Alright,

I went away after trying to post replies here three times already, and now I've run off of my aggression for the past 40 minutes, I'm going to try again. If it doesn't work this time I'm going to have a good cry in the shower, just like Harry.

Fawksey, Flea, laudine, Meggie and Jakthum - I had individual replies typed out three times before, but I'm feeling a bit tired now, (It's been a rough couple of days) so can I just say I am always really pleased to hear from you guys and I know how you feel about Neville. It was really important you become very fond of my Neville, and I think you all did, so it should make the rest of his role play out well. I had a reason for it, dont worry. As for Harry/Julie, I think laudines right when she says its a very guy thing to do, and I think its what makes it necessary (to use Melissa's word) to keep my story canon, yet realistic. Anyway, this is not a love story, so even though there will be complications, it wont overtake the whole fic. There is definitely more important stuff to come.

Pheonx, well your response did take me back a bit. I hadn't thought people wouldn't like the chapter because it was shabby writing, so it has struck me be a bit. Still, I'll continue to do my best and with anyluck, it might improve, huh?

I hope this posts...

Razz....

Please don't take it so hard. I feel horrible! I didn't mean to upset you! I was just trying to state what was on my mind. And I never said I didn't like it. I just said it could have been improved. That's alright..... right. I really didn't mean to upset you. Really. I won't reply anymore if you don't want me to. I apologize for my post. And I take it back. Sorry!!!

- Jordan

I just sent you a PM Pheonix, though I will post to say you dont need to apologise. You were being honest and I do actually appreciate it. I was having a rotten day at home, and it was the fourth time I tried to post a reply, so by the time I had finished typing, it all came out rather abrupt, and I really didn't mean to make you feel bad. I'm just so over my computer at the moment, you have no idea!!

Anyway, I hope I cleared it up in the PM, and please dont feel like I'm annoyed at you, I never was. My ego took a bit of a bashing, but hey, I can live with that

Anyway, I'm a couple of pages into the next installment, and I'll get it up ASAP.

wow, you are an amazing writer, i cant wait...i wonder what neville told her...i wonder if it has something to do with the prophacy? well, i dont know, but i am waiting with bated breath..
lilred

there are just 2 things i need to correct you on this time Razzy!

Geez, I'm really good at putting the wrong word in when they sound the same, but are spelt differently. That must be my main editorial problem!! It must be a 'condition' of some kind, I think?? I dont know. I feel very dull for getting it wrong though, however, I am glad you get a laugh out of it Jim LOL!! Anyway, I've fixed the problem now, thanks again mate. Dont know what I'd do without you

Thanks for your comment lilredhed, I haven't heard from you before, so thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I really appreciate it.

And Big D, I though the description of Julie's EX was apt You'll find out why eventually. I had to write this chapter rather carefully, you'll know why later on too. Thanks for reading and editing and reviewing Jim

Brilliant Chapter again Razz

I feel kinda sorry for Harry… it isn’t completely his fault that Neville died, it was Neville’s own choice to go to Hogsmeade but on the other hand I despise him for not telling Ginny about what happened the night before.

I wonder what Neville told Ginny before he left to Hogsmeade… Like the others already said it could’ve something to do with the prophecy, but it could also be something personal and totally different. He probably went to Hogsmeade because he knew he could find Bellatrix there or something like that.

Great cliffy on the ending again Razz

LOL yeah i know! and im sure there would be someone else around if it wasnt me! I always get a laugh out of it, especially when a few chapters ago you nose and noise wrong! it doesnt quite sound the same when someone is taking care of a friend who was hit in the noise by a curse! and when he couldnt stand the nose anymore he went nuts! Had me in stiches! I'll be with you till the end of this Razz, dont worry about that!

It wasnt malfoy by any chance was it? maybe Julie really does like the toyboy

Now that mate....

Was something different! That was out of this world. Outstandingly terrific! Eveything was. The style of writing, the chapters' plot. Everything. There are so manythings I love about this one.

To start off, The way you describe Harry returning from the Hog's Head is great. It absolutely feels like you were right there beside him. Watching his every move. And also in his mind.

Poor Harry, he's under so much stress. It never seems to go away, does it? First there was all that waiting for Halloween to come, and now he's sick and has to deal with the whole Ginny-Julie situation, not to mention Neville's death. At least he's eating now, which is sort of good news. You've done such a good job here of describing how Harry's feeling right now. All of the pain and confusion he's going through is so clear - I felt like I was right there experiencing the same thing. The awkwardness of this chapter is excellent, too. There really is nothing to say in this situation, and you captured that wonderfully with everyone going quiet as he entered the common room. Ah, and the usual cliffie. Well, I think it goes without saying that I'm on the edge of my seat.

Kisses,
Meg

Great chapter Razz!

I liked that Harry and Julie talked after they had their 'little adventure' and it's quite realistic how he feels right now when he's around Ginny. Pretty akward situation for him! Although I understand him why he did it in the first place.
But is Ginny getting suspicious?

About Julie and her boyfriend: that seems familiar! You're a realistic writer razz!

And my Harry's eating again! What a joy!

Keep going!

Dang, I was gonna write some more about the splitted chapter, now that I finally have some time, but you put up a new installment. *sigh* So I guess since Pheonix already upset you, I will just forget about the aproximately two word pages of comment I thought about over the last two days, regarding Harry and Julie, and why I think he wouldn't have done it with her. So just forget about it. Yes. *takesdeepbreath*

The last chapter was somehow relaxing, as now all the tension is gone and you more or less wrote about the aftermath of the fight and the night. It went well with your writing, everything kind of slowed down. Which doesn't mean your writing got worse. Argh.. vocabulay... I was trying to express how your writing helped calming down after all the action. Did that sound good?

Yes, I know, I shouldn't really say it, because of the guilt feelings Harry has and such. But you know what? Honestly, I don't care. He deserves feeling guilty, and I hope he does for at least the next three chapters!

Only thing I found weird was Socks. And I didn't quite get that sentence.

Wow... Poor Harry... He's got to worry about telling Ginny what happened, and how she's going to take it... And with the added burden of Neville's death, I'm starting to wonder how long he can last like this... Poor Harry... And I wonder what Neville told Ginny? I dunno... *hmmm* Could it have been something about the prophecy? No, Neville didn't know about the prophecy, did he? No, not unless you've changed it... All right, there's no other solution. You're just going to have to write more sooner than usual so that all this can be cleared up... And about Julie... I wonder if she and Harry will get together? I dunno. The next time they see each other, it's bound to be awkward. *sigh* Wow, I have so many questions! Post more soon, you're a fantastic author! *wink*
Cheers,
Amanda

WOW...these last couple of chapters have been amazing! sorry i havent been replying latley, i have been really busy with football and school and im pressed for time. but now i am in suspense, i need to know what neville said to ginny before he died, i cant wait. also, i wonder how harry is going to tell ginny what happened between him and julie, i wonder how she will take it. i dont know how you do it, but your writing is always amazing razz, just cant wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter today razz! I really liked how you desribed the atmosphere in the castle after Nevilles death, especially the Fat ladys reaction. It gives Neville more depth even though hes gone.

And know Ginnys back, she raises so many questions, about where she were before and I think I speak for everyone here when I say that were all really curious about how Harry is going to wriggle out of the Julie-question. Hope youll bring that up soon.

Great as usual, keep going!

Dang, I've got some major catching up to do, but everything I've read is excellent.

The werewolf scene is so vivid and it was so nice of Harry to stay with Lupin instead of running away, though as Lupin said, it was unwise. I love how Harry's loyalty comes into play here. As they say, actions speak a thousand words, and what Harry did proves that.

Great job, Heather. Keep up the good work!

I'm going to post this in installments, with edits, because I dont have long before my computer will crash or freeze on me again! I have the patience of a saint, I'm telling you

Krieltje - I dont think it's justified that Harry blames himself for Neville, I mean, I know why he's doing it, because he feels responsible for Neville, and the rest of the DA for that matter, and he thinks if he hadn't of been out of his head, he would have had wits about him enough to prevent what happened. As he thinks it through, he will come to blame someone else for what happened. I wonder if you can guess who? Its the risk I took when I wrote this that you might come to dislike Harry for doing what he did, but really, I am a girl and I completely understand it, in fact, I think I would have done the same thing. So dont be to harsh on him. He's going to suffer enough because of it. as always, thanks for your review mate!

Big D - hee hee Julie hasn't been into the toyboys at all, infact the last person she dated was quite a bit older than her. She's one of those girls who's attracted to the bad-boys, or was at least. But thanks to Aberforths influence, she's come to her senses a bit.

Pheonix - Thanks for your kind words, and I'm really happy you liked it. I do try to set mood, but sometimes its hard to get across exactly what you want people to feel, so its great when your successful. As for H/G/J, that will all unfold as we go along, and hopefully it will be done in a very natural way. I already have it generalized in my head, so we'll see what happens. What I can say is going by Ginny's reaction to Harry when he thought she was involved with Dean, she's not going to be happy about Harry getting involved with someone else.

Meggie - Harry is in an unenviable situation right now, that's for sure. But as usual, he's being harder on himself than anyone else could be. It's interesting to see what Neville has to say, huh? Will it be comforting news, or make him feel even worse?

laudine - Yes, your Harry is finally eating again! He will have to keep it up to if he wants to stay on the ball, and I think he's finally wised up to that fact. Its great to hear you think he's being realistic at the moment. I have to confess that raw human emotions and drive, are often much more uncomfortable than what we read, and though I dont want to stray too far from canon, I felt I needed to jack up the realism a bit. I will still keep it HP though. LOL, isn't her EX too real? What a dirtbag!

Flutters - well i cant say I'm upset that you didn't get to post your thoughts on the Harry/Julie thing. I know you H/G, so I'll take it all as read, eh? I agree Harry deserves to feel guilty, but not over Neville's death, and that's what weighs on him the most at the moment, but yeah ... he should feel guilt over Ginny, though I still stand by why I did it. I'm not sure if its a language thing, but what I meant by Socks being the same, is that Ginny is trying to tell Harry that Socks has always diasappeared for weeks at a time, in the whole time she's known her. Hope that helps...

Amanda, your right about the burden Harry carrys at the moment. He's pinned down by it all, so you can bet, as the human phsyci does, he's going to find ways to deal with it, and you'll see that in the next chapter. You'll also find out what Neville has to say very soon, I promise. As for H/G/J, that will play out when you least expect, I think. Just like real life!!

Sectum - Hiya Its nice to see you back again! I understand about being busy. I'm thrilled you liked the new chapters, and the next focus will primarily be on the next Horcrux. Draco will be popping up again VERY soon. Love those scenes between Draco and Harry. So look out for them!

Captain - hehe... you picked up on the Fat Lady's reaction! She's a gem that woman, and I actually like to symbolize her as a gaurdian of Gryffindor, in a weird way, so although it may not seem it, her reactions to things are important. Hmm, what has Ginny been up to I wonder?? You know I cant say too much, but its cool that you're asking!!

writingfreak - its so good to hear from you again! LOL, I appreciate that you're trying to keep up with your busy schedule, so dont worry about it. Hows your book going?

I got through it ... yay!!

Okay, thanks you explained that one, I really didn't understand. But now it's clear. Hehe. New theory...

Socks is not Ginny. Socks is... - tada - Tonks!

Tonks is the only person I could possibly think of that could turn into a young red cat. I don't recall if you ever mentioned the feline being female, probably I only assumed so, since the cat was rubbing her head at Harry and... well,I doubt a male animagus would do that. So the cat has to be a female that is rather attached to Harry.

Maybe it's Julie? *giggle* And Abe told her to watch him? Oh, I don't know, you lost me. But I really want to know. *growl*

I'll have to re-read... somebody give me a time-turner, a 24 hour day is too short for me...

Flutterflei

Your latest chapter was brilliant again, Razz!
Poor Harry though; the ackwardness between him and Ginny was written beautifully. But there's a slight problem... Harry's begining to like Julie now... I wonder how Ginny will take this.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Taking a page out of Dobby's book. Harry Potter had to punish himself by ironing his hands. Bad Harry!..Bad Harry! (As he slams his head into his bed post). I do hope whatever Ginny tells Harry it eases his guilt over Neville. That was not his fault. Julie however is another story. You had better write in sufficient punishment for Harry over that. Him feeling guilty down the road will not be enough. Punishment must be extracted. I know technically Harry and Ginny are not together but they are. Harry and Ginny both know it. I hope she punishes him enough and does not do a "Oh thats ok! Your Harry Potter" thing and let him off easy. Your Ginny is too strong to do that.

Very good chapter. You did a great job describing Harry's journey back to Hogwarts and his feelings of guilt. The only thing I found odd was one paragraph that seemed out of order.

You are so right Gabur, I actually spent time rearranging that part before I posted, and I forgot to put in a lead from one paragraph to the next So here it is...

Thanks for replying Razz,

I am sure that whatever you have planned will be great. As for the H/G/J issue, I hope Ginny doesn't get too ****ed off. Well, I hope that it wears down if she does. Like Harry's anger did when Ginny and Dean were going out.

-- Whoa! Sorry. You already replied what I just wrote... I am exauhsted. I was up until 4 AM on VTM catching up on stories and posting. Luckily I don't have school today... UN day! YAY!

Anyway. Thanks for your post. It is very much appreciated. I look foward to the next installment. Maybe answer a few questions.... Okay, I'm gonna have to leave you for now, Sorry this is such a short post. I'm falling asleep.

Peace

~Pheonix

EDIT: Okay. I'm back. I just passed out for a few hours. But now I feel refreshed. You posted that we would be in for a few surprises... That is almost as unbearable as your cliffhangers. Though I must admit that lately you cliffies have been less intense. But hey, I'm not complaining. No.... In fact I love them, there is no spice in the story without them... and other things as well. But, yeah. I want to read more ... Argh! See You later.

Thanks for your reply Razz

Lovely chapter, another dark, brooding one. I have a few theories.

1. Socks is still Ginny--Ginny has lost the power to transform into her in much the same way as Tonks lost her metamorphosing powers in HBP...ah, heartache.

2. Julie's ex is none other than our bandy-legged, ginger haired, acrid smelling thief Mundudngus Fletcher. We all have ex's we regret...

3. Harry will go back to blaming Snape, angry he didn't tell him how much the spell would weaken him.

Those are my thoeries, but I would like to add that I still think Harry should keep his night of heat with a healer to himself. No good could come of telling Ginny other than easing his guilty conscience a bit.

I can't wait to see how everything plays out...and one more question...

"Where Hagger?"

"Me want Hagger!"

Flutters - Socks is Tonks? Lol. I just love confusing everyone. I haven't started writing yet because this next chapter is going to be quite difficult. I haven't got any notes on it even, so I'm going to have to fly this one blindfolded and hope it comes out okay. If you manage to get hold of a timeturner, could you throw it my way for a while?

cori - hehe... Its funny how complicated life gets huh? Harry is not really himself at the moment. He's had such a beating lately that I think he's becoming rather withdrawn and sullen. I hope something can happen to lift his spirits a bit. I dont think he's ready to tell Ginny what happened yet, he's going to do the guy thing and 'wait for the right moment'

Lee - hi *waves*, thanks for reading and posting! Funny thing, I used to get excellent grades in English, but I still make really stupid mistakes with spelling and word similarities, always have. Even my teachers used to laugh at some of the things I got wrong, yet still hand back a paper with 10 out of 10 weird huh?

Gabur - Harry definitely isn't to blame for Neville, but I think that is the thing he's finding hardest to deal with right now. He'll do what we all do in the end, look for reasons why it happened, though how can you justify such a thing? As far as Harry and Ginny, well she's very strong like you said, and she is extremely loyal too, so I dont know how she'd deal with the knowledge of Julie. STill, it'll come out one way or another. These things always do. I'm going to take the computer into a tech as soon as I can, and get it overhaulled. I'll let you guys know when I am.

Pheonix - Cliff-hangers are an essential part of writing when you're doing it in installments, they are a bit evil sometimes, but necessary. Keeps your interest up enough to come back, eh? lol

Krieltje - Harry will blame the person who its easiest to blame. He is very peeved off that Ron and Hermione were put in such danger, it just hasn't manifested yet because he's so tired. You'll see it next chapter.

Fawksey - Aren't you the clever cloggs!! I just love your theories, you have really been paying attention, which is just excellent. Though I'm not confirming or denying them at this point *tsk* I dropped in three things that will lead to some important revellations later on, and I'm snickering wickedly that they haven't been picked up yet. Though I did put them in rather obscurely so its no wonder. later you'll be going "oooooh...." and " " and " ".

I cant belive this went through first post!!

Razz, I think you made me a member of the club Louise is in, the "I hate Ginny" club. For some reason when you brought her back into the story I was like 'when is she leaving' and I don't know why. I have a hunch on what Neville told Ginny but I'll keep that to myself, don't want to runion your thoughts about it because it is your story. Very well done as always and keep it up!

Great chapter, razz. I miss Neville alot, but now I feel even more worried about whats going on than before Harry knew exactly what Snape's parchment would say about Bella. Harry clearly has to keep some secrets, but his night with Julie is too close to his heart. Who will he tell first? Ginny? Ron? Hermione? An overage wizard who he can confide in? Or should Harry cease feeling guilty about it, forgive himself and move on?
What is Snape's motivation with Harry? Does he see Harry as another puppet or is he preparing Harry for the impending duel?
And why is the scar itching? Is the connection changing?

Secret - I want to make Ginny likeable, but I'm having trouble trying to do that with what we've been given by Jk, or at least, my interpretation of her from Jk. I dont know. i always thought her apparent coldness was really strength, so I'm trying to take it that way, though she really hasn't shown much warmth yet, I know. I think you may start liking her again a little down the track, we'll see. You can post your ideas, I like seeing how close you guys are to what I've got worked out. And hey, if you come up with something thats even better and works in with my fic, then I'd probably use it!!

Tuit - Hiya mate! So many questions As I've said before, Neville still has a role to play, I know I'm going to have to justify why I let this happen big time, so I'm hoping you'll like where it goes. As much as Harry might be better keeping his night with Julie to himself, he's just too noble to be comfortable with deceiving Ginny like that, so it'll come out eventually, and Harry being Harry, will want to tell her, and her alone. What is Snapes motivation? Interesting question, and one Harry will be asking himself as soon as he is well enough, you can count on that. As for the scar, well you're the only one whose actually pointed that out ... well done!! Its definitely something to watch out for because his scars not bothered him for over a year ... until now. Duh Duh Duh Duuuuh. *lol* As you can tell, I dont want to say anything more.

Hmm, I'm still feeling very smug that none of you have picked up on a couple of my other clues *snigger*...

*LOL* I thought the bit about Severus Sexy Scapegoat Snape went without saying!
Hmm, I read back through looking for your three clues, and here's what I've picked up: First off, Julie's ex. Mundungus Fletcher definitely came to mind, but I'm not too sure about this. Would anyone honestly go out with him? It has to be someone we know, though... And then JAFZ. Could this be how she knew Neville? Did his parents go there? You mentioned Julie's friend Pen. Could Pen be important? Or possibly not at all... Of course it's always important when Harry's scar bothers him. Um, what else? Oooh, I have a Socks theory! Heehee, I don't think I'll say it here, though. It's either beyond off or really, really brilliant. Obviously I have no idea yet. Your fic is so darn mysterious!

Cheers,
Meggie

Oh my gosh Flutters and Meggie lol, I still cant see Snape as sexy ... sorry *rotflmao* I am trying, because it mystifies me that so many of you love him but I just cant see it

Meggie, you are a trouper mate!! lol. I think you have done a brilliant job in looking for clues, even though you've ... well ... tee hee ... you have spotted parts of them, but I'm not saying which parts or why. Though I really want to Its probably better to come out later!! just to be really annoying. lol.

I want to hear your socks theory!! I dont care if its off the wall, please, please please post it??

Well, well, well Razz. That was great. (I feel that writing the word 'Great' just isn't enough but it will have to do...) I still stand by your decision with Harry and Julie. I do think it is the real thing ...maybe not right, but real.

The part that really got me the most was really a small thing. The fat Lady's sniff. It said it all really. She and Neville did have time together in cannon. It really just spoke volumes, that one little sniff.

I am seeing a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. I agree that the reason socks isn't around is ginny's emotions are keeping her from transforming. (I am an avid Ginny- is -Socks fan) hermione and Ron's fighting sory was kind of skimmed over, but I didn't miss it! Someone....helped them huh? And they just assume it was Lupin, huh? Nope...don't buy it. I think...no...I know it was someone else.

And yeah, I can see them baming Snape for it all. He did give them the information. But can't someone chime in here and tell them to "Not kill the messenger"? I mean, he didn't really cause the situation, did he? He just butted in a bit. Ah well...poor Severus...

What did Neville tell Ginny? I really can not figure it out yet. Maybe if I thought on it a bit. Ginny, she has always been someone I could understand. I don't particularly love her character, but I do see things in her that are worthy of being a part of the group. She suffers from the same alment as Ron, a Weasley trying to carve a niche in the world after some extremly fantastic siblings. It is even harder for her because she is a girl. She has to be smarter, cleverer, faster, wittier and braver than all the rest before her. Because she is the baby and the girl all in one. I actually see why she is the way she is. But...I guess I will save that for the "Is Ginny likeable thread".

Anywhoo....great, sorry I was so late in responding. Hurricanes flying overhead and all...

Alright, you asked for it. My crazy Socks theory is that it was Julie and Aberforth had her spying on Harry, and the reason she isn't around as much now is that Harry's at Hogwarts and Aberforth can see him for himself. Now that I'm writing this it sounds stupider then ever, but it was just a thought...

Hiya Mel I know you've been busy with the weather, so dont worry about it!! I've been waiting for your post more to find out how you are than anything else. Its nice to see you made it through okay. The fat lady has had a fair bit to do with Neville, and she's got a big heart I think, so its pretty sad for her too. Harry is so hard on himself and always assumes the worst! And you are another one who was paying attention, aren't you? lol As for Ginny, I have an idea in my head what she's like, but I have to bring her humaness out a bit more later on, otherwise we're still going to be too distant from her, and that's not good.

Meggie I'm so glad you posted it!! Dont think your theories are dumb, cause that might mean my plot lines are dumb if they turn out the same lol Its so great for an author of fanfic to hear what people think might happen. if you ever have anymore, please post them!! As you can see, I'm neither confirming or denying at this point Thanks mate!!

Ok, so who do we know who is a pusbag, im not so sure you'll introduce a new character for purposes of being said pusbag, so its got to be an existing one. quite a bit older than her? It wasnt one of the marauders was it? Wormtail?! or, really going into overdrive now. Snape?! or is she that much of a lolita?!

Hi, I'm new to the veritaserum forums but please dont post for me to look to your rules links on your signature, cause i have already know them.

Well to start, oh yeah, I would like to congratulate you so much for this fanfic hat has got me all day long on my desktop(well not just today, but yesterday too), you have natural abilities for being an excellent writer, in fact if this would be a series book I would love it more than the other six, really.

I mean you are really descriptive and gave details that Jo never gave that I love, you are really giving Jo a run for her money

Ok hope you post your next chapter soon and i hope that socks is julie or Dumbledore(hey why not)

Al
PLUR

Ewww, Big D, Julies not a lolita, she's just a normal young woman ... look at Tonks and Lupin Its definitely not Wormtail!! Blecch! But thanks for posting your ideas, see I can clear them up sometimes.

Hi there Rave *waves* A new reader, Its always nice to hear you've already read the rules, but I will welcome you to VTM anyway.
Thank you for taking the time to post your thoughts on my story. I am flattered by your coments, and of course they had me grinning like the village idiot The great thing about fanfic is we're not restricted by the same things Jk is. I dont have to keep in mind all the time that the book should be appealing to the very young, so I can bring adult Harry (which I definitely think he is becoming because of all he's been through) out in all his messy glory. It satisfies a certain need I have too now the books have progressed so far. What else can I say? Other than I'm having a ball writing this but its less than fun without the feedback! So thanks again

I'm going to do some writing tonight, I promise, should have the next installment up soon.

Heya Razz,

You replied that you would post the next chapter soon, still waiting for it *taps impatient with her foot* No just kidding, take all the time you need. Though I really hope you post at least one chapter before my notebook’s gone (next week reparation, get it back after three weeks or longer *growl*) Don’t worry I’ll still be able to reply, but it’ll take some longer before I can.

Success with writing

Thanks for the nudge mate!! I'm working on it as we speak. I've written 3 and a half pages, so I could post it, but I haven't put the cliffie in yet, so I'm thinking I'll wait now until tomorrow. It's 2am here, and I really need to get some sleep, my daughter has had a high temperature for the past couple of days and I had her in bed with me last night, so of course I didn't sleep a wink with her little legs splayed all over me

Nice to know you haven't forgotten about me

because of course you couldn't post a chapter without a cliffhanger at the end of it could you Heather?

i jest of course, hope to see the next installment up soon, but take all the time you need. Hope Sophia gets better soon

Oh what a tease!! I saw you had posted and dropped in to read the next chapter. I guess I will sulk back to the corner to wait some more.

You post touches on something I have been wondering. When do you sleep? We are on opposite sides of the world and I see you posting all day long when you should be asleep. I know your kids have to keep you up during the day. I thought I was doing good averaging 5-6 hours of sleep a day but I think you have me beat.

I can sympathize with you on the kid in the bed. My little one went through a strange period last week when she would not sleep in her bed. The only way we got her to sleep was to put her in bed with us. She would only sleep nuzzled up to her mom which put her feet into my back. There is nothing like trying to sleep while a seventeen month old child kicks you all night long.

I hope your daughter is doing better and you get some sleep.

Greg

Actually, I dont think I can do a cliffie for this next chapter, its not really geared that way. I'm still working on it, and its over 4 pages already I'm wodering if I should just cut it off and leave it how it is?? Nah, I really would like to put a bit more in.

Excellent question Greg, when do I sleep? Not often enough, but then again, you only get one life, and I've always been a believer in the philosophy that you should drink as much of life in as possible with the time you get. I'm one of those pathetic people who cant go past a sunset without stopping to stare at it for a while, sad huh? lol

Well the installment will definitely be up by tonight my time. Maybe eight hours in real time, not sure. I'm going off to absorb a bit more of life down at the local market, hehe. See-ya all soon. *waves*

wow! hey, i'm new to this site and i love your fanfiction!!
Congratulations on a great read! Your chapters are always really gripping, and so whether you put in a cliffie or not, i'll be hooked!
I love the way its nice and descripted without getting boring through too much detail and the way the speech is always so reminiscent of J.K's versions of the characters.

Do you drink lots of coffee or just walk around reallly tiredly?
I find it hard getting to sleep - my parents say its because i think too much, but how do you manage to write so brilliantly after so little "time out" ?!

Can't wait for the next installment and really glad its going to be nice and long!

Lu

That is just great razz really its fantastic i'm sorry i haven't been on for such a long time but my computer broke down and it was needing a new internet cd after i fixed it which took such a long time to get to me very annouying, but i'm hopping you'll post soon because i'm getting restless now i'm back on the computer.





Soo feel free to supprise me even more.



Your story's great-ly,
soulja

Heya Soulja! I had wondered where you'd gotten to, but I was hoping you'd make it in eventually. I dont know what it is, but it seems everyone has problems with their computer from time to time. I didn't think I'd be able to post tonight because I had to reboot the computer at least 6 times, possibly more, before I could do anything on it, the screen was just freezing!! I have these annoying pop-ups advertizing on-line casinos, which really bugs me because I loathe gambling. A game between friends at home is great, but I cant stand pokie machines etc... Yucch! Anywho, it's great to have you back!

Hiya Lu, thanks for taking the time out to post your thoughts! I do tend to be maybe a tad over descriptive, but its something I'm aware of so I try to keep it reasonable though it is hard for me to. lol I'm glad you think the dialogue is Jk-ish, after all we're all here because we love the books, right?
Hmmm - I dont drink coffee at all, hate the stuff, bizarre, I know!! I dont drink any caffine drinks at all because I am perky enough on my own. I pretty much walk around wishing I had slept longer the night before, and seeing as some nights I dont sleep at all, it does kinda catch up with me eventually. Then I spend a whole morning, or afternoon in bed trying to catch up. My lifestyle is very disorganized. But it seems to work for me, because I still have the energy to do everything I want to.

Well, I'm going to post the installment after this. It'll be a double post just in case my computer crashes AGAIN!!

EDIT: okay, now I cant open my word program to get the next installment. I'll have to reboot, if I dont get back on tonight its because my computer has completely given up on me.

keep trying razz i'll be here for a very long so keep on trying.

Jippay, I've got the honour of reading and replying first! Yes! wow, Razz that was once again, fantastic! Poor Hagrid though..
And Harry, who is still feeling guilty about Neville- survivors guilt eh
I loved Ron and Hermione getting a little bit closer, hope you're goingf to put more of those things in your story.
I feel like…’ Harry spoke softly, yet gravely as his eyes search the table, looking for the right words ‘like I’m dying inside.’
omg, that was so sad, I really felt for Harry at the moment I read that. But it's good that no one is blaming him and he still is supported by his friends
cheers,, Lynn

nooooooo

another cliffie i can't take it anymore its too much its too much the pain the agony of it all!! .........<dies in agony> lol


anywho great update can you please tell me by when your next update will be.