soon!
r&h212
I think chapter could hopefully lead to a H/G romance, I'm such a H/G shipper. I think it would be really great if they got back together. Post soon. Great chapter.
Daniels_Girl
Hey! Great man! Keep it up! I hope Ginny and Harry get back together!!! I'm a total supporter of them!! Can't wait for more!
r&h212
Aww............that was so great and happy and sad all at the same time. The end?? So you're not writing anymore?? Ah well. That was a great chapter.
Caitlin in Australia
That was great drhpluvr4! First time to ever read it and I loved it! Will there be more or is that the end? Please tell me soon!

Caity
drhpluvr4l
this is the end of the story. i couldn't think of a way to end it, so i stopped with something that implied they were back together. wow i didn't think you guys would like it so much! I think i'm going to write another fic about ginny and harry as adults
---thanks!!!
Hermie122
Oh yes, please do! I'll watch for it too! You are a very good writer, and I am so glad that you are thinking about writing more.
krisiebug88
All I can say is wow! your such a good writer. You should continue to write more. great job on your fanfic and I hope to read more from you. biggrin.gif
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