Please leave your reviews here. I'm happy (well maybe not happy, but certainly willing) to listen to any suggestions. Even if they aren't to nice.

i really enjoyed your story. I felt it to be very powerful, and it seems to give reasons for Tom's evil acts later on. I found it neat that Tom realized that he could do , see, understand different things than the other kids, and i absolutley loved how Dennis and Any were portrayed, an orphan who still hopes of the return of his father, and an orphan who was left alone, classic, and used before, but they worked very well.

bloody brilliant...you portrayed the characters very well, i loved it...bravo.