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ILoveHarryPotter07
Wow! this is so beautifully written and it is a beautiful story line please continue soon!! I loved it!!
padfootchick14
Ooooooh, so sad! I really sympathyze with Ginny, especially considering that I am an H/G and an R/Hr shipper. But it is pure poetry; so beautifully written. I hope you continue soon!

~Gerry's Gurl~
Herminia
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Wow! this is so beautifully written and it is a beautiful story line please continue soon!! I loved it!!


Thanks smile.gif


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Ooooooh, so sad! I really sympathyze with Ginny, especially considering that I am an H/G and an R/Hr shipper. But it is pure poetry; so beautifully written. I hope you continue soon!


It's really meant to be a tragedy for all involved. I see so many post-war fan fics that have Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny moving on and being happy, and I don't think that's wholly accurate, given all they've been through sad.gif

Ordinarily, I must say that I dislike Ginny, but writing this I felt heartbroken for her.
Ginny Winter
wow, so beautiful...and sad...so, lemme guess...you're a H/Hr shipper, right? just guessing...well, i'm just saying that you are a WONDERFUL writer and that you had better update soon!

Regan
Herminia
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wow, so beautiful...and sad...so, lemme guess...you're a H/Hr shipper, right? just guessing...well, i'm just saying that you are a WONDERFUL writer and that you had better update soon!


Thanks smile.gif Yes, I do ship H/Hr and I'm - well - not a fan of the H/G pairing, yet writing this helped me to sympathize with the youngest Weasley.

I love your R/Hr/D icon wink.gif That's hilarious!
Ginny Winter
thanks (about the icon) i found all of them on photobucket. well, everyone has their own opinions i guess. me, i love the H/G pairing, and i think Ginny is the best! but, you can have your own opinion, i guess

Regan
razzberry2
Hiya Hermi smile.gif

I deleted your duplicate topic mate. wink.gif Now, on to the fic...

Once again you have excelled yourself! I don't ship either way (and if I remember correctly, you didn't ship H/Hr until you wrote your first fanfic about them?) tongue.gif but I found myself feeling rather torn.

On one hand, Ginny loves the guy, on the other hand, we all know she's not that lovable herself, yet I really couldn't help but feel for her. Its utter torture to love someone and not have them love you back, and you captured that with a gut wrenching honesty.

Harry's my favourite character in the books, and it tears me to think that he could marry one girl, yet harbour a secret desire for another, even Hermione. If he'd married Hermione I'd be fine with that, but to marry someone you don't love? *sigh* Just asking for disaster.

The style you chose to write in is perfect, surpassed only by your ability to actually stick within the bounds you set yourself ... really wonderful! smile.gif

I hope this isn't a one-shot. I feel the overwhelming need to see this through...
Herminia
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Once again you have excelled yourself! I don't ship either way (and if I remember correctly, you didn't ship H/Hr until you wrote your first fanfic about them?)  but I found myself feeling rather torn.


Yes -- it was kind of funny. I wrote it on a whim and convinced myself they'd be perfect together laugh.gif

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On one hand, Ginny loves the guy, on the other hand, we all know she's not that lovable herself, yet I really couldn't help but feel for her. Its utter torture to love someone and not have them love you back, and you captured that with a gut wrenching honesty.


I'm trying to convince myself to like Ginny too, which is why I wrote this. I don't see Harry/Ginny as a ship with lasting power, and since I've so vehemently disliked Ginny since OotP, I really needed to be able to sympathize with her as a fan fic writer so that I could write anything other than EVIL!Ginny in my fics. I am glad that came across in the torturous way that it did, because that's definitely how I'd feel, if I loved someone so much if he couldn't love me.

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Harry's my favourite character in the books, and it tears me to think that he could marry one girl, yet harbour a secret desire for another, even Hermione. If he'd married Hermione I'd be fine with that, but to marry someone you don't love? *sigh* Just asking for disaster. The style you chose to write in is perfect, surpassed only by your ability to actually stick within the bounds you set yourself ... really wonderful! 


blush.gif Thank you! smile.gif

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I hope this isn't a one-shot. I feel the overwhelming need to see this through...


Mm...tough question. I think I will continue it once my Year Seven piece is over and done with, but I haven't time to write both at the moment. Anyway, I am so very happy you enjoyed it, and even happier that you took the time to comment, as you always do. happy.gif
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