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Lachlan
I think it is really good, and you should continue it! I can't wait until chapter 2, I want to know what will happen! Please post soon!

Lachy

P.S. I love your begginging, very catchy!
*dementor*
thanks Lachlan....i never thought i'd get a reply...i thought no one would bother to read it sad.gif
thanks a lot i'll try doing chapter 2 soon tongue.gif
Lachlan
I can't wait for chapter 2! Why don't you think people will read it? It is really good! There is no gramatical errors, or anything! I think it is really good! Keep wrting (I think you are going to get alot of replies)

Lachy
Lachlan
[COLOR=red] I hope you can post another chapter soon, (I am not good at waiting)because I love your story! I hope you can continue your posts, because I want to read more! I think you are a superb writer, and hope to see more posts from you in the future!

Lachy[COLOR=red]
*dementor*
lol... laugh.gif thanks alot i'll try writing another soon....just that ive got to finish a project for wednesday than i'll post lots of chapters....i read your fan fic its really cool! tongue.gif
HPgoldsnitch
Oh, a cliffy! I want to see what happens next. That would be so cool if the letter was from Dumbledore! Hurry and post more soon!
Lachlan
Oh, that was very good! I loved that chapter, it explained alot. I just want to say I saw one or two spelling errors, so you might want to check that out twice before posting. But, I must say, I still love your story and I hope yyou poste more soon! That means I will keep replying to all of your posts, because this is very good!

Lachy
*dementor*
lol.......i bet i know why you said that tongue.gif
thanks for your opinions!
*potter*
Vian, that was excellent im like dying to find out who that person is in the letter tongue.gif this is getting realy exciting but in the beggining i didnt expect it to be that extrodinary wink.gif (no offence) so when are you going to write it sorry but i just cant wait laugh.gif
*dementor*
thanks *potter*, well you will be finding out soon so dont worry!
sorry if im taking long but im writing it on a notebook and it take ages to type out...and im writing another fic...but it will be soon definitely smile.gif
Lachlan
You're writing another fanfic?! What is it called? I want to read it awhile I wait for this one! Can you send me a link to it, please? I really want to read it! (sorry this is off topic) I can't wait for your next chapter!

Lachy
*dementor*
thanks lachlan the link is below:

The Past Of The Potters Is Back Again

hope you enjoy! tongue.gif
Lachlan
Wow! That was really great! I would say that is your best chapter yet! (and that is saying something!) I want you to post more! Please more! Harry has to go see the dark lord or he will be killed? He will be killed both ways! I want to read more! I need more! That was such a great chapter! I loved it!

Lachy

p.s. PLEASE! post more!
HPgoldsnitch
Wow! Surprises! I really liked this chapter. I thought that maybe it was Dumbledore (even though he is dead?) I never expected it to be snape! Ah, well, I really liked it. Hurry and Post More!!!!
Lachlan
Great chapter! I loved that chapter! So, Tom is evil and works for Voldemort? Oh, no! Poor Stan! Voldemort is so evil! I hate voldemort! Again, great chapter! Write more!

Lachy biggrin.gif
Lachlan
Great chapter, *dementor*! I loved that one! I think I know a secret now. HEHE! I loved that chapter, and I am glad you updated!

Lachy
*potter*
thats an excellent chapter *dementor*....please post soon its really cool! wink.gif i think regulas is R.A.B too in book7!
Lachlan
Sweet! I loved that chapter! Great job on it! I hope that you can post more soon! I really liked that part! Post again, soon!

Your biggest fan,
Lachy
*dementor*
thanks a lot....i will be posting quite soon......it doesnt take long to write but im just not bothered at times tongue.gif
lol.....but i will be posting soon enough
btw when are you going ot add to your story "albus dumbledore"? im waiting...


*dementor* smile.gif
Lachlan
Okay, please post very soon, Dementor, I am getting anxius! I really love your work and I really hope to see more in the future posted! Please add more onto it!

Lachy
Lachlan
Sorry I forgot to reply! Another great chapter! Oh boy, this is getting so good! I can't wait to find out what happens next, After all, this is some great writing!

Lachy
Lachlan
Wonderful! I wasthinking just the other day, what is Dementor doing! There are like no posts! Wonderful chapter! I loved Harry's reaction. I hope your SATs go well. Wonderful chapter!

Lachy
Learn From This Mistake
Hey, I just read this all tonight, and it's really good, with a LOT of cliff hangers! holy cow! Well, it's greeeeat! biggrin.gif so post more soon, because it is very tension-inducing.
PS I always get nervous about Maths, too, don't worry, I'm sure you'll do really well.
*dementor*
thanks alot...i have not updated for a while but i will very soon...urmm actually i had another two exams not including the first one...and thats only maths sad.gif urghh...school these days...so boringg when half your friends are absent!!
I will update really soon, this week hopefully..
really sorry for the delay wink.gif
Lachlan
I hope you do update this week! My school is out this week and I need to have something to do all week! Please dementor, post soon! I love this ,fanfiction and I need more! Hope your exams go well,

Lachy
*dementor*
Hiya,
sorry i havent posted a while...i will be posting very soon about sometime these weeks..i have been really busy and im really sorry for the delay! wink.gif

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