Yeah, where's the next installment? You said you'll bring it up!
Shame on you, Jenny.

How can you possibly leave us waiting? *giggle*

Flutters

Oh dear! Im extremley sorry to have kept you waiting I icouldnt get on last night I was sorta sick you see. I fell asleep really eraly at like 6:30 and then slept all night I feel much better today and should have the chapter posted 20 minutes after I get home! Dreadfully sorry ya'll!!
Thanks for the comments though!
fjkrs (Jenny)

That's ok. I'll just wait. But try and hurry to get home this story is really good!

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Great chapter! I think Wood is writing a report on all happenings in this tournament or is writing a magazine of some sort, and Alicia ia helping him find out juicy things! Doesn't make sense but.... oh well! *lol* Great story, keep writing I'm loving it! Also I am also looking forward to Harry Potter And The Goblet Of Fire Movie which, for me, comes out December 1st!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

Hi again,
Well, that was a good chapter . It certainly has left me asking many questions....hmm.. ..I was a little outraged that Alicia was snooping for Wood and didn't actually care about Hermy and I thought that Hermy might have been a bit more upset at hearing and watching their conversation. And I agree with I Love Dan Radcliffe about what Wood is up to. Apart from that, I'm still confused over that rock.....
But, yeah, great chapter as usual!
Looking forward to the next installment!
Cheers,
Bella.
PS: I hope that you have fun at the premiere today/tonight/tomorrow (whichever one applies)! I live in Australia as well, so, as I Love Dan Radcliffe said, it's not out here until Dec 1. But I can't wait for then, because I'm going to the premiere!! Yay!

Oooooooooooohhhh! This is very juicy, very juicy indeed. I want two things to happen in your next chapter:

1) See the point of view of Harry or Ginny when they walk off (That's gonna be good if put into action ).
2) To get another clue to find out what Wood and Alicia are up to(That's gonna be good too!).

I hope you can incorpret these into your next chapter and hurry with it!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

dun dun dun, what is Wood doing? i want to know, lol, please post soon. yeh, i agree i want to know what happens between Ginny and Harry when they go off, lol.

HermioneWeasley2.

fjkrs - I told you. Please PM me - I constantly miss your chapters and I don't want to! So let me know next time - promise!

Okay, I do admit I was really slow on the uptake, but I guess I got it now. Wood is spying and taking pictures for a magazine. And Rita Skeeter is back... Hey, hold on... maybe Wood isn't Wood? Maybe Wood is Skeeter? But he/she kissed Hermione... awe, I am totally confused now. *lol*

But it is for the Daily Prophet. Rita wants revenge. *giggles* The stone is some kind of bug.
Oh my, I wonder what happens when it comes out that Harry and Hermy have kissed. Maybe Wood took a picture? Oh no, that would be horrible!
And now that whole love-thingy is open again. I mean, come on, Hermy is free and Ron doesn't love Lav-Lav. *giggles*

I hope you update soon - and let me know about it, hehe.

Flutters

dum dum dum dum


now everyone will know about hermiones and dracos "relationship"

how horrible... ron will be so angry....alicia and wood need to die!... and whats up with the stone... its kinda confusing... i have some ideas... but none of them are concrete yet... so ill keep them to muself...
waiting for more
cheers
lilred

OMG.............I just started reading this. It made me stay up until like two o'clock reading this. Its soooo good. I wish I could write like this. Where do you get all these good plots and ideas? AND where can I get some? Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read more .

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Whew..just got done of reading three full pages of your story. It's awesome so far! All the new twists and stuff. It's as though Hermione and I share the same brain when it comes to smarts (not so hard to believe )lol..joking there. But, I thought of Rita Skeeter too when Ron said article.
I love the story, and I'm now really sad that Hermione and Draco broke up. Hmm..Draco will take out his anger on Harry at the Quidditch Match because Harry's the one who kissed Hermy..oo, can't wait!

I also have a question. What happened to the idea of Filch and his wand?

Hey guys! I havent written the next chap I have started it but bleh! I am expeiriencing that nasty ole writters block tee hee anyways to answer a few questions.....

To all who asked: The rock will be explained in an estimate of 3 chapters teehee

I love dan: yes I will def incorporate your suggestions teehee and harry and ginny will be a very good bit

HermioneWeasley: Lol Wood shall be explained very soon my dear!

Flutt: Oh! I will be sure to pm you next chapter is up! I know what you mean i miss a lot of people updating as well! Plus on top pf all the holiday chaos it is crazy! WEll about Rita...teehee you'll see

Lilredhead: I am very intrested to know about your theories teehee I would be very pleased if you posted them once all is revealed just for predictions

r&h212: Hi wow thanks well i suppose all the stuff just kind of comes to me I always want something scandolous I would suggest for crazy ideas just trying to be as ridiculous as possible and add a whole lot of suspense that is what i do lol

HermioneResilda: Hehe you guessed right the quidditch match will be very fun and revengful indeed just wait! And Filch is still a major key to the whole puzzle so you'll see

Thanks everyone for the replies you all rock rock rock
The next chapter should be up by...Friday night possibly Saturday afternoon. Thanks again all!
Oh and in about...4 chapters the beginning of the innerhouse tournament should start! Yay!

Well thanks once again im really happy you all enjoy my fic!
bye now!
fjkrs

Muhaha, fjkrs, thanks for PMing me. *chuckles* I would have been so sad if I had missed that particular chappie. Oh my! Strip Quiddich!!!
I am in tears! Seriously! That piece was hilarious. *lol*
I imagine Ginny playing something like that... oh-oh... I don't know what to say! That was absolutely priceless.
Man, you come up with such great ideas. I thought you couldn't possibly top "kick the man" and the hair orgasm. Well, I obviously was wrong. Hehe.

Also, you got back to your "unexpected love" theme. Hehe. Hermione and Ron again. Now, I am anxious to see whom Hermy will finally end up with. I have a feeling Ron's her true love. But then again, I happen to be Ron/Hermione-shipper, so no wonder!

Keep it up, fjkrs, I so enjoy this! I think your fic is the one that constantly makes me laugh, and it's a nice change. *grin*

And as for my theories: yepp, it seemed I had quite a good guess. *lol* But I have to admit I have no idea who gets the piccies out of the castle. No, hang on. Filch. *lol* He is actin peculiar. So maybe it's Filch. *grin*
Awe, I guess I'll see soon enough.

Until then, Flutters

Hey,
Nice chapter! Aww! How sweet! That was so cute! I loved Ginny's little game and the way they kept arguing playfully. . They are so perfect for each other! Hehehehe and Harry is quite athletic, eh? *gives you a nudge*

I also liked the part where Ron was brave and stood up to Wood. I have a sneaking suspicion that Katie is the one who is giving Rita Skeeter the information/photos. Was Ron defending Hermione? I thought he was a little. Aww, he loves her so.

That was a great chapter. I really hope that you can post more soon and you don't have writer's block! Now, off you go, and start writing! lol.
Cheers,
Talk to you later,
Bella.

Hehehe! I loved the Harry and Ginny bit. Hehehe! I can't stop giggling, hehehe! *lol* Keep it up, and by the way... I wish I was Ginny.... hehehe! Post next chapter soon!

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Good news. Writer's block unblocked. I am working on the next chapter and should have it up very soon. Yay! And this is my 200th comment made by me! teehee but that is ok because its a comment telling everyone about my good news. So yay!
teeeeeheeeeee glad you all liked the chapter I was unsure about it
*invades a bakery* These brownies are becoming a real creative writting inspiration i love brownies
thanks all
fjkrs

ps i did yellow cause I love yellow and its comment 200 sorry if it is hard to read

lol, i loved that chapter, i was laughing all the way through strip quidditch, hehe, very romantic. Please update soon.

HermioneWeasley2.

Hey fkjrs,

Great chapter. Even thought it was a fill in one it was still great! I loved how Harry had his shirt backwards! I can't believe Ron fell for the wasp story! *LOL* Keep it up!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

Hey again,
Great chapter! I was almost rotfl during that chapter, but I managed to stay on my chair (for once.)

Hi there fjkrs! *wave*
And thanks for the PM. *lol*
I am here now. *chuckles*
I am reading and replying at the same time. Tabs are such a cool invention, and I only discovered them like last night. *slapsforehead*
Am I a computer engineer, or what? *giggles*

Hehe, I seem to be right with Filch. When the kids wondered whom of the teachers wouldn't be missed at the ball I instantly thought SNAPE. *lol*
I just saw GoF and his face at the Jule ball - priceless. *chuckles*
But they wouldn't miss Filch either, I guess. And I already suspected them.
You really made me wonder, though. I thought a squib was able to do a little magic, but not enough to count as a wizard. But I know I am wrong. Squibs are totally unmagical - just like muggles. I got confused with Lockhart, but he could do magic, just that he wasnt exactly powerful. So thanks for bringing that back into my mind. Hehe.

The wand thingy is cool, though. I guess nobody controls how many wands a wizard has. Hehe. Bet that was something Filch would kill for - an own wand. *chuckles* He really is depressive about not being able to do magic. And then he sticks around at Hogwarts. Silly man...

Cool Lavender broke up with Ron. By the way - eh, Dean... what a faithful friend you are! Shame on you!!!

Muhaha, a squib wand! Excellent, Jenny, this is just excellent! I am in tears! The ministry invents squib wands. *lmao*

Awe... how could you do that to me... first the squib wand, now the wasps... my notebook is all wet from my tears... not to mention my daughter won't go down for her nap with this roaring laughter of mine. Oh... That is hilarious! And Ron bought it - of course. Stupid Ron. *chuckles*

I hope you come up with more funny stuff in the next chappie. Hair orgasm, strip quiddich, squib wand, mental wasps... argh... *rotfl*

Flutters

Oh no, how did I miss so many chapters? LOL, it's okay, I'm all caught up now And excellent chapters they were. Mental wasps attacking? Ron's a bit daft, isn't he? But I loved the Harry/Ginny bit. I was dying of laughter at the strip quidditch And when Ginny said, "I like a man in uniform." Hehehe. The bit about Wood, Alicia, Filch, and Rita Skeeter is getting rather twisted... I can't wait to see what happens! And I have a feeling that it's going to bring Ron and Hermione together, at least for awhile

I'm express mailing you lots of brownies to help you hurry with the next chappie! And pop rocks. I rediscovered them over the weekend and, well, I love them crackling in my mouth

Cheers!
Meg

Great chapter. I liked the decorations when the house came out, one small mistake though.

Awe, a cliffie! Jenny, how could you do that to us?

But let's start at the beginning...
Wow, Ron and Lavendar are quiet the perfect match, if you ask me. They both snore.. *chuckles*
And are you being sarcastic? You say Hermione had a nice sleep in. Well, obviously she got up like seven o'clock or something! What do you consider sleeping in? If I didn't have a child that would wake me each and every day somewhere between 6:30 and 7:00 calling 'Mo-h-om, I am awa-h-ake!", at the weekends I'd sleep until 9:30 or so! Seriously!
Then I wondered about the colours. Okay, I see that Draco being the Slytherin leader had to wear purple undies, no doubt. But then again... *cough* The Slytherin colours are green and silver, just like Gryffindor are scarlett and gold. I am not sure about Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff, though.
Once again you made me laugh! The kids scaring each other - priceless. And you brought the mental wasps back. *lol* And calling Filch and old fart. *chuckles*
The decriptive entry of the competitors were great, too. But let me ask you one thing, for I am slightly confused. I thought the houses were going to work together? But now it is emphasised they compete. How does that work?
Sorry, I am a little slow on the uptake today, I have a terrible cold, and my head is all clouded.
However, good chappie.

Until then, Flutters

Hi!
I love Danile Radcliffe thanks so much lol i guess i was in a bit of a hurry? lol thanks it has been fixed.

Flutterflie: about Hermione sleeping in yes i was sarcastic. lol I wasn't really sure about the house colors so i imporvised I was told that Ravenclaw colors were Blue and Silver so I didnt want to risk the confusion of using silver for Slytherin and Ravenclaw. Sorry if it was confusing. I suppose this chapter was rushed because the next one is well on its way but long and going to take a bit longer. But not up too late. To clarify on the objective: The houses are competeing. lol its a bit confusing. They are entering into a tournament that will test them and make them work together. The motivation is winning BUT in order to win they will need to work with the other houses. Do you understand better? I hope so I cant really explain it at the moment with out giving something away.

Sorry if confusing!
ok so thats all for now!

Okay, got it.
You've got to use small words, I am a little slow this morning... *cough*

But thanks for clearing that up.

Flutters

Hey again,
That chapter was really good! I liked both of the openings, they were quite impressive!
I can actually imagine that happening in a real HP book! I think the openings circulated the intense, excited atmosphere of the whole tournament. It was like, BOOM! It's one house versus another, right in your face, this is serious...sort of action. I don't think that sentence even made sense. But, I hope you get what I mean.
And *tear* for Hermione. Oh, it is so sad that he 'doesn't love her'. Hmm, I dunno if I even believe that. I'm sure he has to love her, I mean, there's got to be some compassion in that stone heart of his.
But, heeheehee, I liked those hooded cloaked people, and Luna, with her dazed look. That is so like her.
Well, that sort of spooked me, but it was still a great chapter, as usual.

Please post more soon!
Cheers,
Bella.
PS. I have some more brownies to tempt you with!! *waves them underneath your nose*

Been a way for a little while, just caught up. I cant wait for the first task, I think its going to be very interesting and exciting knowing how well you write. I hope Hermione can get over Draco, because he is soooo not worth it. Post soon.

Yay, I'm finally getting the chance to reply.
First of all, poor Ron! Lol, he didn't care though, when he broke up with Lavender. It was also kind of sad (the pathetic kind ) and hilarious when Ron believed the story of the wasps! Haha, that was one of the highlights of my not-so-glorious day.

I was a bit confused about the house colors you wrote as well, but glad that we got an explanation. Anyway, can't wait to read about the first task.

I really, really hope that Hermione gets back together with Draco. Ron's sweet and all, and I love him to death, but Hr/R's not one of my favorites, and it'll get confusing because Hermione will still have feelings for Draco. Of course, that won't mean that I'll stop reading the fic. It's amazing. Hehe, anyways, hurry up!

Hey,

I've been reading your fic regularly and I absolutely adore it. Please continue! It's wonderful! I'm sure you get sick of hearing that so often. hehe. Good luck and Happy writing!

Hey Jennnnn psst your name is on my computer how do I get it off? Anyways! Yay those chapters I read were gooooood Im in love with this story hahahahaha yeah... I love the mental wasps and OI your Ron character is so funny so Ron too. So...I like cannot wait tilll the next chappie wonder what the task will be. BLAH <3
cant wait til next chappie and yeah havent been on in a while...im not as big a hp fan as you are

<3 BLAH catch ya later love
miridian

Okay, first off, the house colors are:
Gryffindor - red and gold
Slytherin - green and silver
Ravenclaw - blue and bronze
Hufflepuff - yellow and black

Other than that confusion, though, this was an execellent chapter! I loved the descriptions of the Slytherins and Ravenclaws getting ready to compete, especially the Ravenclaws in the mysterious hoods. Haha, yes Hermione slept in until 7:00 or so. Mmm, sounds like me. Lol, and the wasps are back. Ron is just so dense sometimes. I love how you weave so much humour through this story without making it an outright comedy. I can't wait for more! *checks watch* Is it time yet? How about now?

Cheers!
Meggie

Hey guys!

THanks all for the comments! You all are really great!

Miridian:rolleyes: : OMG <3 OMG haha nice to hear from ya haha normally i just email you the fic got your pm teehee see ya soon love
CHA CHA CHA CHARMIN (ps KIDS + EGGS = NO GOOD!) lol stupid jon

Meggie: Oh wow I was SO off with the colors..bronze? wow haha well thanks a bunch of banannas for clearing that up ill be sure to get them right next time sorry everyone

hehe well FYI chapter will be up late tonight or tomorrow sorry taken so long...it wouldnt have but i had make up hw to do cause I was sick for a week bleh! anywhoo!
thanks agian!
fjkrs *who just ate an Oreo...her creative writting food *

It's tomorrow! *taps watch* Haha, not to be pushy, but... I love this fic and I want more! *offers more brownies/ice cream/poprocks (my obsession at the moment ) as an incentive to hurry up* I want to know what happens

where is it? grrr



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Hey,

I've waited and waited and waited. There's still not post. When will you post? Please post, I'm desperate!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

Hey,

Is something wrong? You haven't posted a new chapter in ages. Is there something happening? A post to tell us you're ok would be fine. I haven't heard of or seen you in ages. Please come back.

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

Helllloooo everyone. I wanted to let you all know why i havent posted!
Firstly:
I got some metal junk im my mouth an expander and a herbster thingy and it is consuming a lot of time and woooo is it painful lol well only sometimes anyways! it really sucks
Secondly:
Teachers are cramming me with lots and lots of homework before the holidays and im prepping for finals and have after school detention!

Right now im really busy and really trying to find time to finish my chap Im almost done but i just cant seem to do it.
Its a mixture of anxiety writers block and pain lol im really sorry blah
hopefully this weekend i can hide in my room and write
ok so gah im sorry! and thanks i love dan your so nice
ttfn
fjkrs

Oh, but I loved it! I thought you did a great job on everyone's characterization in this bit. Hahaha, and when you said that the Great Hall exploded... Well, i kind of thought that it literally exploded, like a bomb or something... Until I read the next line *hits self* Hmm, this should be very interesting with everyone's magic taken away. The students who aren't purebloods will actually be at an advantage here. I can't wait for more! *offers brownies as an incentive*

Cheers!
Meg

Hey meggie
Well it was nice to see a comment, I know every body is busy its holidays and alot of ya'll are sick so thanks a bunch for reading. Yeah the whole take magic away thing is pretty scandolous
But anyways just wanted to thank yas for commenting!
Bye now
next chappie done but cant be posted for you see my new computer has no internet access and the one with internet has a broken A drive and the next chap is on the NEW computer so no way to get it to a computer with internet.....>.> pain in my side i tell yas!
Well thanks again!
fjkrs

Hi there Jen!

I absolutely missed that one! You said it would take you ages to put up the next part when you PMed me and I had concluded you'd tell me once it was online. *sigh* Must have missed it... So sorry!

I think it's a great idea to have the students compete with each other without magic. Surely, it'll be worst for the Slytherins. Hehe. Oh, this will make for some awesome scenes, I already know! I am so excited!
And Draco and Hermione... ah... I love those scenes! *twinkle*
I need another hair-orgasm! *chuckles*
I really wonder about that first task, though. Hm... Hope you get this computer problem solved soon.
Can't you get some USB-stick and move the chapter from one computer to the other? Or peer-to-peer-connection, or... whatever?
Want to read more!

Oh, and please, guys: reply!

This has been up for ages and only Meggie and me commented yet. I know you read this!

Take care, Flutters

Hey,

Brilliant, I thought that the bit with the Malfoy and Hermione in the Library was funny. Maybe I'm still a bit high from all the sugar I had this morning but I thought it was funny! Anyway, sorry I didn't review earlier, still extremely busy! Hope to see the next chaptet soon!

I Love Dan Radcliffe - My name, but it's true

WOW! You have GOT to update ASAP! I was caught by surprise when Draco said, "You drive me crazy when you run your fingers along the books" and I totally thought they were going to make up! I think he really was going to, but then Pansy interrupted him, and he had to play along like the Mudblood-hater reputation he's got... I'll keep hoping for that... Post more soon!!!

Manda

0.0 DOOD.
I thought you were joking wit me when you told me the task involved no magic. Cool! This is like the friggin heaviest fic everrr! Kehee! CHARMIN man and that means something....ok first off
the whole like nightmare thing with the one chick was so heavy! Lisa had night terrors and they scared the shiza outta me so imagine what would happen to this poor girl then i cant even imagine how she felt when she found out they were all reall!! But its a sweet idea! Yeah so Draco still likes Hermy...personally i think he's just like trying to get in her pants then will drop her. but oh well...ok ok update and ill try to get it on your disk to post! I swear on my own doggies life.
alright bye now!
love
miridian
Ps: you should prolly call me when you update if i dont know cuz i dont really go on here anymore

i finally got to read the updated chapter last night...and i thought it was quite lovely. and dont worry, there weren't too many mistakes in it...overall, it was a good chapter. i especially liked the hidden feelings going on with ron and hermione. it's obvious they still have feelings for each other. what is going on with draco though? hmmmm....these mysteries and many more! hehe. keep up the writing! cheers!

OMG! This a REALLY good fic! your and awsome writer! I think that it is the best D/H fic I have read. I normally don't support D/H ships, but I like this one alot. But at the same time i want hermione to be with ron too. You have to post more soon!!!!!!!!!

Psst hey everybody! Wow thanks soo much for the replies!
Next monday I should have the next installment up. So yay!

Nadja: Hey! Yeah I meant the other fic which will actually be updated next monday as well my kick the can one Yes I agree we do need another hair orgasm.

I love Dan: Hiya! Thanks, Draco and Hermy def still have something going on and yayyyyy sugar! Whoo! Maybe next few chapters Ill add in a sugar high! that would be uber cool!

Manda: Stupid ole Pansy always gotta mess everything up, yeah sorry i havent updated asap he...having major issues with the internet im sorry

Charmin: Hola! Yay yay...your gunna post for meh! haha no i was not joking but I didnt want to completely spoil it for ya so I did pretend to joke, but you basically know the whole plot anyways! Cant wait to see ya feel better and i also cant wait to have yahoo back! Cha Cha Charmin

Weasley best: Ello! Thanks yes this installment wasn't too bad lol sometimes I have my blonde moments And yeah Hermy and Ron could have something oooh the suspense

Hpgoldsnitch: Hi! Thanks and I like your name! Wow thanks so much, I dont much like D/H but it causes serious drama so voila i made a fic so thanks again!

Bum Bum Bum! Thanks everyone ya'll made my day! Ok so fic up soon promise and coookies!!
fjkrs

Ok well I just read your whole fic!! It was really good! Wow hermione is really confuesed first Draco then Ron and the Wood and then a little Harry woah.... So anyways I think my favorite chapter was the one with Harry and Ginny and the quiddich pitch!! ! I also love your fic because I found myself laughing at it. Which is really good...especially when Harry had his shirt on backwards!!LOL I laughed so hard at that and the wasp thing. Can't wait for your next update!!
<3courtney

yay, cool chapter. That would be so much fun to do. an interesting idea. just one comment, when you were saying they were throwing fingers and stuff, try not to say stuff. It is too broad. Or just take it out completly.
I bet it was malfoy that kissed hermione... hehehehe
Post more soon!!!!!!

WOW....another fabulous chapter!!! Can't wait for more!! Please hurry I hate suspense...lol...Once again fabulous job!!!

Hey,

Great chapter! I love the idea of scaring. It's kind of a bit obvious who the "mystery man" is. But you may make a twist. Ah well, I'll wait and see! Hope to see another chapter. Sorry about my story. I'm starting highschool tomorrow; I've been busy these last weeks, getting ready for school and going out with friends from my primary school. I'll get around to writing, I promise! Anyway, I hope to see another chapter cause this one was awesome!

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