wow...that was awesome..but sad
really sad!!!
keep up the good work tho
harry_potter_5678

That is so sad! But so well written! Good job! I wish there was more, like of what happened in the final battle and then when they brought im to the hospital, but I suppose that's a false hop. It is a one-shot, unfortunately. *sigh* Anyway, great job! I loved it!

Cheers!

Wow. That was very good.

I liked your writing a lot. And poor Ginny, living a quiet life. I wish there was more, but I guess you can't write anymore since there ins't much to write about. I really loved this story.

And the ending. It was very well written, and this whole story was a peice of beauty. I loved it soo much.

This story was beautifly written and was so sad!! I can't even immagine how it would feel to be Ginny! It was so good!!
<3Courtney

it is soooo sad! But really well written. But I don't want Harry to die!

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Even though Harry had died here, I liked the story more than I would if the hero stood standing. Since death is something people face, it's written on paper natrually. I could write it without hesitation of the mood but with my own feelings yes.

But this story overall, was just wonderful. You should get to writing more fanfics.

WOW your right that was really sad *tear*

you wrote it so well and i think you described h/g feelings very acurately!

are you planning on writing any more fics?

i would love to hear your take on the final battle!

kayleighxxx

Hey Rory Taylor, I was sitting at my computer and just flipping through different stories when I saw yours. I opened it and began to read. Wow. That was one great story. You told a simple story that had nothing but raw emotion and real feeling to it. That is hard to do anytime, for anyone. What made it so god for me though was that it wasn't cluttered with sub plots or too much information. It was a nice, simple moment in time. How wonderful. Not that I think Harry dying is wonderful, but the story was written superbly. Great work and I think I might seek out other stories of yours now.

wow that was really good, it ws simple wich was great. you could really feel the characters pain.great job!