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ILoveHarryPotter07
hey Ferme!!
I loved it!! It was soo good and I like the song. Even though I am a Hr/R shipper i think Hermione and one of the twins would be cute too tongue.gif!! Your Fred and Hermione ships are great!! I also love your Luna Siggy!!!!
Ferme
smile.gif Hi XOXILoveHarryPotter07XOX,
Thanks for the review, really appreciate it. biggrin.gif I’m a R/Hr shipper too but like the idea of Fred and Hermione together. Glad you liked it. biggrin.gif

Em smile.gif
Caoo
Heya, Em! biggrin.gif

I think this was one of your better fanfics smile.gif The story matched perfectly well with the song. Also, everything were very well written. And I just loved the end!
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Instead of following her head like she usually did, she followed her heart and kissed him back.

That was beautiful. I love the way you write Hermione's thoughts and acts, and how you describe her. Also, the fact that she is a bit ashamed, and that she too knows it should have been Ron tongue.gif
There's nothing else to say than that I love it, and that you've done a magnificent job! smile.gif Well done, and keep the good work up!

Huge hugs, Caoo
x phoenix lament x
oOh! great fanfic/start you have there! i absolutely adore fred and george. so i look forward to reading more. post soon! =]
Ferme
smile.gif Hi,
Caoo- thanks for the review, glad you like the ending, biggrin.gif I hoped people would like that bit, my favourite part to write. Thanks again for the review, really appreciate it. smile.gif

x phoenix lament x- thanks for reviewing, biggrin.gif this is a one-shot so won’t be updating on this one, but may do another Fred and Hermione fic, if I do it won’t be for a while.

Em biggrin.gif
x phoenix lament x
oh gee. i wasn`t expecting a one shot. OOHKAY then. I`ll just excitedly wait for you to make another fred or george one! =]

thanks.
Joy
Very nice, i liked it a lot smile.gif If i have to be honest, at first when i was reading the books, you know, before everybody started talking about Ron and Hermione getting together and all, i had this little thought about Fred and Hermione, I don't know why, i just like Fred and George so much, especially Fred( weird, isn't it blink.gif to prefer one of the twins) I think The troublemaker he is, he is the opposite of the know-it-all Herm is, so i was like, hey, this might actually work! Though now i think it'll be R/Hr. Anyways, you really presented it just the way i think Hermione would react in the situation, always thinkig first, you caught her character and you didn't rush things. I generally like your fics, so keep up, you're doing good!

Take care
Joy
Learn From This Mistake
Wow, Ferme, this was really awesome! It is generally much more cheerful than your other Hermione/Fred one was, although that one was really, really powerful too. They are so poetic and so lovely to read! Post another soon, please!
--xo, E.
Ferme
Hi,
Joy- thanks for the review. biggrin.gif I agree with R/Hr but I like the idea of Fred and hermione together. I wasn’t sure if I got the reactions of the characters right , glad you liked it. thanks again for the review, really appreciate it. smile.gif

Learn From This Mistake- thanks. Glad you liked it. biggrin.gif I thought I’d go for a more cheerful fred/hermione fic this time. laugh.gif Thanks for reading my other one, might do another f/hr one, not sure yet though. Thanks once again for the review. smile.gif

Em
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