Oooo, I love it!!! I love reading about Harry with a family! You have a fun way of writing. It makes me want to keep reading. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more!

Cheers!

Hey,

I loved it! I thought it was cool that Grace had "special powers". That's so cool! I can imagine it though, Harry being a powerful wizard and Ginny being a powerful witch, they had to produce a powerful child. I hope they produced two, and soon-to-be three! Anyways, great story, keep it up and update soon!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

WOW! I realy like it! Keep it up good chum!

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Oh my goodness! What's wrong with Grace? Oh, I hope she's all right. I'm sure she's going to be, but the poor little girl. I think Harry is really the best person to help, since he's the only one who had to deal with a scar like hers. How sad! I can't wait to read the next part!

Cheers!

That was a great chapter drhpluvr4l!

What is wrong with Grace? Why did the bookshelf fall on Damon? Wow this story is full of unanswered questions!

Please write more soon!

Caity

That's so sweet, Harry having a girl with Ginny.. and with the most beautiful name.. GRACE That's my name!!!
This story seems interesting!! Hermione and Ron 9 childreeeen?!?!?!?! hahahaha that's really cool!!
Keep it going!!!

Great chapter drhpluvr4l! I really like the idea that no-one knows what is so special about Grace. Please write more soon!

Caity

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That was a great chapter! I can't wait to read the next bit. I wonder how hogwarts has changed? Will Grace's scar hurt again? And if it does, what will Harry do? He'll be at Hogwarts teaching defense, right? Yeah. It would be fun to see him teaching a class with Grace in it. Hmmm....

I really like how you've portrayed Harry so far. He's so sweet! But I do think you ought to remember that, as sweet as he can be, he has a quick temper. I don't think that's just how he was as a teenager. I thinkit might have cooled off a bit, but it's still there. He's also not a suck-up or a wimp. What I mean to say is, if Harry taught Grace's defense class and Grace didn't want to do something, I don't think he would say, "Oh honey, that's alright." He might want to, but I think instead he would tell her to deal with it, in a nice way of course, and make her do it anyway.

Sorry, just a suggestion. I hope you pot more soon!

Cheers!

That was great!!! I loved Grace's reaction to being a Parselmouth! Priceless. But even better was when she talked to Harry about it.

AWESOME! I LOVE IT! What will Grace do without a wand? Hmmm... I am very anxious! Please write more really soon so I can find out!

Amy

I love it! Grace's reation to being a Parselmouth was brilliant. Her character is how I would imagine a daughter of Harry would be like. Almost all of the characters are nailed. Harry is out of character. He always has, is, and will be quick tempered. Also, personily, I don't think he will ever grow out of his cheeky-ness and he will never be that mature. It is just creepy. Other than that, I can't find any character flaws. Like I said before, you nailed the characters, 'cept Harry. Overall, it is fantastic and quite entertaining. I can't wait for the next post!

~Prod

Oh yes yes YES!!! That was PERFECT!!! I am so excited for the next chapter! The way you portrayed Harry... brilliant! I was afraid that you would have him favor Grace, but you didn't. It was AWESOME!!! Please post the next part ASAP. I really love that you post so often. It's nice to not have to wait around for forever. I mean, I do have to wait around some, but at least not too much. Anyway, excellent job! Keep it up and I seriously cannot wait to read what happens next! I hope the Potter family is all right!

Cheers!

Brilliant!!!!!!!

Wow! Great chapter as usual! drhpluvr4l, you are a great writter!

Grace apparated!
Ginny in Labour!
Something wrong!
Scars Hurt!
Someone calling Mom!

These all great parts to you story! Please update soon!

Caity

Yay! You have Harry nailed, temper 'n' all! Yay! I loved how you wrote the DADA class, with Grace expecting special treatment, and then Harry Not treating her any different than anyone else. I loved that.
Is Ron a teacher? How did he get into Hogwarts? I found this a little unrelistic, the whole Ron/Harry thing. I don't think that a proffesor is allowed to just desert his class. It doesn't make sense. Overall, this is wounderfull! You have talent. Post soon!


~Prod

No, Ron is not a teacher; he works at the ministry. I am not sure exactly how he got there, but I think it might have to do with apparating, and then going in, seeing as how he is in the official government, lol. Again, I'm not positive how it happened, but the important thing is that it did.

I will write more to the story soon

~~~drhpluvr4l

^^^oops, I forgot to answer your other question. Harry does not always think things through when he is determined; he knew what was important to him, told the headmistress, and got the heck outta there, lol.

wowie! that all was great! but, ginny might die, and graces sister...*sob* too sad. is grace going back to hogwarts? is ginny going to be okay? i can't stand it! this story is somewhat like mine, but not exactly. hmmm, i wonder what would happen if i took some of your ideas...lol, don't worry, i won't take your ideas!

ok, post soon!
Ginny Winter

That was fantastic! Everything was perfect - Harry's reaction and having to be stunned - everything! But what was it that went wrong? Why do all of the Potters suddenly have episodes with pains in their scars? What's going to happen to Ginny? Oh, please post very soon. Please!

Cheers!

Great chapter! The suspence is killing me because I want Ginny to live. Please don't let Ginny pass away like their second daughter. Please update soon!

Caity

Hi

That is so sad. Poor Potters and Wealseys because Ginny lost her memory. I hope all turns out well.

Caity

P.S. update soon!

That was absolutely awful... in a good way. What I mean to say is that Ginny losing her memory is absolutely awful, but that you did a very good job writing it! Keep it up! Oh gosh, I feel absolutely horrible for Harry and Grace! And Ginny, for that matter. It must be beyond frustrating to not remember anything. And we still don't know what the deal with the scars is! What is happening?! Is VM coming back? What?! Please post more soon!

Cheers!

*cries* poor grace! i feel so sorry for her! your mother not knowing who you are...*shudders* this reminds me of the book and movie A Little Princess. will ginny get her memory back like sarah's father? hmmm...i bet you won't tell me, oh well...

Ginny

*sob* this story is really sad...but, why did draco grab grace? and again, is grace ever going back to hogwarts? i hope so...oh, does arthur have the scar? i am very curious...

post soon!
Ginny

Great chapter drhpluvr4l! Please write more. I can't believe that Draco tried to take Grace and that Ginny doesn't have a memory. I feel so sorry for them.

Caity

This is so incredibly depressing! Again, in a good way. I wonder what the heck Malfoy wanted with Grace. And will Ginny ever regain her memory? Poor Harry. Poor Grace. Harry's reaction was perfect, by the way. And what Ginny said was heartbreaking. Please post more soon! I love this story!

Cheers!

Great chaper! Please write more. I am happier that harry has started explaining everything to Ginny and she is listening. I feel so sorry for Harry!

Caity

i have to do this again...*sob* poor, poor harry...that was weird though...it almost seemed like ginny remembere something when harry mentioned arthur... or am i just being paranoid? hmm...again, i'm guessing you wont tell me...

Ginny

Yay! I get so excited whenever I see that you've posted more. That was great. But you're right, it didn't end very well. No offense. I guess that's my way of encouraging you to WRITE MORE!!!!!

Yeah, that about covers it. I love this fic so much! Please post more soon!

Cheers!

I loved it! Although I'm sad that it's over. I still don't understand why the whole family had their cars hurting. When you say that you are writing another story, do you mean another Grace Potter story, or something completely different. Because I love this story SO MUCH!!! Whatever you do, though, I'll bet it'll be great.

Thanks for a fun read!

Cheers!

I am going to try and answer your questions. I was going to explain why their scars hurt in the story, but I couldn't find a place to fit it in, so I'll just tell you here. Every time that Grace, or Harry's, scar hurt, something was happening to someone. First Grace's scar hurt when Damon was in trouble, and then hers and Harry's (and littel James's, too) hurt when Ginny was in trouble. At the end, it was a happier feeling when everything was better, so I think that the scar was acting as a connection between the people in their family that don't have scars. It's wierd, but that's why.

I am not going to write any more about Grace, but I think I am going to write one abou HP/GW getting married, or something along those lines.

Thanks for your posts,

drhpluvr4l *~*

Cool! That makes things make lots more sense, knowing about the scars. That is a really good idea!

Oooo, I can't wait to read about Harry and Ginny getting married! Is it going to be chaptered or one-shot? It would be cool if you made it chaptered and had it start with Harry asking Ginny to marry him. That would be totally awesome! I can't wait to read it!!!

Cheers!

It's going to be chaptered, and it is called "This is It". I already have one chapter up, and the next will be up shortly.

That was a brillant story. I loved the plot lol
Well I was happy that Ginny got her memory back. After all that Harry's been through he didn't deserve that to happen.
Bye-bye
mjane95

I thought that the story was really good and had a great ending! I loved that story, but some things were abit strange. I guess Hogwarts had to change a bit, because you can't apparte on hogwarts grounds. One thing, I think you might want to make a tiny note that there is a little bit of times where younger kids may want to avoid. Other then that, it is great! I am happy Ginny got her memory back, and that everyone turned out to be okay (besides that baby girl) lukily you did not mention her that much so the readers couldn't greive that much. A well known character is so awful to see gone! I can't wait for your next story!

Lachy

Oh my god. You don't have any idea how much I cried. My aunt just called and I had a trembly voice she asked why I was crying and I said Harry Potter, and she laughed! That was such a loving story, oh how I wish you could write more it's so sad but yet so joyful.

omgosh i love this fic!! it's soo sad tho *sobs* but in the end love always wins lol the end was so good!! i wish u would write more tho!!
harry_potter_5678

Oh yes, you should continue it throughout Grace's year at Hogwarts maybe?? And then some other plot twist. Huh huh??? Please I love your stories.

Hi

Wow! That was a great chapter and a great ending. I cried reading when Grace had the idea for bringing back Ginny's memory and when it worked. That part is written so well.

I am sad it has finished but the ending was happy.

Caity

That was so adorable! I just had to read it all....
I love the name Grace, it sounds odd, but thats actualy why I desided to read this fic. Then I found out that it was finished! I thought it would be longer!
In HBP it says that Ollivander was taken away, so either you forgot about that or he somehow comes back, you deside!
At the start Grace seems a little young considering she was either an old 10 or 11. But she matured as she went on, to her rightfull age.
I would absolutely die if my loved ones couldn't remember me! Poor Harry, they must be so relieved shes back!

Awesome ! Awesome ! and Awesome!
I am flattered !
the fic was toooooo good.
i congratulate you and hope to read more of your lovely works

Love
Aishwarya (magical_angel02)

You should right more fan fics . I thought it was really good that the ideal love can heal anything. I have a question requarding you fic though why do harry's children have scars. I thought the only reason Harry had one because voldermont, its just a thought.