Wow! I'm sure this will be a really exciting Fan Fiction. I think that if you write another chapter to this it would be great for the Fan Fic contest. I really like how you made a different twist in your story which I don't think other people would do. I hope you'll write more!!

Thanks~~

Sounds like a good start so far... characterization for Harry and Hermione is looking good... and nice grammar, which goes a long way with me! My only question is how this relates to the 1984 theme, but I expect that we'll be seeing soon enough. Also, is this a chaptered or one-shot story that you're just posting in segments? Keep up the good work, and good luck in the fanfic contest.

Hey Daniels_girl,

Just remember that for this comp, we're only accepting one-shot fics, meaning fics that can be told in a chapter. If you want to do more with the theme, extending what you have with more action and detail is a good way of going about it.

Posting entries on the forums is a really good idea if you want to get feedback before you finally submit your work, as other people can give you tips and pointers on your writing and pick you up on any errors. Glad to see you're so keen!

Cheers,
There Goes My Gun
VTM Fan Fiction

Yes this is all I have written so far, and I know that it has to be one chapter, I'm just seeing if I have any good shot at it, and thank you guys so much for the comments, I'm going to update soon. And Anthony, It will show why it has that title. So yeah thank you, I'm getting excited to write this one!

Hey Krystal!

I just read it all, and I like it:) Tho, I to wonder where the title '1984' comes in...... but you'll get to that later I bet.

Is Bekka a witch? I didn't catch if you said she was or not.

Hmmm....... what happened to Harry's scar? It is a cliffhanger, heehee. Please up date soon, I wanna know what happened to it.

Peace mate,

-Alison the great

Hey Krystal! I read you story through twice -- and to say the least: wow! Tho kind of like rons1trulove, i dont see where 1984 will fit in. no matter. what you have written so far is great. i look foward to reading the next post. Keep it up!
-Pheonix

haha man I am in like the greatest weirdest mood ever!! haha anyways, yes a lot of people have asked that question about the title, so I will say this... The story revolves around when Harry was born. So yeah...but I hope that it goes alright, and thank you guys for the replies! Love ya lots!

Hey!
I didn't even think of that: 1984: story revolves around the time Harry was born. Very intelligent!! I am soo eager for the next chapter!!
See you around the Forums, Krystal!

-Pheonix

this is a interesting fan fic so far.
i was starting to wonder about the title. this story to me has lots of promise so make sure you don't stop writing no matter what!
i want to hear more!

wow, you guys really think so? wow, I didn't think it was that good. I liked my other one better but now I have more motivation for this story! Thank you guys! It means a lot to know that people like my writing! umm...man I was gonna say something else...I totally forget...I have a slight cold right now so yeah I like Blaahhh...haha Yeah now I remember, So do I have any chance at the Contest? Thats why this story is in the forums to see if I have a chance.

P.S. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully it's up soon! Love you lots! See ya!

Wow, that was a little.... confusing but i bet you'll clear it all up in your next post.


-Alison

Yes Alison I will! I think...But yeah I'll write more soon! Love you!

Hi there, please check out the rules here. One liners are not allowed on the vtm forum. Thanks Shane

Hey!!! Sorry i havn't been around for a while. Exams. Stupid to have exams in the first few weeks. Whatever. Your last chapter was a tad bit confusing. But hey, It was still great. I Love the little scene with Harry and Ginny being interrupted by Cho. LOL! Great work!!! Also i think that you should give titles to your chapters. I think it would help us understand fisrt-off whats happening. Besides that... Keep it up! I am waiting eagerly fo the next post. See ya

-Pheonix

Yeah I've been hearing it's confusing, but it makes sense in my head! hahaha well if you read what the story is about it says that the chosen one isn't supposed to be here, that might help a lil tiny itty bitty bit haha, so yeah! I'll update sometime! Thanks for commenting! Cya

Please update soon. I want to know what happens next. Hurry up. I love this story!!

Keep up the good work!

~Caitlin~

Ok, I'll try work on it. I don't really know where to go on this one but I'll sit down and think about it alright?

Wow! Sorry it's taken so long on this story, but I FINALLY got an Idea so the next chapter will be up shortly!!

Nice one! *winks*

It was definately worth waiting for. Two Dumbledores! That is completely insane!! I love it! And ontop of all that, Snape witnessing Harry make out with Ginny! Whoa! I didn't Snape was so .... you know... cruel. Great Idea(s)!

I love your story so much. Your are an amzing writer! Keep going. Don't ever stop.

Sorry this is such a short post. I don't have much time today.
I promise, a longer one next time.

Peace!

~ Pheonix

haha what do you mean short? That was a really good review! Thank you so much! The next story I'm going to update is Loose Tongue, so be sure to check it out ight? haha well talk to you later! Bye!

Whoa! No way! Two....Dumbledores! That's insane! !!!!!! Please update again soon soon soon.

-~*~-@lis0n-~*~-

Ahhh! D_G,

I can't take it anymore....
I am going through major withdrawl for your story. Two Dumbledores! Why do you leave us with such an amazing cliffhanger!!!??? Argh!
I am glued to my computer hoping that you will update soon. Please do so!

Sorry for the short post. It is just that I couldn't help myself from replying.... Always hoping for a new installment....

Anyway. Please post a new chapter soon. Thanks!

Peace

~Pheonix

Oh wow!!

Excellent job!!

I love the confusing plotline.

Reminds me of the time-traveling in PoA!!

Very clever.

Post Soon!!!

wow...I just read what I wrote, It's kinda good hey? I kinda like it! But yeah I'm gonna go work on it right now! I'm getting excited for this one! haha

Whoa... wha... ?.. he... Brilliant! Oh my! That was amazing. I just love the plot!! Whoop! Yeah!

Wow.

That was incredible.

One of the cleverest FanFics I have ever read.

PLEASE post soon!!

You are amazing.

Wow! Thank you Lisa! Wow..... I feel so...so special!!! Thank you so much! I'm working on them so hopefully they'll be up soon!

Whoa! Nice one D_G.

Sorry I'm late in replying. I have so many things to do. Whatever. I have to live with it.

Now about your installment. It is brilliant. It really is. You really went into depth about the Double Dumbledor's. It is still missing a little something which I am unable to place. But otherwise it is completely excellent.

Also Harry turning his back on them both and storming out of DD's office without a word. One: Written accurately and perfectly. You set the mood magnificently. And Two: Wow! Harry! I didn't know you had it in ya! Kudos!

Sorry once again that this is such a short reply. I wish I had more time. I am out of my head waiting for your next installment[s]. Thanks!

PEACE!

~Pheonix

That was great! Harry not being born is wierd but cool in a wierd way! Please update soona and also please update Behimd a face, A Ginny Kind of Love and Loose Tongue. I am waiting in suspence for all the updates.

~Caitlin~

Hey
I just read your story so far and it's really good.
I like the plot
Pleeeeeeeease update soon, I beg you

Pheonix2Fire: You never have short reviews! I Love reading what you have to say! And if it comes to you let me know what I'm missing. Is it something in the plot, or just something that makes the story lose pazzaz? Well let me know.

Caitlin in Australia: Yeah I heard it was weird. That's why it's called 1984. People have been asking about that. And as for my other stories, well, As we speak I'm trying to work on Behind a Face, There's only about 100 words and I have not Idea where to go from there. And it's a lil hard cuz it's 3 in the morning. And I just did one for Ginny, and Loose Tongue I didn't think anyone liked so I've put that one on hold. And for this one, I've got about 300 words for my next chapter already done. But that's not nearly enough, so I'm working on it!

mjane95: Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it! And yes the plot is quite interesting. I keep surprising myself with where I go on these. If you want you can check out my other stories, Behind a Face (Apparently very popular) A Ginny Kind of Love, and Loose Tongue. So if you do, Enjoy! And I shall look forward to replies from you! Keep reading!


Love you all!

Love:
Krystal~*

WOW! I am speachless. That was absoulutly wonderful. I can't believe what the Dumbledores did to Harry. Not even telling him. Wow, a young Lily and I think I know who the other boy is. ...James... (just a wild guess, but I might be right). Please update soon! I love this story and can't wait for more.

~Caitlin~

Yeah it is James! Glad you liked it! Yeah I don't know where i'm going with this story and all, but yeah, I hope you like it!

Really clever story you got there, mate. I am impressed. I can't wait to find out how Harry will resolve this mess. Good job.

Hi Daniels_girl

Please update this story soon becasue I love Lily yelling at Harry even though they are the same age. I also like James walking down stairs to find an almost exact repilca of himself.

~Caitlin~

HIYA HEY! Shyeah so yeah, about my story kinda alright hey? I like it but yeah read my other updates!

Hey Daniels_girl!

Please update soon becasue I want to read this story. I hope Harry isn't eraised!

~Caitlin~

P.S. My next chapter is up: 'A lot of Surprises'

Hey Caitlin! I'm gonna try work on it soon, I'm having some problems right now that I have to work through, and I haven't had time to write more. So I'll do it soon!

Hey Krystal,
Well, I popped in to read 1984, like you suggested. And well WOW. This is really good and original. I like it how you've gone for the twist-in-the-original-plotline idea instead of another romance. Very good - I like mysterious stories that make you wonder.
If you like, I can beta it as well as the other. I only noticed a few mistakes though, so it wouldn't take me long.
My favourite part was-

Hey D_G!

Once again, I apologize for replying so late. Excellent addition mate! Really good. So many things going on.

First of all. How could Dumbledore do this to Harry!?? Then again, I suppose that it's for his own good. I'm loving it! And Ginny is there with him. Wow! At least Harry doesn't have to be alone on his little quest type of thing.

The scene with Ginny and Harry was outstanding. Extremely emotional! You set the mood perfectly. You use the exact words needed.

haha wow! I wrote those?! I read both of your replies (bellatrixlestrange, and Pheonix2Fire) You both put quotes and I totally don't know my own story haha! I was like what?! But yes thank you for reviewing and Bella if you have time you can be my Beta of course! Thank you Pheonix for replying, You always have so much to say! I'm working on the next chapter right now....not going the best. And the thing is, I don't think they actually know Harry and Ginny, but they don't seem to mind that they're there. I kinda figured that would be a problem when I was writing it. And thank you for saying that I set the mood. I'm actually starting to get proud of my work. I know it's not 100% but It's getting better than it used to....not to mention my story "The Game" But yes, I'll work on my update soon ok? Thank you for replying! Bye for now!

Hiya Krystal!
That's what I'm here for. When I reply, I try to get in as much as possible. Being a writer myself, I find it helpful to recieve in depth replies from readers. Though, I know sometimes that's not the case...

I really did love your last chapter. And I have no doubt in my mind that the next installment will be even better (Even if you think it's not going too well...)

All in all. Thanx for replying to my post. I hope you don't mind my replies... and I hope they are helpful.

Anyway. I am eagerly waiting for your next installment. I am hooked on to your story! Thank you for your support!

Oh and by the by, thanks for your reply on my thread, the other day. It was very kind of you.

I'll see you soon,

-Jordan

Oh my gosh! I can't believe I missed your last update! I am so so sorry!!!

Well, anyways...

Hey D_G
I just read your latest chapter and I only have one word, Fantastic
I beg you to update soon

Well I'll work on it as soon as I get home! Thank you so much for replying to my story! I'm gald you liked it!

I really hope you do write more, I really like your story, it's so original, and I am really curious as to what will happen . . . well, with everything. Good job, mate.

I'm working on it as we speak so who knows when It'll be up hopefully soon !

Daniels_girl that was wonderful!!! I abosoutly loved it I esspesically liked when Ginny saw her parents makeing out when her and Harry were doing that when they were taken back in time. This will be hard to get Lily and James together when they don't really like each other.

Please update soon because I love this story!

Caity

haha yeah, I thought it was a weird chapter, But yeah I hped people liked it. So thank you for replying and for your positive reply.

Hey Krstal! Rockin' Update!! I laughed so hard at the part where Ginny saw her Parents making out. !!! That was so GREAT!

-Alison