So how is my fic?

Hey, thats a great fanfic and I look forward to the next chapter...or the first chapter since that was the prologue So Snape is on it and is evil after all eh?

I suggest at the end of every chapter you also include the link to the feedback page...

Yes, it's a great start to the story. I'm suprised Voldemort is going to attack the Muggles at the same time as the Ministry, with wizards no less. Thought he might send some giants or something, but apparently he has something up his sleeve.

I can't wait to see how this attack goes, I wonder if the defense people will notice them in time to set up anything...

As I said, it's a great start, and I hope the next chapter is up soon so we can see what'll happen .

Hello El Barto and Voldemorts Seeker, and thank you for your feedback
Now I'll answer some of your questions.


First and foremost, El Barto, you'll learn who's side Snape is on later in the story.
Secondly, Voldemorts Seeker, Voldemort has got the giants ready for his campaign. And as for the thing up Voldy's sleeves, well just think of a creature what's invisible to muggles (but not to their technology).

Bah, I was trying to figure out those invisible things. I was just wild guessing, things like Thestrals, I had completely forgotten about Dementors. I hope the Order is there or something, or it looks like Harry's soul is about to be food for the dementors! No way he can hold hundreds off.

Great chapter, seems like the action is picking up and the story is going smoothly. I was about to say how did Dudley see the dementors, but then I saw your little note

Thanks for more of your feedback El Barto and Voldemorts Seeker and now I'll answer Voldemorts Seeker's questions.

First and foremost, the Order won't be in the story for a while yet.
And secondly, only a dozen dementors will attack him (the majority of Dementors will go for the muggle civilians).


The next chapter will be called 'Chaos', and in this chapter the attacks on the Muggle World will begin (and we'll see if Harry can fend off the Dementors and can escape Little Whinging with the Dursleys).

Someone killed Ms. figg! She was just about to make it out safe too. Stupid Death Eaters, AKing everyone they see. Now they won't know about it for a long time =\.

wow this is good ive got a few questions, howd they get vernon in the car?, Why figgy, or maybe just her cat died?, And now can that death eater go to Grimmauld place, since the fires already started?

nice one tho

Hi hp6 and Voldemorts Seeker! And thank you for your feedback!



Now I'll answer hp6's questions:

this new chapter is really well thought out, i think that it is one of the best yet actually

thanks for answering the other questions, the mrs figg one- i just wanted to know why you had figgy die, i liked her

but in this one, i think you definitly have the right idea with the higher up de's such as Yaxely, but would voldemort let his de's call anyone but himself 'lord'?

Well, I don't think Voldy would mind one of the fresh new DEs calling a higher ranking member Lord, as this was the structure in pretty much any hierarchy ever made, even by tyrants.

I wonder just how many places the DEs are going to hit up. I bet they are going to destroy just as much as they can before the night is over. And Harry better look out, it looks like a giant just forcefully stopped the car! No simple Conjunctivitus curse to the eyes is going to get them out of this one!

Well, I'm both happy and sad at the moment.


I'm happy because my fic got accepted on Fanfiction.net! But I'm sad because my fic got rejected on Schnoogle (apparently the grammar wasn't good enough).



Anyway, thank you for the feedback hp6 and Voldemorts Seeker!

Who posted terrible?

Hi Three Marks I've read your story and I'm anxiously excited to see how Harry saves the Dursleys from the erupting chaos. Also, I like how you're displaying different views of the war which is quite important and may I throw a bone of a theory? Perhaps Harry has to escape the giants, DE and the Dementors by using Side-Alone Apparition-it'll be very difficult I think.

Hmm, so Muggle satelittes detect Dementors? Neat! Do the Muggles have a means to counter a Dementor's powers? In canon they don't but remembering back I hope the Muggles find a way to combat an invisible force.
Very good start Field, keep up the good work and don't let a lone voice of dissent get you down.

this one was very well written, i think the dissapearnce factor will really come into play, and i cant wait for other cities to take over, I hope the order gets there

just one negative, well no not a negative actually,
your first posts had more details, i was just wondering if this one was a bit rushed, or you couldnt give details without giving away a plot? just wondering.

great job though

Thanks for the feedback Tuitus and hp6!

Woah there, calm down Jamie. I'm sorry for the tardiness; I haven't had a chance to fully read your most recent chapter.

Now that General Sir Apollo has been alerted of the situation, he's immediately traveling to MOD. Is MOD a command center for Supernatural Plan Delta to be initiated?

Is it best for Harry and Dudley to hide at this point, Disapparate or wait for the calvary to arrive?

Well done Three Marks and thanks for the hyperlinks explaining awards/chivalry too.

Hey Field Marshall, your story is coming along great! Sorry I haven't posted since your first chapter, I didn't realize you had updated!

I think I used to know what MOD meant, but maybe it means something completely different here? Are the supernatural beings the Death Eaters or the dementors (I know the Death Eaters took over the town right?). Hopefully Vernon and Petunia are all right...okay...maybe a little banged up...

Keep up the good work!

Not getting feedback can be daunting because of the uncertainty and everything...but rest assured you have at least one fan.

Jeez, this marks my 911th post...

Who was the second person who posted terrible?
If you believe my story is that bad then please say why.

We've seen all this destruction and chaos caused by the Death Eaters, where are the Order members and Aurors during all this?

What are the Muggles planning? Is MOD something having to do with combatting magic?

I'm worried about Yaxley since they keep calling him 'Lord', perhaps Voldemort would take him out because of it? Well, maybe I'm not worried, but interested to see what would happen to him if Voldemort found out he was being refered to as 'lord Yaxley'.

Keep up the good work!

Sorry Field Marshall, I read that, but I guess I didn't connect it with anything (which is wierd that I woud do that since this is a war we're talking about!). Or maybe I'm thinking too hard on what the 'good' side of the wizarding world will do in response. Though I don't remember why I asked...because it was right there Perhaps what I meant was the plan or unit called MOD, sounds secret, and sorry if it is really something real

the last post was real good, i am finally getting the hang of the names, and the story is exciting, real good job!

M.O.D.- that is real right? Its the Ministry of Defense, right? not a plan? cause if its not the Ministry of Defense what kind of plan is it? weird...

nice fic tho

Nice edition Field Marshall! I'm also starting to understand the names, its just kind hard if you're not around it a whole lot. How could they forget about the royal family?

I'm also sorry for the whole MOD thing!

Hey Jamie

I enjoyed the last couple of chapters, Apollo is a great leader. Yet he forgot about the Royal Family! Is it too late?

I'm anxious to read what happens with Surrey, London and of course Harry alongside his cousin. Keep up the good work and ignore naysayers that don't offer constructive criticism.