Very nice, i liked it a lot

If i have to be honest, at first when i was reading the books, you know, before everybody started talking about Ron and Hermione getting together and all, i had this little thought about Fred and Hermione, I don't know why, i just like Fred and George so much, especially Fred( weird, isn't it

to prefer one of the twins) I think The troublemaker he is, he is the opposite of the know-it-all Herm is, so i was like, hey, this might actually work! Though now i think it'll be R/Hr. Anyways, you really presented it just the way i think Hermione would react in the situation, always thinkig first, you caught her character and you didn't rush things. I generally like your fics, so keep up, you're doing good!
Take care
Joy