Caitlin in Australia
Feb 17 2006, 09:05 AM
Hi MoogleGirl
Great fic and I really hope you finish it. I love Lily and James getting married and I can't wait for more. You write really well!
Caity
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 17 2006, 10:35 PM
Hey Moongirl!!
I love the way your writing this!! you use so much decription I feel like I am there you are really talented so please update soon!! I can't wait for the wedding to start and the reception!!!!!!!!
Courtney
Learn From This Mistake
Feb 17 2006, 11:24 PM
Hey there, this really fantastic! (I really like your avatar and you sig...

) Anyhow, I love how detailed you are, and the plot is really interesting, I like how Lupin walks her down the aisle. And I really like her mum, she's a sweetie. One thing: Before you post, you might want to run through spell check...I picked up a few words:
Neck, or Necklace
Nervous, or Nervously
Minutes
Completed
Bouquet
Church
It's not a big deal, I just thought you might want to know, or whatever. Please update soon, I can't wait for what happens next!!
--Evie x
Caitlin in Australia
Feb 21 2006, 12:23 AM
Hi MoogleGirl
Great chapter and it was so amzing. There were a few spelling mistakes but as you said spell checker wasn't working so it is ok. Will there be more? I really want more!
Caity
MoogleGirl
Feb 23 2006, 07:34 AM
Caitlin in Australia: well, thank you! I got the spellcheak done. Will post probably some time tomorrow!!
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 23 2006, 05:45 PM
OMG MoogleGirl!!
I LOVED it so much great chapter! It was so sweet and funny! Please post soon!! I NEED more of this story! Great writing job too. I also love how you make Sirius and James argue like brothers, thats exactly how I thought they would act. LoL

Awesome Job!! Post soon!!
Courtney
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 25 2006, 06:14 PM
Hey!!
AHHHHHHH...SUSPENSE! Amazing chapter can not wait for more. I really LOVE this fic so much!! I can't wait to see what the note says and the Sirius toast thing was so funny. LOVE it so far. you are doing a super amazing job!!
Courtney
MoogleGirl
Feb 26 2006, 09:45 PM
ILoveHarryPotter07: Why thank you! I might post the next chapter tonight, we'll see!
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 26 2006, 10:24 PM
yaaaahhh moogle!! I hope you do!! cant wait
Learn From This Mistake
Feb 27 2006, 01:01 PM
Oh my God, that was the last chapter! Noooooo....!!! Still, this was an awesome fic. I LOVED it!! Please write another one, it was absolutely fantasmo. -E.
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 27 2006, 09:57 PM
Hey MoogleGirl I loved it!! It was soo amazing!! I was sooo shocked that you are ending it here but awesome ending and an overall great job!! I hope that you will write another fic because you are a wonderful writer and your stories are awesome. If you decide to do another fic and need a Beta..I'd love to do it!!
Courtney
MoogleGirl
Feb 28 2006, 06:27 AM
Learn From This Mistake: I might in the future! but i wouldnt post alot, maby once a week! dont know if i will!
ILoveHarryPotter07: Whts a "beta"? Happy you liked it!
thanks for reading poeples!!!!
(edited; YAY! PG TWO!)
ILoveHarryPotter07
Feb 28 2006, 11:48 PM
A Beta is someone you send your fics to to be checked for errors and such before you post it lol!! Hope i answered you question if not in the fic section there is a thread for betas!!
Courtney
Caitlin in Australia
Mar 3 2006, 06:13 AM
Hi
That was so sweet!

Is it really finished? I can't believe it had to finish but you finished it perfectly. Please write a squel!
Caity
P.S. Try to use spell checker next time because I pick up a few mistakes!
MoogleGirl
Mar 13 2006, 08:16 AM
its so finished.
no, im not making another fic. But im happy you liked it!
Ginny Winter
Mar 21 2006, 09:46 PM
That was really good! But I noticed some punctuation errors and spelling errors. Well, it was just...really good! I loved how you fit their parents in there and both of Prongs; friends...really nice!
Reg
MoogleGirl
Mar 22 2006, 02:40 AM
| QUOTE |
| But I noticed some punctuation errors and spelling errors. |
Heh, your forgetting Im the queen of sucking at spelling!

I admit it. But thanks for reading, all of you!
krisiebug88
Feb 2 2007, 01:56 AM
very romantic.

I like your fan fic and others about James and Lily because there sort of a mystery

Good job I hope you write more fan fics about James and Lily . Your a really good writer.
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