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because i wrote it, i think its great. and the "ditto" part? it was just a phase....itll pass, dontcha worry kids.

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Why, hello there, Violet....What an awesome story!! It was so good! I love how you wrote Krum's accent, it was very believable, and the story itself was just so realistic. rolleyes.gif santa.gif I think it's good that Ron and Hermione get back together in the end. It was really well done, that last bit. And I like how Ginny is so bossy.

what larks. Oh, how I laughed. (I am polishing my badge. my badge of joy. and pride.) (How do you polish paper?) kiss.gif Evie cool.gif
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hey i think its great! i'm a little new to this so sorry if i did something wrong. please don't hate me!!
write more please! BYE
Anglophile92
Hey, that was pretty good! I liked how Ron "tried" to hide his feelings. And I also like how at the end all the Gryffindors clapped. That was brilliant! Is it one-shot? ...It probably is....
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