Your style of writing, fjkrs flows very well. You write with quite a bit of maturity.
I am curious as to how Hermione and Draco get together though.
Waing for the next installment...

Oo, I love Draco/Hermione fics! You kept Hermione in character, which was great. Her mom was acting more like a teenager than she was . Can you space out the paragraphs a bit more? Hehe, I usually don't do that.. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chap.

well i officially hate draco now a days so im not really sure i want this fanfic to continue with hermione and draco getting hooked up. no i dont! well im going to finish what i had already written the take this story for a wild ride. enjoy. lol

please keep going!

ok i will then thank u thats all i needed.

kool cuz i was realy gettng into it!

too bad i can't double or triple post because the fanfics so good i don't know what hit me but i'm obsessed.

I've been wondering sure your not J.K.Rowling.

Please keep going! I love this story. I think she should go with both ron and draco!

That was really good. I loved Hermione's dream and the Lavendar part. Please keep going!

Jamie, THANKS lol i thought it was a little funny (hermione's dream) Since u keep commenting like the very minute i get it up i am wanting to put it up faster so i am posting the next part of the chapter asap its already made and most of my chapters are. I will now be posting chapters after i get a comment so thanks! lol see ya later! bye!

I loved this part of the chapter. I really liked the bewitched book. I love Draco & Hermione! Keep going!

oh Draco will be in the next chapter. Don't worry lol

BYe now

oh yeah
does anyone know what parvati's last name is. I am drawing a BLANK and i cant find it in the books anywhere....grr its not all that important but it is bugging me....>.<
thanks

It is Patil. I really like your story and I am looking forward to more Draco! Keep going!

OH THANKS JAMIE! lol it was nawing at my brain! lol yep the next part to this chapter wil have draco.
thanks for reading
bye

more please!

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im sorry to say but im not postin anymore till i get 3 new comments sorry guys. im on high demand else where and its getting tough! so please comment if yehs want more toodles!
fjkrs

I'm sorry, I only read your fanfic just now and I love it!
Somehow, it is just natural for a girl in Hermiones age to be caught up in the middle with two boys. At least I think so. *lol* Can't remember exactly, though, it was ages ago when I was 16. *lol*

You had me laughing all the time, especially when Hermy asked Harry to kiss Ron. *lol*
Of course I'd love to read on. So please, please, post the next part if you have it at the ready! *plea*

Just one question: where do you find the time to write chapters as long as that? It took me about three hours to write mine last night, and that was without going over and over again, trying to find out where the weak parts were, how to change them, smoothen everything out and such. Okay, my disadvantage is that I'm no natural speaker/writer and it takes me longer to write in a foreign languagem but still.
The story seems just to run from you. *envy*
I like the fact that we get to see so much of Hermione, and I just LOVE her mother! With JKs books I find they are too much focused on Harry and it would be nice to know how the other charakters were feeling. But then again, that is what the fanfic-section is for, right?
So please, please keep posting. I want to know whom she ends up with. Of course I think it is Ron. *lol* But you could surprise me and make it... Lavender? *lol*

Cheers, Flutterflie

I loved that chapter! Please keep going with it!. The story is getting really good!

Thanks guys!
hehe well ima start next part now! You guys rock teehee
well regarding Flutterflies question, Im so lazy that i write up the story and dont go to edit it! lol im all oh forget that u guys know what i mean when i mess up! lol yeah ima bit lazy! hahaha um it does just kinda flow from me, i have my room in a chi postions so that helps me and when i go to bed i sorta have a picture of what i want to write main ideas details come as i write it. But i dont have talent enough to 1) edit my stuff lol and 2) really set the scene like you Flutterflie you really get a good picture about what is happening in your stories. I assume everyone knows what im trying to say when i write so im lazy about it but im working on that now lol i alos have a bad tendancy to lose the characters in my writting sometimes i get so caught up in the others that i forget about one or two. But i am really happy everyone is liking this story! ^__________________^
so thankies SOOOO much for the compliments and comments and if u gots any ideas they are definitley welcome ill post the rest of this chapter today
toodles!

Can't wait to read it. *smile*
I know what you are talking about in terms of editing the fanfics. *lol* Chi positions... hm.. maybe I should redecorate my living-room, too. Can you clue me how to do that?
->email or pm me, *lol*, it probably doesn't fit here.

It's weird, I only get to writing once I sit on my couch. As soon as my notebook is involved I screw up. *lol*

And in terms of ideas: would you really want us to tell you how to continue your story? Because I know I wouldn't like that. I'd have a ball watching you guess and everything but I probably wouldn't change the story. But if you are looking for ideas... *lol* being caught up in the middle between two boys, Hermione finds out that kissing a girl isn't that bad either... *lol*

Sorry, I just found it would be funny.

Flutterflie

sure flutterflie hehe sorry i didnt post unexpected error MY disk wouldnt load lol so today ill post. oh and i cannot continue a story on my notebook. i can start one on it but then i immideatley put on my computer lol.
bye now

yay its up its getting good hope ya like!
bye now

this is a very good story!! but i think hermione makes a better couple with Ron. that's because Tom is sooo mine. lol. jp jp!

this is a great story i hope you keep writing i am just dying to find out what happens! Awesome Job!:)

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oi sorry guys but I am BLANKING OUT! lol i am stuck stuck stuck so the next post may come on saturday instead of today....SORRY lol i am just like ehhhhh lol so please email me or um...Pm me is u have any ideas im like just so bleck lol
but ill sit down and do it instead of procrastinating and i may have it today or tomorrow lol SORRY.

gtg work on it now bye now oh and ty ronlover16 and ronluver6 lol

omg u have to get this finished cuz its sooooooo good hehe

wellp guys THANKS so much for the comments! hehe for more story please comment three times and ill have more in the mean time i will be fixing my disc lol ok bye now!

Hehe, Hermione and Draco kissing again... and Greenleaf interrupted and didn't say sorry? Hey, I thought she was a Hippie? What about free love and such? *lol*

So now there will be turnaments and the houses will team up together. Hehe. I can see where you are going. *lol*

Sorry I didn't comment your new chapter earlier. I hardly find the time to sit down and read other peoples fanfics *lol*. But yours is always worth a glimse.

I shall look forward the next chapter!

Will Hermione and Draco kiss again? Will Ron be able to change Hermiones feelings? Will Professor Greenleave ever wear purple underwear? Will Professor Dumbledore team up with Hagrid and win the next turtle-race? Will Flutterflie ever be able to shut up her silly mouth? And last but not least, will Professor Snape find somebody decent to stack his cauldrons?

SOOO many things to find out!!!

Cheers, Flutterflie

this is a really good story you have me pretty interested in it. Please keep up the good work

Bet it wasn't Dracos note. *lol*
Now I'm waiting for somebody else to drop in, hehe.
I know, I'm crazy... but I always expect the unexpected.
Great, now I'm hooked on your story. Not because of the last chapter, but I want to know how it ends.

Cheers, Flutterflie

AAAAAAAAAAAAwwww please continue with ur stroy i am hooked. I love them. plz plz plz !!!!!!!!

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Might I say, I am impressed with how you can somehow infuse so much drama into such a small space! It's - HYPERDENSEDRAMA

PLZ write more!

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i love your story im hooked please don't stop. As mad as i am at Draco form HBP i want him and hermoine together. I think i just like the Draco ships...*sigh* if only it was me

[FONT=Arial][SIZE=1][COLOR=purple]this story has had me gripped since i started reading it. i wish i had the patience to sit and write one. need more asap i need to know what happens. i think its harry that slipped in the note but what about poor ginny if it is...?

hey guys THANKS soo much for the replies! Ill try to get the next part written today...we are buying a boat and i may be a little while till I can sit down and get it done you know? Anyways Thanks sooo much
bye now!

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*sniffles* My disc broke LOL i know sad, i kicked it and it like snapped LOL how stupid was that i know! lol anyways, i will be rewritting the chapter now so it may be a day or two ok sorry! lol
bye now
fjkrs

Disc like "hard disc" or like "compact disc"? How did you kick it? I mean, I've been doing weird things to my computer, but I never destroyed... ups, I'm lying. Actually, I did destroy a hard disc before.
Hey, maybe the sixth horcrux is a disc and Harry can ask you to destroy it!

Okay, I know, I am just silly now. *sigh*
Had a bad day. And on top: no new installment by fjkrs. *sigh*
It's only getting worse...

I am looking forward for the next chapter.
Okay, caslass says the note is from Harry. So I say it is... from Lavender! Hehe.

So long, and thanks for all the fish!

Flutterflie

lol flutterflie lol it was a hard disc with everything on it! *sighs* i was wearing my new boots and i was sitting sideways on the chair and i went to untie them and my disc was hanging over the edge becoz it was starting up and i cant have discs in so i went to untie my shoe and WHACK it just snapped off outta the drive! i was all OMG! lol anyways...
Im sorry you had a bad day! *hands u a cookie* cookies always fix it.
Lol Lavender huh? wellll i dont think i have that wild an imagination! lol but maybe ill slip in a lavender part just for you!
Oh and i hope harry calls me *wink wink* im pretty good at destorying things! lol
bye now
fjkrs

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I just read all the chapters of your story, and I really liked, it, which most fan fics don't have enough detail, but yours is really good... please continue

i freking love this story!!! its awsomeness
keeo it up and i'll stop by on wnedsday.
love
bestest
buddy.

Muhu, I'm gonna screw up on this vocabularywise, but I'll have a try. *lol*

Why do you leave your disc outside the computer? There are external drive cases you can keep the disc in and you can connect it via USB to any computer. It's pretty save and.. okay, you'd better not play soccer with it... but it might survive a kick or two...

Did you just write the last posting yourself or did somebody else use your account? *lol*
I was laughing as I read it.
Self-praise is so much different from the "sorry, I messed up"-comments we usually post. *lol*

Oh, and thanks for the cookie.
Reminds me on "life of brian" (never saw it in English, so sorry for my poor translation, if you saw the movie you might still get the scene...)

"Do sit down.
Have a cookie.
Make yourself at home.
You a$%&!" *lol*

So you bought a boat?

Flutters, waiting for the next installment

YOU really have to update.... we are all waiting here lol... i hate it when discs break.. you should get a flash drive

i just read all of it now and, wow, i think this story is really awesome. it had me gripped from the start. you're such a great writer. update soon please. i wonder who slipped her the note. well, i'll stop by again, hoping you posted the next chapter. bye

haha the post about "I" wrote it was my best friend using my account lol
and i really shouldnt play soccer
ok im almost done with the chapter so expect it tomorrow! bye noe
and no we didnt by the boat my mom was a party pooper and said, lets wait a week~!
i was all...mom...u...bite...
lol jk i love her!
ok bye now
fjkrs

FJKRS WOULD JUST LIKE TO SAY:

Thanks everyone who has commented I LOVE U ALL!
bye now
fjkrs

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im dying for the next chapter! i almost cried when i read about your disk...darn things should be indestructable, like those water bottles...

Can't wait till tomorrow!

ahh! its tomorrow and it still isn't up.. NOOO! your story is really good! keep posting

i absolutely love your fanfic! i've read it but i just joined this web site today so i thought i would add to your encouragement to continue writing! :D

oh my gosh...you guys...im grounded off the internet! yes my dad freaked out and said your unpluged...he talks like such a dofus....lol jk no but i am trying hard to get the next chap up...you see not only am i off the net but my computer all together! sooo...its not working out to well...... haha ok also...... XD what do you guys think of Oliver wood? jus curious is all...If my dad doesnt notice ill get on tonight and post the next chapter....oh and Flutterflie SORRY i havent read ima go right now!
ok bye...sorry i havent posted it.

GOsh this has turned into quite the battle has it not?
ps: sorry mods...i cant helpp it sometimes when i do netspeak. Ill edit my posts though..
fjkrs