read Those Who Win HERE


I hope someone likes it

I can't say that I like it right now, but once you put a few more chapters up I think it will get better. The story line is just a bit off for me. Maybe if you explained what the story is about I would have understood the chapter better.......

thanks for the comment

I know that post was a short one, but I've put a new one up now that's better length wise. The story is about Harry's grandfather...grandparents.. in school. Please let me know if I get anything wrong in plot or character names... but I don't think JK has ever talked about Harry's grandparent's names, so I chose the give Harry a namesake... his grandfather. It's going to be a long story, it's only early in the 1900's.