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Caitlin in Australia
Hi MoogleGirl

Great fic and I really hope you finish it. I love Lily and James getting married and I can't wait for more. You write really well!

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ILoveHarryPotter07
Hey Moongirl!!
I love the way your writing this!! you use so much decription I feel like I am there you are really talented so please update soon!! I can't wait for the wedding to start and the reception!!!!!!!!
Courtney
Learn From This Mistake
Hey there, this really fantastic! (I really like your avatar and you sig...tongue.gif ) Anyhow, I love how detailed you are, and the plot is really interesting, I like how Lupin walks her down the aisle. And I really like her mum, she's a sweetie. One thing: Before you post, you might want to run through spell check...I picked up a few words:
Neck, or Necklace
Nervous, or Nervously
Minutes
Completed
Bouquet
Church

It's not a big deal, I just thought you might want to know, or whatever. Please update soon, I can't wait for what happens next!!
--Evie x
Caitlin in Australia
Hi MoogleGirl

Great chapter and it was so amzing. There were a few spelling mistakes but as you said spell checker wasn't working so it is ok. Will there be more? I really want more!

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MoogleGirl
Caitlin in Australia: well, thank you! I got the spellcheak done. Will post probably some time tomorrow!! biggrin.gif
ILoveHarryPotter07
OMG MoogleGirl!!
I LOVED it so much great chapter! It was so sweet and funny! Please post soon!! I NEED more of this story! Great writing job too. I also love how you make Sirius and James argue like brothers, thats exactly how I thought they would act. LoL tongue.gif Awesome Job!! Post soon!!
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ILoveHarryPotter07
Hey!!
AHHHHHHH...SUSPENSE! Amazing chapter can not wait for more. I really LOVE this fic so much!! I can't wait to see what the note says and the Sirius toast thing was so funny. LOVE it so far. you are doing a super amazing job!!
Courtney
MoogleGirl
ILoveHarryPotter07: Why thank you! I might post the next chapter tonight, we'll see!
ILoveHarryPotter07
yaaaahhh moogle!! I hope you do!! cant wait
Learn From This Mistake
Oh my God, that was the last chapter! Noooooo....!!! Still, this was an awesome fic. I LOVED it!! Please write another one, it was absolutely fantasmo. -E.
ILoveHarryPotter07
Hey MoogleGirl I loved it!! It was soo amazing!! I was sooo shocked that you are ending it here but awesome ending and an overall great job!! I hope that you will write another fic because you are a wonderful writer and your stories are awesome. If you decide to do another fic and need a Beta..I'd love to do it!!
Courtney
MoogleGirl
Learn From This Mistake: I might in the future! but i wouldnt post alot, maby once a week! dont know if i will!

ILoveHarryPotter07: Whts a "beta"? Happy you liked it!

thanks for reading poeples!!!!

(edited; YAY! PG TWO!)
ILoveHarryPotter07
A Beta is someone you send your fics to to be checked for errors and such before you post it lol!! Hope i answered you question if not in the fic section there is a thread for betas!!
Courtney
Caitlin in Australia
Hi

That was so sweet! wub.gif Is it really finished? I can't believe it had to finish but you finished it perfectly. Please write a squel! smile.gif

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P.S. Try to use spell checker next time because I pick up a few mistakes!
MoogleGirl
its so finished.
no, im not making another fic. But im happy you liked it!
Ginny Winter
That was really good! But I noticed some punctuation errors and spelling errors. Well, it was just...really good! I loved how you fit their parents in there and both of Prongs; friends...really nice!

Reg
MoogleGirl
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But I noticed some punctuation errors and spelling errors.


Heh, your forgetting Im the queen of sucking at spelling! laugh.gif I admit it. But thanks for reading, all of you!
krisiebug88
very romantic. wub.gif I like your fan fic and others about James and Lily because there sort of a mystery ph34r.gif Good job I hope you write more fan fics about James and Lily . Your a really good writer. cool.gif
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