Hi there Ladydragon,
I need to point you in the direction of the rules forum and I strongly suggest you read them before posting again. The filtering system took out some cuss words that are not acceptable to use on this forum, so please be more careful in future. Also you're second post on this thread is a one-liner, which is against the rules as well.
Haveing read your fic, I very much liked the honesty with which you write. The characters also seemed rather true to themselves which made the whole scenario quite believable. I liked the way you eased us into what was happening through Ron's thoughts and emotions, he's a much more complex character than people give him credit for.
Is this a one-shot? Do you want me to add it to the completed list? Just let me know.
razz