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gog_sirius
good story over there, i like a lot the way your characters express, you know the dialogue it's pretty cool.
And you describe so well the feelings of Ron and all.. so sad for him.. but it's really good..!
Ladydragon379
Thanks gog_sirius. I am very glad that you like my fanfic.
Anglophile92
Wow! I must say you talent! I love reading all your fics! I loved the dialogue and the writing! Good job! No...WONDERFUL job! I'm impressed! biggrin.gif
razzberry2
Hi there Ladydragon,

I need to point you in the direction of the rules forum and I strongly suggest you read them before posting again. The filtering system took out some cuss words that are not acceptable to use on this forum, so please be more careful in future. Also you're second post on this thread is a one-liner, which is against the rules as well.

Haveing read your fic, I very much liked the honesty with which you write. The characters also seemed rather true to themselves which made the whole scenario quite believable. I liked the way you eased us into what was happening through Ron's thoughts and emotions, he's a much more complex character than people give him credit for.

Is this a one-shot? Do you want me to add it to the completed list? Just let me know. wink.gif

razz
Caitlin in Australia
Hi

That was a great fic. Will there be more or was it a one shot? Anyway it was great with honest feelings that I really like! You are a really great writter!

Caity biggrin.gif
ILoveHarryPotter07
Hye!!
I think this might be my favorite story by you!! I lvoe all your other ones too. But I never really thought of Ron and Pansy but I guess if Malfoy and Herminone get married thats how its gunna be. I love how you gave the charactors so much life! I also loved how you explained ron and pansys feeling so well you made me feel like I was them! It was a kind of sad story because I love r/hr but still fantastic!! So much talent in this fic!! Is it a one shot thought?? well if its not post soon!!!
~~Courtney
x phoenix lament x
wow! that was a great story with great characters and dialogue, and everything in between. I love your writing. please tell me that it wasn`t a one shot! =\

looking forward to MORE.
Learn From This Mistake
That was deliciously heart-wrenching! It was a great capture of all of those four characters, especially Pansy's and Ron's. They're exactly how I would imagine that if all of that happened. I have a kind of soft spot for D/Hr fics, but now I won't be able to read them without thinking of those reprecussions--which shows how amazing of a writer you are! Wow! I'm blown away!
xo
ILoveHarryPotter07
Hey ladydragon!!
Where are you?!? Please come on and post more soon(if this isn't a one shot) We all loved it!! Well update soon!!!! Bye
Courtney
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