So this is a one-shot? Okay, got it.

Suggestions: Do something about the lyrics. Maybe you can make them cursive, just to point out it doesn't really belong to the story?
It's a little hard to read now... and you could get rid of all those ~~~~ thingys. *twinkle*

Other than that. Who, pretty tough to split up on your wedding day, in front of the preacher. *lol* Maybe you could spend some time and work on it a little? Like tell the reasons she fell for Malfoy at first... write a little more about the splitting up... such things. It's really short, and leaves a lot of questions unanswered...
And also I saw quite a few spelling mistakes "care less" you wanted to say, not "careless", right? Things like that. Just run over it again.

And I wouldn't say the story sucks, no. But if you took some time and work over it, it would be so much better. *twinkle*
I really like the way you added lyrics... I always do that, too. *lol*

Still I am really glad Ron got the girl in the end. *lol*

Take care, Flutterflie

Wait...I thought Hermione hadn't seen Ron in years...why was he at her wedding? And what suddenly made Draco so lovey-dovey? Aside from that it's very sweet.

What do you mean Draco being famous? I didn’t think he was, do you mean Lucious, because of the ministry, I don’t get it. I think you could improve and add a little more detail. But apart from all that it’s good.

HermioneWeasley2

this is good! the ending was a bit rushed...couldn't Hermione have begged for Ron's forgiveness? anyway, ignore me...this is really good! I like the idea! i just did a songfic.

OK IDK ABOUT ANYTHING.......That is why I MIGHT be writing a prequel!



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Hey I just read your fic. It was an interesting read! I enjoyed it. The only thing I didn't like was the end was a bit rushed. You could have more conversation between Ron and Hermione, and a little more passion. But I really enjoyed the story! Well done! Keep up the good work!!

:lol:Hey I know the ending was rushed.....I can't help it.....when I finished the story......my mind was drawing blanks......so I finished it the was it was.......I might add a prequel........If I do then it will go on harrypotterfanfiction.com first.....my name on there is ronxdraco and I currently have 4 stories out now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well actually I think it was good for a short story. It is baised on the Maria Carey video of We Belong Together so everything that ronxdraco has written is accurate. Maybe we needed to know a bit more about why Hermione said yes to Draco but its a short story baised on the song and in the song and the video it doesnt really explain why Maria is getting married to the old man and then rins off with the boy lol.

Keep up the good work ronxdraco

Thank you, HP number one Fan!! I meant for the story to be kinda based off the video.......But as I've said like 10,000 times, I MIGHT make a prequel!!!!
xoxo
Ronxdraco

Wow, I really, really liked this!!!

I also picked up on the fact it was based on the video, I thought that was clever! I think that there was good detail in parts that needed it, and Hermione's thoughts were really well developed.

It's definetly one of the best 'story written to song' type of fan fics I've read!!! Keep up the great work!

*Padfoot*

PS: I know you've already said it a bazzillion times, but I think a sequel would be a really good idea to this story!

Hey, I liked it! Hermione and Ron! Happy ending... I like happy endings...

It was good, it really was. It would be funny if you wrote a sequel, it really would

awww thanks guys!!!!! I don't know if I'm going to make a prequel...I have 4 stories out on Harry Potter Fan Fiction and 2 aren't nearly finished....if i do make one then it will be after the 2 are finished !!! Well on HPFF my screen name is ronxdraco

The way you wrote that fic totally fit with the words! I loved it you should write a sequal to it about hermione and ron!! Great job!!

I know the we belong together song, and I was like singing it while I read the story, and the song and story fit together really well. prequels can be very hard to write, so you might want to try a sequel, I would really love that,

wonderful,
-->nymphadora

how could hermione and draco ever get toghter in the first place ewww!!!I always think that it would hermione and ron in end and I think that is true in this story. I like your story though, keep on writing more fan fics ,
krisiebug88